Talk:South Africa women's cricket team in England in 2018
Latest comment: 2 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination
South Africa women's cricket team in England in 2018 has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 13, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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Did you know nomination edit
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:31, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
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- ... that the second match of South Africa women's tour of England in 2018 was the first time a women's international cricket match had featured three centuries? Source: "the first women’s game to feature three centuries" (The Guardian)
5x expanded by Harrias (talk). Self-nominated at 20:38, 5 September 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: - in progress
Overall: Interesting hook, and everything looks to be in order. Just waiting on QPQ. (Sidenote: I ought to watch more cricket.) MSG17 (talk) 23:46, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- " 9 – 15 June 2018" should be unspaced. Might be the template, but that needs to be addressed.
- Venue table could use row and col scopes.
- Yeah. Any thoughts on that? I'm not even convinced that I like the table: I added it on a whim to see if it seemed useful. I sort of think it is, and sort of think it isn't. I can't see any realistic way to make it accessible (which isn't actually a GA requirement, but I would prefer to if possible.) Harrias (he/him) • talk 09:16, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- And the map image needs a caption explaining what we're seeing, people unfamiliar with the geography of the UK may not even realise what they're looking at.
- "their tour of England" I would reinforce the subject in this opening para, and say "their 2018 tour of England"
- "May: omitting" strange tense after a colon, perhaps replace with a comma.
- Link wicket-keeper.
- "Brits was suggested" by whom?
- "Syd Egan's preview" who is he and why is his opinion noteworthy?
- "14 player squad" 14-player
- "The first match was .." I'm not sure you've explained/linked WODI in the main body (you did in the lead) so here would be a good chance to do that.
- "played at New Road, Worcester" could add the date here too in the prose (and for each subsequent match).
- "first bowling change" what style of bowling?
- Suné Luus is missing a diacritic here.
- "and Suné Luus inside" linked in the previous para (see point preceding).
- "be caught out by" this means different things to different people, perhaps just "caught" or "caught off the bowling of..."?
- "two balls later" repetitive "balls", maybe deliviries.
- Should link Century (cricket) in both lead and here.
- "were losing regular" regularly losing...
- "hit the wickets" do you mean stumps?
- "also out , stumped" remove first space before comma.
- "were unable to add much to the" did not add
- Notes b and c are fragments so do not need full stops.
- Ref 4: SHOUTING.
- "2017–20 ICC Women's Championship" usage throughout should be "2017–2020 ICC Women's Championship" as MOS has changed a while back for year ranges.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:07, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Cheers, replies above. First couple are outstanding as described. Harrias (he/him) • talk 09:16, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- I think, having added col scopes, and given the images have alt and there's now a label for the map (which I added with the scopes), it's as good as it can be for what it is, and as you say, not GA criterion in any case, so I'm good to go with this. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:28, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
BBC match reports edit
Hi. For info, I found the match reports from the BBC:
Thanks. Lugnuts Fire Walk with Me 12:27, 13 September 2021 (UTC)