Talk:Mount Yasumandake

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kavyansh.Singh in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:06, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

  1. ^ "Comprehensive Preservation and Management Plan - Hidden Christian Sites in the Nagasaki Region" (pdf). Unesco World Heritage Centre. 2017. p. 28. Retrieved 2021-11-20.

Created by Tai123.123 (talk). Self-nominated at 05:48, 22 January 2022 (UTC).Reply

  • Nice article @Tai123.123:. It and the hook are well reffed (one more required?) and its neutral and it describes a notable peak. Image in the article is free to use. I would maybe include "Hiroda Island's highest Peak Mount ...." and/or "that Mount Yasumandake, considered sacred to Buddhists and Shintoists, is part of a World Heritage Site of "Hidden Christian Sites""? However feel free to ignore those suggestions. I'm OK with the main hook as I'm sure it was sacred to all three (not sure about "worship"). We do need a ref for every para. Ping me when you are ready. Victuallers (talk) 13:35, 22 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
    @Victuallers:, I added a citation for the one thing I forgot to cite, is it fine to run now? I prefer the shorter hooks that I first provided as I feel they're more punchy and may be more surprising if not placed beside other info. Thank for the review!Tai123.123 (talk) 15:44, 22 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
    @Victuallers: Also should we could state that they were Hidden Christians rather than just christians Tai123.123 (talk) 19:51, 22 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

  Christians are Christians IMO, but feel free to change Christians to Hidden Christians, it may intrigue some. I'm happy with the article and main hook as is and Earwig agrees. @Tai123.123: I think this is Good to go. Victuallers (talk) 22:37, 22 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Promoting the main hook (ALT0) to Prep 5Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:06, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply