Talk:Didi Gregorius

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 16:18, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Prose

Lede

• Dutch professional baseball shortstop - WP:SEAOFBLUE. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  •  Removed "Dutch" per MOS:OVERLINK — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• tee ball, article is at tee-ball. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  •  Fixed — GhostRiver 12:05, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• is it major league or "Major League"? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Lowercase – MLB is one of several "major leagues" in professional baseball; most, however, are now defunct — GhostRiver 12:05, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• hit for power? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Linked to power hitter — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• Is it worth mentioning that he won a place in the American League Championship after his grand slam. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Rephrased accordingly — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• In 2011, he and his teammates received honorary knighthood after defeating Cuba in an international tournament. - specifically state that he won the 2011 Baseball World Cup, which seems like it's glossed over. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Rephrased accordingly — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

General

• Source for DOB. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:58, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • In the NYT source listed after his father's baseball career: Gregorius was born in Amsterdam on Feb. 18, 1990, when his father was pitching for the Amsterdam Pirates in the Dutch professional league and working as a carpenter. — GhostRiver 12:05, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• In addition to baseball, Gregorius played soccer and basketball - link these games/ Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:58, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  •  Done — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• "against guys who were in the big leagues and at a higher level" - we could probably summarise this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:58, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  •  Done — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
• Do you need subsections for each Yankees season? We could merge some Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:58, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Combined 2015 & 16; I'd rather keep '17 and '18 separate, as there's a significant postseason section in both, and then '19 is left over after — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:18, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Lee Vilenski All comments have been addressed. I also changed a phrase in the lede to reflect that he did poorly in the 2021 season. — GhostRiver 13:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

DYK nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 10:16, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

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Didi Gregorius with the New York Yankees in 2017

• ... that Didi Gregorius was knighted after his team won the 2011 Baseball World Cup? Source: New York's newest infielder was knighted after playing for the Netherlands in the 2011 Baseball World Cup, where the Dutch beat Cuba 2-1 in the final.
  • ALT1:... that Didi Gregorius tweets after every game his baseball team wins, and has dedicated emojis for his teammates? Source: A Yankees win wasn't truly a victory until Gregorius fired off a tweet with emojis representing the stars of the game.

• Reviewed: Blackstarkids

Improved to Good Article status by GhostRiver (talk). Self-nominated at 15:30, 20 October 2021 (UTC).

• Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Both hooks are interesting, but I prefer the first hook. QPQ has been completed. Looks ready to go! Thriley (talk) 00:54, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

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