Talk:The Boat Race 1887

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Ritchie333 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Boat Race 1887/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 13:59, 7 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

And here's today's Boat Race GA review

Lead edit

  • "two-and-a-half lengths" - do we need the dashes?
    Hyphens. But removed. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:22, 7 January 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • "The winning time for the race was 20 minutes 52 seconds." - I think "for the race" can probably be trimmed out as it's obvious on context
    I've expanded the lead a little. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:22, 7 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

Background edit

  • "The coaches for Cambridge were Donaldson" - who is Donaldson (first mention in the article)
    Yeah, weird one this, "Donaldson" is referenced as such, no first name, not even a clue as to whether Donaldson was a man or a woman or a dog or a horse. Just plain old Donaldson. So I've gone with the RS. I did do some sniffing around, no results. Sorry about that.... The Rambling Man (talk) 19:22, 7 January 2015 (UTC)Reply
    Oh well, I've dropped a comment in explaining this, so anyone else will know what's going on. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 09:24, 8 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

Race edit

Summary edit