Talk:Observer (video game)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review


GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 15:29, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • Unless you have some kind of qualifier, like "three months later", you need to repeat the year on "and for macOS and Linux on 24 October."
  • "He can hack people's brain implants with a device known as the Dream Eater, for interrogation purposes.[1][4][5][6][7][8]" Do we need six citations for one sentence? WP:OVERCITE seems to apply here.
  • "a Cracovian detective" Time to link Krakow here, not the section below. Also, why are you using such an unusual spelling of the city's name, is it what the game uses?
It is simply a variation fo the word. Cognissonance (talk) 16:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • "He awakes realising he has been hacking into the murdered Jack's neural implant but cannot recall plugging into it. Daniel follows a trail of the killer's blood to the attic, where he is ambushed and knocked unconscious." He falls asleep before being knocked unconscious?
Rewrote to clarify. Cognissonance (talk) 16:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • "although visual effects looked" Although the visual effects"