Talk:Edwin St Hill

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Sarastro1 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 23:02, 25 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

Shall review. Beginning first read-through. More soonest. Tim riley (talk) 23:02, 25 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

I have practically nothing to ask before cutting the tape. These are my few comments:

  • Early life and career
    • I think your readers might like a few words at the very end of the last sentence, just to put into context St H's success: I mean, what sort of opposition was there, touring in those parts?
  • Selection for Test team
    • "was no longer eligible to play cricket for Shannon or Trinidad" – simply not available or disqualified for some reason?
  • Later life and career
  • Style and technique
    • "accuracy of length, swerve and pace makes him an asset" – I know it's in a quote, but did the source really say "makes" rather than "make"?

That's my lot. Clearly of GA standard, in my judgment. A couple of points are made twice, which would attract flak at FAC but nothing to impede GA. If you like to consider the above minor points I'll revisit and observe the GA formalities tomorrow. – Tim riley (talk) 16:37, 26 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review! I think I've got everything. Much appreciated. Sarastro1 (talk) 20:56, 26 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

Overall summary

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    Well referenced.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    Well referenced.
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    Well illustrated.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
    Well illustrated.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

This article does Edwin St Hill proud. It knocks spots off the Crickinfo page and the Wisden obituary. Tim riley (talk) 08:39, 27 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review and kind words. Sarastro1 (talk) 09:50, 27 February 2014 (UTC)Reply