User talk:MFTP Dan/2018 Archives
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Hello there!
Got a question about my edits, or yours? Need PR or FAC suggestions? Go ahead, make a new section. I don't do GA reviews unless a review of something is offered in return; any others I do are solely my prerogative. You can see any nominations or discussions I have open at the bottom of this page.
"Never underestimate stupid people in large numbers." ~dannymusiceditor's Dad
Thanks for correcting me earlier btw, thanks! HersheyBearFan (talk) 02:01, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Evanescence
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Trouted
Whack! You've been whacked with a wet trout. Don't take this too seriously. Someone just wants to let you know that you did something silly. |
You have been trouted for signing your edit on Post Traumatic EP. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 18:29, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
NF (rapper)
I normally use the templates, however, Walter removed them first, so I was going with that because it's not a requirement we use them. Ss112 21:39, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
Request for comment
Hey there. I've started a request for comment that you might be interested in – feel free to have your say when you get a chance. Thanks. 4TheWynne(talk)(contribs) 04:47, 6 February 2018 (UTC)
Edits to Definitely Maybe
Those sources are reliable, because they do in have interviews with people who worked on the album, including Anjuli Hutt, so you may have sent this to me by mistake. 203.221.15.210 (talk) 04:43, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
- Hmm. They're definitely unconventional, but seem to carry some degree of credibility. My apologies. I was quite suspicious of the integrity of the guy who made it in the first place, as this isn't something you see on WP all the time. My apologies. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 04:49, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
Bring Me the Horizon
Hello:
The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Bring Me the Horizon has been completed.
I did find two issues that I wanted to draw to your attention.
In the ‘’Suicide Season’’ section the following appears:
"Bring Me the Horizon recorded their second studio album, Suicide Season, in Sweden with producer Fredrik Nordström. He was unimpressed with their first album and was initially absent from the recording sessions unless he needed to be there. Nordström later heard the new sound they were experimenting with during a recording session and became very involved in the record."
This could use further explanation, if possible. It sounds as though the record label assigned Nordström to produce the album, he had no interest in doing so and left them to do whatever they wanted. Then he heard something he liked. This needs some "fine tuning" because as it reads now it doesn’t quite make sense.
In the Image and legacy section: "Their third album (2010's There Is a Hell...) was seen as a significant turning point in altering public perception of the band."
You’ll see I’ve added a why? tag to this sentence because this also needs further explanation.
Good luck with the GAN when you get to it.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Regards,
Complete
Hello, MFTP Dan. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for +44 (band) at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Thinker78 (talk) 04:22, 17 February 2018 (UTC) |
(I hope this is not a "talk back" template, I don't know which one is it) I couldn't determine what the Bibliography subsection in the article means, if it is a general reference or if it is "further reading". Thinker78 (talk) 04:22, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
Request
Hi! I was wondering if you could review this new article I created and do some copyediting on it? I would really appreciate that.--◂ épine talk♬ 08:28, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
@Épine: I keep forgetting to reply to this. It looked of questionable notability when you first messaged me; it now looks like it definitely has enough, even if not a whole ton of it. Good job so far. Got any song recommendations? Always love hearing new hard rock. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 03:40, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
- From Wild Fire? Definitely, check Villain and Not An Option from Revolt. Maybe check their other songs out as well, they're sick.--◂ épine talk♬ 09:47, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
"Creep" (TLC song)
Hello:
The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article "Creep" (TLC song)) has been completed.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Regards,
Your GA nomination of Evanescence
The article Evanescence you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Evanescence for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Sturmvogel 66 -- Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:41, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
GAR request
Hi Danny. I have been going through the old GA requests. I notice you have been doing a few for music articles. I don't know if any other editors go through these, but given the date on some of themI would guess not very often. You seem like and experienced and competent editor so thought I might try and convince you to do the reassessments yourself. I would recommend going the individual route as community ones can take forever. I have just across Bat Out of Hell III: The Monster Is Loose and Bat Out of Hell II: Back into Hell and agree with you on them being a it of a quote farm. They might be good ones to start with. I can help if needed. AIRcorn (talk) 00:15, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
Hi. You stated in an edit summary that Google Play only gave the track title of "One Track Mind". Erm, I'm seeing all the track titles listed here: [1]. If that source did not show them, I would have removed them before that. Ss112 05:36, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
- I see nothing but "Track [x]", except for the singles and "One Track Mind". dannymusiceditor Speak up! 12:52, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
Hellbilly Deluxe
I added a URL to the citation. Actually, it looks like the citation doesn't directly call Hellbilly Deluxe groove metal/industrial metal. Statik N (talk) 22:48, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
Trouted
Whack! You've been whacked with a wet trout. Don't take this too seriously. Someone just wants to let you know that you did something silly. |
"The Dillinger Escape Plan can't be identified with 'mathcore' because it's a niche genre." -DannyMusicEditor
- That's not a quote. But essentially that's what I'm saying. You can identify them as such, but not right there. Hit me again. dannymusiceditor oops 15:57, 29 March 2018 (UTC)
It's funny how right you think you are and that you can force your own way like you own that page, especially after you're challenging someone who's edited for four years when you've been here what, ten days? You won't win this. dannymusiceditor oops 17:55, 29 March 2018 (UTC)
Talk:Ariana Grande discography
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Loudwire/ETE
FYI, I'm completely fine by this edit. I really just wrote it as more of a placeholder for the reception section, until actual album reviews started coming in, but if you see value in it, I'm fine with keeping it in. Sergecross73 msg me 19:28, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
Colorado Avalanche
Colorado Avalanche, an article that you or your project may be interested in, has been nominated for an individual good article reassessment. If you are interested in the discussion, please participate by adding your comments to the reassessment page. If concerns are not addressed during the review period, the good article status may be removed from the article. AIRcorn (talk) 03:50, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
Devil Without a Cause
Although the sources refer to Bawitdaba as a nu metal song (hence why the article says "associated with" rather than saying it is a nu-metal album), the general consensus is that it is not a nu-metal album. Also, I called your edits vandalism because you repeatedly removed the category "hard rock albums by American artists". Now I am not going to report you to 3RR even though you violated it because I am exhausted since Wikipedia is just a hobby, so I am trying to appeal to you to understand why your edits are wrong rather than engage in edit-warring over something that is not reflected by the sources. The album is basically like Meat Loaf's Monster is Loose where the leading track is considered to be in a nu-metal style but the album as a whole is considered to be hard rock, based on the research I've done. Understood? TheRealBoognish (talk) 04:51, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
- TheRealBoognish, your argument here isn't cutting the mustard here. 3RR is something I occasionally have trouble following, I have a bad habit of discussing in my edit summaries rather than elsewhere, so I guess you have me there, but I don't follow anything else. The song itself was not written to be "associated with" (though nu metal was mentioned around that point somehow); the album exactly was, however. You've fused different parts of the article together. The way it is currently written about the album with the reference provided does appear to be reflected in the sources. Don't just deny it because you don't like that information. Then again it does have only one strong reference so it may not be suitable for the infobox, but I say once again, infobox restraints do not apply to categories. I honestly didn't notice the "American artists" part, I'll fix that.
- Also, your Meat Loaf example doesn't exactly hold enough water. You need more specifics - the article shown there says it was heavily influenced by John 5 (which I suppose is sometimes nu metal), but we need an outside source to say that clearly, not just you and "the research you've done". It does vaguely mention nu metal in that article, but not which parts of it are. Mind showing us that "research you've done"? If it's all your own, it's not allowed. I see you're trying to give me that implication that "The Monster is Loose" it nu metal, but we can't just assume that. You can hold that as your own personal opinion, but looking at that from a Wikipedian POV, we can't say what it is. You are not outside sourcing. I hope you understand - and I hope you didn't just TL;DR us on your talk page - that was meant to be taken quite seriously. dannymusiceditor oops 13:52, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
blink-182 list
@Yeepsi: I was going to take a blink-182 list to FL, but I saw it was delisted in the past. I am new to FLs and am not really sure what they are talking about, but the delisters were pretty confident it could never be a FL. Is that accurate? I will probably go through and get all the citations good and all that anyways, but it would be nice if I could FL it. Kees08 (Talk) 21:58, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Kees08: I would oppose any nomination submitted. The lead is far too short. The old version's lead is a good start, but given that it's dated, you'll need to do even better. Try their discography, or better yet, Evanescence's. I do think it can exist now; more award have been won and/or added to warrant keeping. dannymusiceditor oops 00:16, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- Sounds good, did not mean to imply to submit as-is, it needs work. Just as-worded, the delisting said it could never be one, so I wanted to see if it had a chance before I put a bunch of work into it. I will try it out either way! Kees08 (Talk) 01:28, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
Marilyn Manson
From MMFan96, As the "Error, edit not saved." message comes up on the glam rock chat, I'll say it here. Some references aren't visible due to small loading issues (I assume) on my tablet when I visual edit, so I'll try it on my PC when I get the chance. Also, as you said, we didn't add gothic metal due to very few albums or EPs holding it on their page, so we should also remove alternative metal tbh as the only one of those it holds in the genres is Portrait.
- MarilynMansonFan96, to start, thank you for messaging me, but please put newest messages at the bottom of the page. Second, Do so by clicking the "new section" button at the top right, not the "edit" button. Third, good job indicating who sent this, but the best way to do this is by using four tildes (~'s) to create an automatic signature. Fourth, well, I don't know about that. We could deprioritize it, but it's heavily cited, and we don't want to add too many genres. You see, other editors, myself included, find gothic rock and gothic metal together in an infobox like Manson's to be superfluous, especially in an already crowded box. Fifth, you may have tried to add "blacklisted" links, which have been banned from use here because they are grossly unreliable. dannymusiceditor oops 12:44, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Deprioritize it, maybe. MarilynMansonFan96 (talk) 00:10, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
- Deprioritize what or which item? You're going to need to be more specific. I'm confused. dannymusiceditor oops 01:03, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
Alternative metal. Btw, how's this link in listing the band glam rock in the musical style section and getting glam rock to 3 links? http://somethingelsereviews.com/2015/01/29/marilyn-manson-mechanical-animals/ MarilynMansonFan96 (talk) 16:37, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
So, did you check the link? MarilynMansonFan96 (talk) 07:51, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
- I've looked at it. I've not yet confirmed whther or not it is reliable, I have my doubts. dannymusiceditor oops 13:54, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
When an article is redirected then recreated, the redirect shouldn't be restored per Wikipedia:Deletion by redirection and WP:BRD. If a deletion by redirection is disputed, an attempt should be made on the talk page to reach a consensus before restoring the redirect. Also, whether or not the charting song is his own work or a featured work is irrelevant on Wikipedia. A charting song is a charting song and it is also credited to the featured artist. Please attempt to discuss next time before restoring redirects that are obviously disputed. KingAndGod 06:04, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Tell that to every single other editor who took the same action. I'm not alone. And yes, how he charted does matter. I'm on mobile now so I can't give a very detailed explanation, but we're not through here. dannymusiceditor oops 14:16, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Deftones you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Mike Christie -- Mike Christie (talk) 14:01, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
Ivan Moody
The dead link you referenced wasn't related to my latest change (Ivan Moody's birthday). I'm going to remove it and revert back to my changes. The only thing I can find online that gives a definitive age is an article about his arrest in Australia, as well as aggregator sites like MyLife (which I don't like to cite). I have seen nothing that says he was born in 1980, so I am not sure where that came from. Sonderweg (talk) 01:46, 18 May 2018 (UTC)Sonderweg
- Then that is my mistake. You said sites, as in plurals. Show me some more of these references. dannymusiceditor oops 03:32, 18 May 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Calculating Infinity
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Your GA nomination of Me & the Rhythm
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Are you kidding?
One reference to "it's going to be released" with tour dates, helps the album meet WP:NALBUM. You're at three reverts (as am I). So perhaps a discussion is in order. Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:12, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- It's not there yet. I'm working on it. Jeez, give it a bit. There are surely sources now that the article's been out 3 months. What's there now is irrelevant to what's about to be. If I find nothing, I will revert my actions. dannymusiceditor oops 01:14, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- Are you kidding me? There's nothing there. You should check if there are source before you start an edit war. Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:21, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- See, I've already found a few: [2][3][4] I've used all these sites before on quality articles. Though I must say I was surprised the AMG had nothing on them. dannymusiceditor oops 01:25, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- Id idn't see the first one, and it's good. The others aren't. Take it to the AfD. Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:28, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- See, I've already found a few: [2][3][4] I've used all these sites before on quality articles. Though I must say I was surprised the AMG had nothing on them. dannymusiceditor oops 01:25, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- Are you kidding me? There's nothing there. You should check if there are source before you start an edit war. Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:21, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
I Am Human (album)
Hi. I came across I Am Human (album) as I looked at pages for WP:NPP. I have reverted back to the redirect as there doesn't seem to be a clear establishing of notability that the guidelines require. I see from this page that you're an experienced editor, and have gone through the GA process so I am not doubting that this album is notable but simply ask you include citations to that effect when (re)making the article. If you wish to talk further please ping me here or leave a message on my talk page. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 01:23, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- I see our messages crossed paths. For ease let's continue the conversation here. Of course it's fair to say you're working on a page. However, owing to the age ofthe article if you make the page go live it is automatically indexed by Google. Rather than incrementally editing the album page, I'd encourage you to do so via sandbox and then bring it over, notability citations in tact, live. I would ask that you take not I'm the second NPP patroller to make a similar sort of request of you today. I don't doubt your area knowledge or Wikipedia knowledge - I'm just asking that you cross the notability threshold early in your authoring process. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 01:27, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- If you insist. Your point is good, but I always thought it inconvenient to do that....my sandbox is full of all sorts of junk from different articles, some not even English language, LOL. dannymusiceditor oops 01:30, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Calculating Infinity
The article Calculating Infinity you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Calculating Infinity for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Cartoon network freak -- Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:02, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
Re: Date formats
Hi Danny, see this part of the Manual of Style that says: "Articles on topics with strong ties to a particular English-speaking country should generally use the date format most commonly used in that nation." The key phrase there is "English-speaking country" None of the mainland European nations are English-speaking countries (i.e. they don't have English as an official language), so editors can use whichever date format they like when writing articles related to these places. Changing the date format willy-nilly is not on, however, and the initial date format is generally retained. Graham87 14:36, 31 May 2018 (UTC)
- But doesn't that create problems with consistency? I would think that all albums relating to one artist (i.e. Opeth) should all be the same? dannymusiceditor oops 14:49, 31 May 2018 (UTC)
- Nope. There's nothing in the guidelines that says that all articles of a certain type that has nothing to do with a particular English-speaking country should have the same date format. Graham87 07:05, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Calculating Infinity
The article Calculating Infinity you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Calculating Infinity for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Cartoon network freak -- Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:21, 31 May 2018 (UTC)
Fightstar genre's
Hi there my name is Adam I'm not a signed up member of Wikipedia yet and I'm trying to add genre's to Fightstar's repertoire because as a major fan of theirs for many years now I feel as though it is worth pointing out that they're so much more then merely a Post-hardcore or Emo band which so many of Wikipedia's links would lead people to believe. They're above all an Alternative Rock and experimental rock band because they constantly evolve and try out new territories and on occasions have even taken progressive elements and added them to their sound. Yes there's no denying that Post-hardcore and an alternative variant of Metal are their most commonly associated genre's but to not include their eclectic range of other genre's which exhibits their versatility does them a great disservice, at least if you ask me. Perhaps you should actually try listening to all of their material front to back over the last 13 years of their career before assuming I don't know what I'm talking about and need some kind of reliable source of justification before you can approve the edits I've been making, if you want a source all you need to do is listen to them for yourself. If you don't think tracks like Follow Me Into The Darkness or The Whisperer warrant more then just being pigeonholed as Post-hardcore or worse still Emo then I really cannot help you!
Kind Regards - Adam — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.219.115.63 (talk) 14:48, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
- 2.219.115.63 I've told you twice to stop. What you are doing is not acceptable behavior. Your point of view must be kept neutral and you must rely on sources outside what you think. By editing these genres arbitrarily and using the mentality of "if you want a source all you need to do is listen to them for yourself", you are doing the exact opposite. Please stop.
- Also, you see that green marker at the top right of the page? That means it's ranked a quality article or "good article". I was responsible for that. I re-wrote almost the whole article about a year and a half ago now. I looked for sources on this shit. Unfortunately, the media are the ones who have done them a disservice and I can't help that. Besides, I agree with everything listed there now except emo, but I was requested to add it in based on other sources provided by another editor.
- You need to look deeper into the article and see where I've cited these genres. It is in the style and influences section. The infobox is not meant to be a tell-all on their entire style.
- Now, if you find me more sources, by all means let me know and I'll add them in should they be reliable. Also, I've listened to every last scrap of their material. I agree with the genres you add, but I can't let them stay. I have to keep Wikipedia clean. dannymusiceditor oops 14:59, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
Fightstar Talk Section
Hi Danny,
Some interesting discussion going on in the Fighstar talk section in regards to our editing debate. All there for when you need.
Thanks for your patience with this.
The article Deftones you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Deftones for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Mike Christie -- Mike Christie (talk) 00:21, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
PR for Fawad Khan
Hi Danny, I've recently requested a PR for the article Fawad Khan (see here). It'd be an honour for me if you consider reviewing it. Thanks. Amirk94391 (talk) 16:50, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
- I'll do my very best, but I'm not very knowledgeable on the subject. dannymusiceditor oops 16:59, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
@DannyMusicEditor: thank you so much for reviewing Fawad Khan.I've replied you on PR page. Amirk94391 (talk) 19:05, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Amirk94391: Don't worry. I'm far from done, more will come, but just not right yet. I still have to look over how it's written. dannymusiceditor oops 19:07, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
- @DannyMusicEditor: that was nice of you to say, its good that you want to point out all issues so i don't feel difficulty at FA and yeah I've fixed those issues and replied you on PR page so please check it out.Amirk94391 (talk) 19:51, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- @DannyMusicEditor: hi, since you are reviewing my article so to make things clear I've created a list of references, As of 17:14, 25 June 2018 (UTC) the article has 173 references to these 41 sources:
NOTE: Inside parenthesis is the number of references in the article that links to this source
Daily Pakistan (3), Pakistan Today (6), The Quint (1), Mid Day (1), Hindustan Times (3), iDiva (1), The National (1), Forbes India (1), Deccan Chronicle (3), Gulf News (1), Khaleej Times (1), IBT India (6), Business Recorder (3), The Economic Times (1), The Hindu (1), Filmfare (1), Zee News (3), Firstpost (2), India TV (1), Vogue India (1), Daily News and Analysis (3), Dunya News (2), News18 India (2), SOS Children's Villages (1), India Times (1), Huffington Post India (1), The Express Tribune (39), Dawn (27), The News International (5), Samaa TV (1), Aaj News (2), Geo News (1), ARY News (6), ARY Digital (1), PTV Global (1), Bollywood Hungama (2), Times of India (13), NDTV (6), The Indian Express (13), Zee News (3), Rediff.com (1)
Can you please tell which sources can be objectionable during WP:FA?Amirk94391 (talk) 17:14, 25 June 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Monster (R.E.M. album)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Monster (R.E.M. album) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of JohnWickTwo -- JohnWickTwo (talk) 17:00, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
all hope is gone
the citations are in the musical styles section if you actually read it Davatki (talk) 04:10, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- I saw what you said. And I said the citations you've given aren't good enough. You're insane to think that album's death metal, and it's probably not thrash. That's why those are probably the only existent refs with any coverage at all on them, even if it is poor. A single riff for one song does not make it death, and a few songs which showcased thrash is not enough to call the entire thing thrash. dannymusiceditor oops 04:27, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
Monster copyedit
Hello, MFTP Dan. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Monster (R.E.M. album) at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! good luck with GA and all the best, Miniapolis 13:39, 28 June 2018 (UTC) |
Chroma (album)
Hello:
The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Chroma (album) has been completed.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Good luck with the GAN when you get to it.
Regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 19:14, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
Thank you! dannymusiceditor oops 19:35, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
Another stupid rollbacker misleading reverted with saying "unsourced/undiscussed genre change", but actually, In difference between revisions, the IP added with reference which saying "Caribbean-tinged dancehall banger" in Background and composition section (Line 36, right), and left diff is Much.com article is featured "guest contributor" as a writer (older version as "Brianne James", did not find evidence of editorial oversight or writer credentials for high level sources (e.g. The New York Times)).
p.s. You are encouraged although unusual any pop song article. 183.171.122.236 (talk) 18:19, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
- @183.171.122.236: Why are you dragging me into this? I didn't have anything to do with it. Also, I'm sure they would be fine with the content you added, but being that you replaced already approved content, it will most often be met with a revert. That which was already there was also good. dannymusiceditor oops 19:34, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Monster (R.E.M. album)
The article Monster (R.E.M. album) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Monster (R.E.M. album) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of JohnWickTwo -- JohnWickTwo (talk) 17:01, 15 July 2018 (UTC)
Chimes
- Only a short follow-up. I've been considering looking at the GA for Chimes of Freedom (song) and starting to move it towards a FA nomination. Any possible interest in joining in on the editing? JohnWickTwo (talk) 00:33, 16 July 2018 (UTC)
- Oh boy, a Dylan song? I can try, but can't guarantee I'll be a ton of help - they may scrutinize the work we do on a legend like him further than the typical music article we do, given Dylan's stature in the music world. I don't know a whole lot about him, but I can help fix anything involving writing it. I've watchlisted it. Let me know when you nominate it. dannymusiceditor oops 03:38, 16 July 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for those edits which you did. There's a new section I have added there which you might glance at. Another editor thinks that some of the blockquotes I added might be trimmed by 10% or 20% or something to make them more reader friendly. If you see a trim worth doing, then feel free to trim the blockquotes as needed. JohnWickTwo (talk) 15:01, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- Oh don't worry, I can do a lot more than just fix a redlink. I'll work on polishing the writing of those sections this evening. dannymusiceditor oops 15:08, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- It's becoming my conclusion that there was no 45rpm release of Chimes, and that initially it was eclipsed by some of the other tracks on the LP. That might be useful to add to the article if there was no single released because it was thought by producers to lack the appeal which they saw in some of the other tracks. I assume you're still discounting the use of the Liberty Bell from last week. Maybe a photo can be found of Dylan performing the song at one of his concerts such as this one from the Clinton inauguration where he was singing Chimes here [5]. JohnWickTwo (talk) 05:29, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
- Oh don't worry, I can do a lot more than just fix a redlink. I'll work on polishing the writing of those sections this evening. dannymusiceditor oops 15:08, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for those edits which you did. There's a new section I have added there which you might glance at. Another editor thinks that some of the blockquotes I added might be trimmed by 10% or 20% or something to make them more reader friendly. If you see a trim worth doing, then feel free to trim the blockquotes as needed. JohnWickTwo (talk) 15:01, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
- Oh boy, a Dylan song? I can try, but can't guarantee I'll be a ton of help - they may scrutinize the work we do on a legend like him further than the typical music article we do, given Dylan's stature in the music world. I don't know a whole lot about him, but I can help fix anything involving writing it. I've watchlisted it. Let me know when you nominate it. dannymusiceditor oops 03:38, 16 July 2018 (UTC)
@JohnWickTwo: That is probably the best solution and I thought that was already clear that no single had been released for it. That it eclipsed some others is a reasonable conclusion, but we can't and won't say that without a RS, right? Also, sending a ping because I would like to separate this section from the R.E.M. message for easier access and I don't want you to lose your place. dannymusiceditor oops 14:47, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
- You have my green light for what its worth if the image of Dylan singing Chimes at the Clinton inaugural works for the Infobox in the article. There's no rush and if you know how to bring the image into Wikimedia with the correct rationale, then I will support bringing it into the article. Once its in Wikimedia I'll be glad to post it in the article with caption (or you can do this if you have a good caption for it). The point about identifying the top track on the original LP release seems to point to Chimes being eclipsed by the "It ain't me" track for initial positive fan-based response, which was the closing track of the LP, and which did eventually receive a singles release in multiple intl markets. RS will support saying that "It ain't me" was the main track from the LP to receive a 45 singles release, and that Chimes did not have a 45 singles release from the original LP release. JohnWickTwo (talk) 16:49, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
I interpret your edit as calling me a liar
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=As_I_Lay_Dying_(band)&diff=850926490&oldid=850696375 I believe that you went and looked but clearly missed the note for ever entry that discusses the content as "Separate multiple entries by using commas, {{Flatlist}}, or {{Hlist}}." That note reads "For short horizontal lists of two or three items, comma separators are acceptable, but for longer lists the use of {{Flatlist}} or {{Hlist}} is preferred as they offer a benefit to users of screen readers." I helped craft the documentation so I'm not mistaken. They wanted to enforce lists but they look terrible and so I strongly objected and the note was added for those who agreed with me on this matter. Lists are not required until there are more than three items. Walter Görlitz (talk) 22:29, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
- And for Woven war. I was less gracious in reverting that one. Walter Görlitz (talk) 22:31, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
- @Walter Görlitz: I don't see how that is at ALL possible and I'm confused at how many people agree with you.
- I'm didn't use the word "liar", you can't assume that if I never say that. Using that word on someone, that is WP:BADFAITH. Yes, I egregiously missed it. My apologies. I went and looked at WP:HLIST and WP:FLATLIST and saw nothing on them except for implications. Where is this said documentation? I'm still not finding it. For the record, I hate that decision, and would have supported list enforcement. They make the infobox look more professional and there isn't a single downside I can think of to it, except for these rules conflicting with two different parameters using different listing methods (which makes absolutely no sense). But really, that should be discussed elsewhere. dannymusiceditor oops 01:35, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
- I didn't write that you used the word, I wrote that what I interpreted from what you wrote. Documentation for the {{Infobox musical artist}} is at template:Infobox musical artist. I see the confusion now. You were looking at the documentation for the lists. Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:49, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
- This is a good revert, restoring commas for lists with two or three entries. It's in the infobox instructions. Binksternet (talk) 06:21, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
- Can you please direct me to where I can fin this past discussion so I can take arguments into account before I make another proposal? Also, how old is this discussion? dannymusiceditor oops 13:44, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
FAR
I have nominated Elliott Smith for a featured article review here. Please join the discussion on whether this article meets featured article criteria. Articles are typically reviewed for two weeks. If substantial concerns are not addressed during the review period, the article will be moved to the Featured Article Removal Candidates list for a further period, where editors may declare "Keep" or "Delist" the article's featured status. The instructions for the review process are here. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 16:41, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
RfC request regarding Here (Alicia Keys album)
Can you comment on this RfC? It concerns whether a rather lengthy, quote-filled section should be trimmed or not? TheAmazingPeanuts (talk) 20:56, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
The Black Parade——
Hello:
The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article The Black Parade has been completed.
I spent a lot of time reorganizing the article, finding/updating citations etc... There are still some problem areas I've indicated with "citation needed" tags. The fist part of the "Tour" section is not cited and the main article on the tour is no help; it has no citations at all. I think the article would still pas a GA review.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Twofingered Typist (talk) 15:40, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
- Twofingered Typist, I and the community very much appreciate your effort of going the extra mile. Thank you very much for the update. dannymusiceditor oops 17:28, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
List of grunge bands
Thanks for asking Sergecross73 to move the new article; it was a brilliant idea. Now if any editor has concerns about the listing of a particular band, they can fight it out in the new article without disturbing the stability of the Grunge article. Stability might help deter some of the vandalism we have seen on Grunge lately. In my opinion, Grunge would not pass another Featured Article review, and I doubt it would achieve Good Article status in its current form. It needs some help but there is no rush. William Harris • (talk) • 08:42, 5 October 2018 (UTC)
- It did look an awful lot like a list to me, so naturally, I acted. I also share your concerns about the article's status that it may not be suitable for FA, but we'll work on that. dannymusiceditor oops 14:21, 5 October 2018 (UTC)
Good faith revert
What does 'good faith revert' mean? I'm fairly new. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Keditz (talk • contribs) 22:02, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
@Keditz: I'm aware, and I'm glad you asked. It basically means I understand you're trying to make an earnest effort to improve the article or I understand what you're trying to do, and are listening at least partly to us. That's great. Or, it means you just made an honest mistake and I knew you were trying to help. See WP:AGF for more information.
Some other things to know for talk pages: please either hit the "new section" button at the top right for talk pages, or use the double-equals sign like you'll see when editing this conversation, to make new talk sections. Next, when you send talk page messages, sign your posts. Use 4 ~'s to do that. Sometimes SineBot will do it for you if you forget, but it doesn't always and it's best if you just do it when you post.
If you have any further questions, like those concerning specifically Peep's article or Wikipedia policies and guidelines, feel free to ask me. dannymusiceditor oops 22:14, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
Lil Peep
Please click the link Template: Infobox musical artist#associated_acts. This is the guideline for all musical artist infoboxes. This is a quote from that article, "This field is for professional relationships with other musicians or bands that are significant and notable to this artist's career. This field can include, for example, any of the following:
- For individuals: groups of which he or she has been a member.
- Acts with which this act has collaborated on multiple occasions, or on an album, or toured with as a single collaboration act playing together."
Shemaposse and Gothboiclique fall under the first point, they are groups he was a member of. The rest fall under the second point. Nowhere does it say they need an article to link to. Most of them meet WP: NMUSIC and if I still was as active as I used to be, I would have created articles awhile ago. STATic message me! 05:54, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- I have read that many times. Prove to me that they are if you think they are so notable, eh? They do too need a page; having one here, in theory, is supposed to mean it's notable. And that is exactly, explicitly, what the documentation says that you just gave to me: "...significant and notable to this artist's career." I don't see how you can have any other understanding of that. dannymusiceditor oops 06:00, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
Have you seen the discography on the page? These names are all over it. How can you say the groups he was a member (Sceemaposse and GBC) of did not form a significant and notable part of his career? Is making full projects together as he did with Bexxy, Itsoktocry, OmenXIII, and IloveMakonnen not significant to his career? How? This is literally what the guideline of the template defines as making them notable to his career. As for Yunggoth and Horse head there is countless collaborations I could start linking, but these are listed in the discography, also toured with both, with Yunggoth being a constant presence throughout his career. STATic message me! 06:10, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- ILoveMakonnen is one I am willing to let stay. I am not finding any coverage from reliable sources representing independent coverage on Schemaposse, and a single one, maybe not even, for GBC. Most mentions from reliable sources are brief, usually in articles covering Peep's death. Also, it would appear "Bexxy" is spelled Bexey. I'm seeing maybe two or three max for the individuals you mentioned In order for them to be "significant and notable to the artist's career", those subjects have to be independently notable first. And, since they're evidently not "significant and notable" by themselves, I argue: how can they fulfill that for someone else's notable career (like Peep's)? If you can prove me their notability, then maybe I could be persuaded to let those who released multiple singles with him stay. dannymusiceditor oops 06:41, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- There has been some discussion about this at Template talk:Infobox musical artist/Archive 13#Non-notable artists under associated acts between User:Walter Görlitz and User:A guy saved by Jesus. It may be worth opening a discussion at the template talk. Cheers! Magnolia677 (talk) 18:57, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- Alerted by the link to my name. As long as it's discussed in the article (ideally with sources), any longstanding professional association could be mentioned in the infobox. The documentation doesn't state that the associated act needs to be independently notable. Walter Görlitz (talk) 19:09, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- There has been some discussion about this at Template talk:Infobox musical artist/Archive 13#Non-notable artists under associated acts between User:Walter Görlitz and User:A guy saved by Jesus. It may be worth opening a discussion at the template talk. Cheers! Magnolia677 (talk) 18:57, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
I strongly disagree and think they should absolutely be independently notable. dannymusiceditor oops 20:18, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
AN/I comment
It's perfectly fine to comment on AN/I cases as a non-admin. I see it's your first time except for opening a case back in 2016... It can be addictive though, or so I've heard. ∰Bellezzasolo✡ Discuss 19:47, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
- Yeah, I've read a few and can easily see how some users here could easily turn into dragons that become too powerful and desiring destruction of these people. I prefer a simple "ask this admin to block this guy, next", but in cases like Keditz I suppose it is necessary. dannymusiceditor oops 22:42, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
Would you be willing to weigh in this discussion regarding Tiny Mix Tapes should be count as an reliable source or not. If you want to. TheAmazingPeanuts (talk) 01:09, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
re: your edit summary
Hello friend,
I saw this partial revert in my notifications. Thanks for helping to improve the article. I spent a bunch of time trying to improve that article in the past and it's good to see somebody else taking an interest.
Your edit summary reads "Hold on, you're axeing The Village Voice and Joel McIver over Keyboard? I understand you're going for satisfying WP:OVERCITE but these guys > Keyboard. Partial revert, staying in line with Overcite."
This message left me feeling annoyed. If you would consider reading something to understand why I dislike this, then please check out "No feigning surprise". Your edit summary reads as surprised, and maybe you are genuinely surprised that I could choose such inferior sources to satisfy the Overcite policy, but expressing it this way just makes me feel bad about it. We're both trying to make the article better, so let's avoid putting others down in our edit summaries. Peace! - Phorque (talk) 11:02, 24 December 2018 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, I myself was in a pretty grumpy mood when I made that edit and make my sincerest apologies for that. Merry Christmas. dannymusiceditor oops 17:14, 24 December 2018 (UTC)