Talk:Speak Now World Tour – Live

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sebbirrrr in topic GA Review
Good articleSpeak Now World Tour – Live has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 15, 2022Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 8, 2022.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Taylor Swift said that her first live album, Speak Now World Tour – Live, was meant to capture what she wanted to "show [...] my kids and my grandkids"?

Expansion edit

Here's credits and a review from Allmusic.

Here is a review from Roughstock.

This might help from Taste of Country.com

Hope this'll help expand it. This is all I can find for now. User talk:RickyBryant45324 02:35, 24 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Speak Now World Tour – Live/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 18:21, 27 September 2022 (UTC)Reply


Placeholder.

Infobox and lead edit

  • Use bullet points instead of {{plainlist}} for the length
  • "is a live album" → is this Swift's first, second, third, etc. live album?
  • "DVD or Blu-ray" → shouldn't it be "and" instead of "or"?
  • "save for two" → not sure what this is supposed to mean
  • "save for" means "except"; it is a vocabulary used in the Slant article. Ippantekina (talk) 15:15, 6 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • The sentence describing the tracks is quite long, try to split it
  • "was supported by" → from the way it is worded it suggests that "Long Live" was released to promote the album
  • "Brazilian singer-songwriter" → I recommend sticking with just "Brazilian singer" as it doesn't seem Fernandes is known for being a singer-songwriter
  • "has sold 368,000 copies" → as of?
  • "additionally entered the top 30 on charts in Australia—where it was certified triple platinum by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA), Canada, and Japan." → try to reword, it sounds like it was also certified in Australia by Canada and Japan (?)

  Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Background and release edit

  • Ref 7 doesn't state that the album was released in Asia (maybe only in India?)
  • Not sure how ref 8 states that it was released in Europe

  Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Content edit

  • Keefe's comment sounds more like a (critical) review of the album

  Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception edit

  • "found the CD rather typical" → I think "typical" should be in quotes
  • "but said that "Ours" was disappointing" → McDonnell found "Ours"'s performance disappointing, not the song itself
  • In the context of the live album I think mentioning "Ours" suffices as its live recording. Ippantekina (talk) 15:15, 6 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • According to the ref, Carlos Olivares Baró is the reviewer for Notimex

Commercial performance edit

  • Saying that peaked within the top 30 is enough, the peaks don't have to be put in brackets

  Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Charts edit

  • The ref for Japan's peak position is dead
  • Not sure why the songs's chart performance is included here as they can be found at Taylor Swift singles discography instead

  Not done The chart performance table for the songs should be removed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Release history edit

  • Shouldn't there be one of these as it was released for different formats?

  Done

Certifications edit

  • Shouldn't the heading say Certifications for Speak Now World Tour – Live ?

  Not done Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

References edit

  • Copyvio at 46.2% but that's because of the album's credits. However, I recommend trimming Keefe's quote down as it sits at 37%
  • Source check: 3, 7, 8, 9, 18, 23, 26, 28, 32, 33
  • According to ref 9 the press release comes from PR Newswire which is considered unreliable
  • Ref 32 is dead
  • As I mentioned while reviewing "Ours", I'm unsure about Roughstock's reliability

Outcome edit

  • @Sebbirrrr: Thanks for the review! May I ask more than 7 days because I’m on a trip? I’ll ping you right away when I’m back. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 05:47, 1 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
    @Ippantekina: That's fine. Enjoy your trip! Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:32, 1 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
    Hi, thanks so much for the review and your patience. Except where I responded, I have addressed your comments. Let me know if this article needs further work asap, because I might not be able to reach back after the weekend. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 01:34, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
    @Ippantekina: Don't worry! Thanks for addressing my comments. There are two points that were not addressed and I left a comment about one of the sources under Critical reception. Greets, Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks, I have addressed the two remaining points. Regarding the Australian Telegraph, I removed it based on the many controversies it received; its sensationalism is reminiscent of the Daily Mail. Hopefully the article is in good shape now! Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 15:40, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
      Passing Everything looks good now. Great job with this one! Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:53, 15 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Hello, I have spent some spare time during my trip addressing some issues, but please expect me to be done by this weekend. Thank you for your patience! Ippantekina (talk) 23:49, 10 October 2022 (UTC)Reply