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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ancient Trader/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 00:39, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
- Lead
- Ancient Trader is a turn-based strategy video game developed by Slovakian video game studio 4Kids Games. → Sounds a bit odd to say "video game" twice in the same sentence.
- "and Xbox 360" → "and the Xbox 360"
- "one-year" → "year long"
- "six people" → "six individuals"
- "common board games" → A bit vague. What kind of board games?
- Gameplay
- Everything looks good here.
- Development
- "He worked with artist Petr Vcelka to design" → His name and title is already mentioned earlier, no need to do it again.
- "Vcelka was "obviously" took" → "Vcelka "obviously" took"
- Reception
- "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon release." → "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon its release."
- "Most critics gave praise to the game's art design and gameplay but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards." → "Most critics praised the game's art design and gameplay, but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards."
- References
- Everything looks good here.
