Talk:Killing of Shani Louk

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Irruptive Creditor in topic GA Review

This article should be deleted edit

I hope wikipedia's not getting into the business of making articles for all killed people who aren't known for anything other than their death! Gee-wiz! She should be listed in Oct.7 article, nothing more. Tallard (talk) 00:10, 22 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Tallard: there's a clear consensus for the article to remain linked from the talk page header section. VQuakr (talk) 02:01, 22 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Looks like a piece of IDF propaganda. Dominant views change over time. Right now the dominant political voices are pro-genocide. Next year, that could be different. Decisions are not set in concrete. If the idea of deletion is not presently supported by the institutionalists, fine, but we shall continue fighting for the non institutionalist view. If not today, then tomorrow, next month, next year. Tallard (talk) 17:08, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Tallard, please stop with the trolling. Notability isn’t lost with time. The killing of Shani Louk (by terrorists, by the way) is notable for an article. See WP:DEGRADE. RodRabelo7 (talk) 17:39, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
RobRabelo7 your comment goes against the Wikipedia rule of presumption of good faith. Please refrain yourself. Tallard (talk) 17:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sorry for considering your behavior as trolling. RodRabelo7 (talk) 20:44, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
This isn't an article "for" Shani Louk, and she shouldn't be "listed" anywhere. We aren't going to list the names of 364 (music festival) / 766 (the whole of October 7's) civilian casualties. The topic of this event is summarized in two sentences of Re'im music festival massacre. I would support constraining our coverage to only those two sentences if not for other facts in this article, all more-or-less encyclopedic facts, that don't really belong in any other, more general, article; it is this additional information that justifies this being a separate article. If you think I'm wrong in the sense that these other claims in this article, that go beyond the two-sentence coverage in Re'im music festival massacre, are not worthy of inclusion, that they are encyclopedically unsuitable—you could start removing them from this article, and when the content is roughly similar here and there, per WP:SUMMARYSTYLE, It would then be a good time to redirect this article to that article. I am interested in whether you can make a compelling case that specific sentences/paragraphs should be removed. You can make that case by editing the article and explaining things in edit summaries. I might disagree and revert. We would then keep discussing. There is also the WP:MERGEPROP process, which could lead to the same result all on its own (or in combination with the trimming process), and hasn't been tried yet. Maybe SmokeyJoe also has some ideas about trimming this article as a lead-up to redirection/merger; he suggested redirection as the most desirable outcome in the last deletion review, and the closer of that deletion review said that that the proposal from SmokeyJoe deserves due consideration but this will need to be done editorially. So, I don't know, let's see if it can be done editorially, i.e. if a step-by-step editorial process can prove that redirection is the best outcome for the encyclopedia.—Alalch E. 19:37, 23 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Alalch, if an upmerge proposal happens, I will certainly vote for it. A long time ago I put in a great effort in learning Wikipedia rules, and it was a horrible editing experience, and I will never again waste so much of my life arguing with people existing on a completely different plain of nobility. I now limit myself to an occasional "talk" here and there. So I'll "follow" this page, and await the eventual fix. Thank you. Tallard (talk) 17:52, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes, there is a case for merging of victims, but it is not urgent. This person was subject to coverage. The important question long term is whether coverages continues. There is no case for deletion. SmokeyJoe (talk) 22:06, 11 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Add AP photo prize fallout edit

Please add the political fallout of the AP freelance photojournalist winning a prize, the "Team Picture Story of the Year" International Award, for an image of Hamas parading Shani Louk's body. This was awarded by the Donald W. Reynolds Journalism Institute at the Missouri School of Journalism.

AP even posted a self-congratulatory message about this but has deleted it due getting blowback. This WP article is also missing the name of the photojournalist even though the article uses the reviled photo. The photo of Louk's body being displayed was taken by freelancer Ali Mahmud and captioned in part: "Palestinian militants drive back to the Gaza Strip with the body of Shani Louk, a German-Israeli dual citizen, during their cross-border attack on Israel, Saturday, Oct. 7, 2023."

Sources: [1], [2],[3], [4], and [5]

2601:19E:427E:5F90:140E:3AC1:9FA3:21A9 (talk) 22:34, 29 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Killing of Shani Louk/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

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Nominator: Alalch E. (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Irruptive Creditor (talk · contribs) 05:14, 30 March 2024 (UTC)Reply


Passed Good Article Nomination edit

I believe this article has passed its Good article nomination. I reclassified it from the law category and into an appropriate one, culture. Otherwise, I reasonably believe it meets good article criteria. This is how the article, as of March 29, 2024, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: Yes  
2. Verifiable?: Yes  
3. Broad in coverage?: Yes  
4. Neutral point of view?: Yes  
5. Stable?: Yes  
6. Images?: Yes  

The basis for my conclusion is as follows:

  1. First, the article is fairly well-written and I believe that a reasonable person could understand both the topic and its related topics. From what I read, it states an Israeli-German tattoo artist was believed to have been killed in massacre, multiple sources indicate the massacre was perpetrated by members or affiliates of a group known as Hamas, it had been reported that social media users shared video footage of what is believed to be her final moments, it was unknown for a while as to whether she had actually been killed, later forensic analysis of the scene deduced that the death of this person had likely occurred, the family was devastated, and this person's death pertains to a wider conflict going on between Israel and Palestine.
  2. Second, the information is verifiable to a reasonable degree. There are well-reputed sources (as established by current Wikipedia talk on perennial sources). Such sources include Der Spiegel, The New York Times, Washington Post, The Guardian, etcetera. Most of the sources are of either European or American origin. However, references to Indian, Israeli, and Japanese news media also appear. There are a minutia of suspect or unsatisfactory sources like Ynet (never heard of it) and such, yet an insurmountable majority of the referenced sources are fairly reputable.
  3. Third, while this article is about a now-deceased person and features a great deal discussion about them, it nonetheless is broad enough to weave in discussion about major questions of international policy and concern. It discusses this woman's death in relation to a regional conflict in the Middle East.
  4. Fourth, this article appears to be reasonably stable, I undertook a cursory look and could find no glaringly obvious hallmarks of edit warring or sockpuppetry. No massive flood of reverted edits by multiple editors (however, multiple edits by one user, Got Milked were reversed, but this appears to be a lone case and not indicative edit-warring), no torrent of IP users with similar ranges ricocheting around, etcetera.
  5. Fifth, despite the claims of one user, Tallard, on the talk page, I uncovered nothing to substantiate the allegation that this article is "IDF propaganda". For the little it mentions of Israel, the article seems criticize (Israeli) President Isaac Herzog for associating with a tabloid magazine.
  6. Sixth, it has images, or rather just one. However, the image is of fair quality and I don't believe this article would benefit from more.

I would like to congratulate all the editors who've contributed to this article.

Irruptive Creditor (talk) 06:32, 30 March 2024 (UTC)Reply