Talk:Étienne Hastrel de Rivedoux

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic GA Review
Good articleÉtienne Hastrel de Rivedoux has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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June 24, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 26, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Quebec-born Etienne Hastrel de Rivedoux helped to organize French military operations in the French Revolutionary Wars (1793–1801), the Napoleonic Wars (1805–1815), and the July Revolution (1830)?

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:03, 7 June 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteriaReply

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    French placenames should be rendered in French, not translated. (Île de Ré, not Isle of Rhé) Watch your accents; I already added one to Grand Armée. Why is France italicized? Command, not manage.
    should be good now.
    Still need to fix Île de Ré, otherwise looks good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:06, 16 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
    Ah, fixed. There was a redirect on the English spelling, so I didn't notice. auntieruth (talk) 21:30, 24 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    Does anyone provide an explanation how he was able to serve both the Bourbons and Napoleon without penalty?
    Not really. It sounds as if he was a very capable manager. And a lot of them made the transition from Napoleon to the Bourbons fairly seamlessly. Ney is one of the exceptions.
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
    No picture available?
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: