Talk:Abe Mickal

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• For an article of this length the lead should be two good paras long, covering all the major points of the article.

 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

• Will give a careful read once this is done.

Early life

• It is good to begin thee article (part after lead) with the full name of the person.

 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

• "The elder Mickal" sounds a bit too informal, you can stick to "father"

 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

College

• For years it was known as the "longest scoring pass in the South." Who do you quote here?

I just went ahead and removed it. It was dubious anyway. Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

• He later said that if he had accepted the senatorship When did he say this?

 Done Specified. It was worded oddly in source. Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Later life

• Any clear reason behind his death?

The only thing I could find was that he "passed away peacefully." Should I assume natural causes? Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Better remain silent here. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

No dablinks, no copyvio detected, external links are in order, images are proper. That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:27, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)