@LainEverliving: – I see you've been working extensively with this article. You'll notice that I removed a number of citations, all to the non-credible ANN Encyclopedia, but I got to reading the article, and I'd like to say your style and writing is very-well done, as well as the organization, but there seems to be a much heavier emphasis on the studio's individual productions and the awards those productions received than is necessary. There's too much in the prose regarding these individual works themselves, and not enough about how they're important to Saru's cultural, historical, or creator-related identity. In that way, it feels like the article is more about these works, rather than the studio itself; in other words, the article stagnates into what I would call being "off-topic." Of course, it's fine to mention all of these works in the prose somewhere, if you'd like, but the amount of content about them, some with little to do with the areas I've mentioned, feel very off-topic. I was wondering if you would be willing to try cleaning that up; it would make for a more Saru-centralized article, which is the goal, as I see it. Sarcataclysmal (talk) 08:19, 12 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
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The result of the move request was: Moved — Amakuru (talk) 01:54, 3 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
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