Talk:Samuel Lander

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron talk 21:54, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Lander c.1873–74
Moved to mainspace by PCN02WPS (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.

PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 19:23, 10 October 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline source accepted AGF, no copyio obvious. Sorry I find both hooks not what would interest me about his life, and the second lacks any bold link to his name. The image is licensed and gives a good idea of not only him but his era. How about that he wasn't just some minister with many children, but founder and president of that early place for women's higher education? We women readers would prefer that ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:20, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Gerda Arendt: thanks for the review. I have added ALT2 and ALT3 per your suggestions. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:17, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Thank you, I like those better ;) I could also imagine to combine to one:
ALT2a: ... that Samuel Lander (pictured) founded in an abandoned hotel the Williamston Female College which grew into Lander University? - Good luck with the GAN! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:25, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Samuel Lander/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 19:00, 10 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 22:29, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply


With the Internet Archive being down this seems to be a good one to review. Not too many archive links.

@It is a wonderful world: thanks for such a speedy review! I think this might be the quickest I've ever had an article go from being published to a GA review. Everything has been addressed or responded to below. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:09, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Since it was quite a short interesting article that didn't use any IA links it was a good evening job. Thank you for writing it! It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:55, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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now known as Lander University, in 1872 and was [served as] its first president: Nitpicky points for conciseness and precision, since it is the first sentence.

Makes sense. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

After becoming a Methodist minister in 1866, he got [his] first position in administration

Early life and education

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Lander enrolled at Randolph–Macon College, in Ashland, Virginia, in 1849 and graduated at the top of his class on June 10, 1852. He earned a Master's degree from Trinity College—now Duke University—in 1855: What exactly did he study?

Career

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a civil engineer and a surveyor

Wikilink "civil engineer"

He went on to teach [at the] Olin Institute in Olin, North Carolina: Link Olin Institute?

Link "Lincolnton Female Seminary"?

to take charge of the Methodist circuit: I'm a little unsure what the "Methodist circuit" is. Is it a group of Methodist churches? Also, could you be more specific than "take charge" here?

  • I was also unsure of the exact meaning of this - I was hesitant to change the wording because basically every source uses the term "circuit". My guess was the same as yours, a group of Methodist churches, but I wasn't sure enough to change that term. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:08, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

and he became a Methodist minister in 1866: Shouldn't this be "had become" to emphasize it was before being appointed by MECS?

Link "Grace Methodist Church"?

so he and his family begam living in an old hotel: "begam" -> "began" typo, also I think "moved to" would be better than "began living in"

was ready to graduate -> "graduated"

Lander attended the General Conference of the MECS as a delegate in 1890 and 1894: I think this should only be included if the General Conference is notable. If so, redlink?

Lander took this opportunity to grow the school by hiring more faculty members as well: You could change it to "Lander [also] took" if you want to emphasize the meaning added by "as well". It flows much better in my opinion.

Personal life and death

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Lander was a polyglot and was fluent in French, Gaelic, German, Ancient Greek, Hebrew, Italian, and Latin: I feel woefully uneducated only speaking English now...

Link "Constructed language"

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Reliability  Y

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Sources are from government websites, historical books and a few letters to fill in the details. All look reliable.

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[1a Y, b Y]

[1c]: Says he studied civil engineering, not that he was paid for it as "began his career" implies.

[7a, b]: Could you cite more specifically than the whole Lander University collection on him?

Ah you are right! I just dismissed that popup thing without even reading it as I assumed it would be a cookie notice or something irrelevant haha It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:48, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

[12] Y

[13]: The source says "[Lander] deemed that three of the initial 38 students were ready for graduation" which has been reworded as "assessed students' progress individually with school administration determining when each student was ready to graduate". The text only gives one instance of Lander deciding when students were ready to graduate, but this gives the impression that it was an established practice of the "school administration".

  • I based that generalization on this line: One of Samuel Lander's convictions was that graduation depended on individual preparation and examination, ... - I figured that the 3/38 number was just an example of this given by the author. If you've got a suggestion as to how to better represent this I'd be open to it. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:08, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
That justification makes sense, I think it's a reasonable assumption. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:49, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

[8a]: I can't find support for the text, searching for 1859 provides nothing. Am I missing something?

[1d, 9] Y

[1e, 1f] Y

[2] and [3] aren't working due to IA being down unfortunately, and [4] is giving me a 403 error.

That's strange! It is still 403 for me. I won't worry about checking it, you provided the main part I wanted to check anyways. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:53, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

I especially want to check [4] because it is used to support him being fluent in French, German, Spanish and Hebrew, whereas [1] says he could only read those languages, not speak them. Is the site working for you?

  • Here's the quote that I used for that: He felt he did not deserve this degree unless he could read the Bible in its original languages, so he began learning Hebrew at the age of 45. By the end of his life, Lander was fluent in German, French, Italian, and Gaelic in addition to Greek, Latin, Hebrew, and, of course, English. "This degree" refers to the honorary D.Div. he got from Trinity College. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:08, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Source directly supports the text, no problems here. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:57, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

[1g]: Doesn't support that the day of his marriage (December 20)

  • Changed to [4], which does give the date, On December 20, 1853, Samuel married Laura Ann McPherson who was also the daughter of a Methodist minister.

[1h, 18] Y

[1i] Y

[8b, c, 19] Y

Stable  Y

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Media  Y

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Captions  Y

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Tags  Y

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Suggestions

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Add an image or two of Lander University.

That would be great! I'll pass the article now since this was only a suggestion. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:58, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
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