Talk:Tsui Wah Restaurant

Latest comment: 4 years ago by DoubleGrazing in topic Needs overhaul

Standard of English

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The standard of English in this article is very low, to the point where it is quite hard to understand some points. There are also a lot of unsubstantiated claims made. 86.135.1.5 (talk) 10:30, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Needs overhaul

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The bulk of the article is written like it was taken from the company literature. This article needs to be overhauled so that it appears as what a third or neutral party observes on the History and the Notability of the chain. It also needs an infobox. A "Media appearances" section would be useful if it shows up in a lot of films or television shows. Celebrities who visit isn't particularly notable unless covered by media, like if it's some actor's favorite hangout. Once the article's cleaned up, you can resubmit this for copyediting. -AngusWOOF (talk) 17:14, 5 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I was going to take this to AfD, but seeing as it's been decided to keep before, I guess I should just bite the bullet and edit it. I'll put it on my to-do list... -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:36, 6 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
Okay, I've taken a stab at it, cutting out most of the promo blurb and peacock fluff. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:31, 6 September 2020 (UTC)Reply