Talk:Kathy Mattea

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Wcomm in topic Who's Gonna Know

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Esprit15d (talk · contribs) 15:16, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

I just completed a peer review of this article and then noticed is was a GA nom. If you address this part:

In this sentence, "Between the end of the 1980s and beginning of the 1990s, Mattea began touring as a headliner for the first time, in addition to performing on the Grand Ole Opry," these are things you do on a single occasion, not over time. So it should be something like, "In May of 1985, she began touring as a headliner and performing at the Grand Ole Opry." Either that, or take out "began." In the phrase "an all-star rendition," all-star feels POV.

...then I'll pass it.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 15:16, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • @Esprit15d: I couldn't find an exact date for the headliner/Opry sentence. I changed "all-star" to "multi-artist". Ten Pound Hammer(What did I screw up now?) 15:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • I would have been fine with you just taking out the word "began," but either way, it's fixed. I'll pass the article. I'll also fix the reference formatting when I get a chance, but that shouldn't hold up the GA status.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 16:03, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

Who's Gonna Know edit

In Personal Life, first paragraph, the list of songs written by Vezner does not include "Who's Gonna Know". In the wikipedia article about the album Walking Away a Winner (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walking_Away_a_Winner) he is listed as the writer of that song. Should that song be added to this list?Wcomm (talk) 17:48, 24 January 2018 (UTC)Reply