User talk:Melcous/Archive 8

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dewayne jackson

Sorry but what are you talking about? You said i must have copyrights to post a photo for dewayne jackson and i posted now a photo for dewayne jackson that is proper to me, why did you deleted it? Please stop distupting my work, and if there is any problem with the photo i uploaded just tell me what is the problem? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Unknownsbc (talk • contribs) 10:35, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Reply

First of all there are plenty of photos on wikipedia that dont have a very good qualtiy, this is my proper photo and the link that you are talking about is for a different photo, i think you are leaving everything on wikipedia and only spying on my work, you cant bring a photo from the internet and say that this is the photo i uploaded, i think your only goal is to disrupt my work and you are making everything to disrupt my work, wikipedia accepted my photo and i am responsible of my work, stop that please and do not interfer in my work by claiming that my photo is taken from a site!!!! And if you think i am disrupting wikipedia you can tell the administrators, this is not your duty to judge my work. And the photo was not uploaded previously at all and this a proof that your goal is only disrupting my work, stop deleting the photo!!! Unknownsbc (talk) 11:31, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Melcous

Having spent ten days trying to sort this issue, we have given up. Your multi layered system is a nightmare, moderating, admins, deleting entries before they are even complete, systems that require one to interact with different parts of the Wiki family, just to upload a photo or logo. Along with denials of username change, with no easy way of finding out why and what is requested, with referrals to so many different guidelines and rules. This should be about providing entries, with references, citing of facts, etc, a community that is able to contribute without having to jump through so many hoops just to ask for a review, challenge, a decision, or get something unblocked. It’s far too technical and has on this occasion disenfranchised over 16,000 individuals.

We shall not be using Wikipedia any further, please delete the Following Usernames: johninwales, joninwales, UKVANDPP and Joninwales at UKVANDPP.

Regards Sadly

Jon Hillman

Blocked: Use of multiple accounts and political grandstanding. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:46, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

Good Afternoon From the Tucson, AZ! Although my utilization like most for Wikipedia has been since it's birth, my editing of this massive pool of knowledge is at it's very beginnings. Unfortunately the reason for suddenly having the motivation to change anything whatsoever, would ALWAYS, as is human nature, be for my OWN self interest! I read the terms of Wikipedia's user policy, to which I will shed light on the obvious. ANYONE that says they do not base all their actions and decisions on their own self interest and benefit, is either lying, or is self destructive!

I am unfamiliar with the hierarchy of wikipedia at this moment, I adapt amazingly quick so I'll know in short time as to which of the two you are. The fact that you have removed in less than 24 hours time, this edit of mine you are either simply an overseer unaware of the atrocity that is the article "Mug Shot Publishing Industry" and will very shortly be divulged this knowledge, or you ARE the CORRUPTION and evil that profits from the extortion of humanity simply because you can.

Although my actions are for my own well being, the difference between mine and the individuals who profiteer off extortion irregardless of the legalities of their judicial loopholes, MINE are also in the benefit of HUMANITY! I absolutely refuse to allow someone to maintain operate an e commerce business that makes it's living by harassing, threatening, and torturing individuals with targeted attacks! If they continue to be allowed to backlink wikipedia for an increase in their domain authority, and also provide opinionated and corrupt NEWS from the same ip address, my edit on the article isn't only justified, it absolutely NECESSARY for me to ABOLISH this atrocity from continuing ! The massive exclamation point in an orange circle indicating the close relation of the source of that articles content will not satisfy me, or 5 million Americans I represent. The articles destruction, or my edits inclusion are a NECESSITY! — Preceding unsigned comment added by StopMugshotExtortion (talk • contribs) 17:48, 19 June 2017 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I did any kind of disruptive editing, but I was simply want to update the information of Bryant Austin (page) As the real person (Bryant ) told me to help him update more information and get the page verified. But the page is just keep being reverted And now I'm told that I was committing disruptive editing. Let's just say please help me to get the job done or please provide me instructions to have the page verified and add more information Michaelwong6969 (talk) 05:25, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Kmo

No, the content tag will lead you to each question. Try to look carefully from now on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Joshua0604 (talk • contribs) 08:56, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

MTL Blog

Hi, I can't use those links on wikipedia such as : - https://www. change.org/p/mtl-blog-suspend-irina-terehova-s-writing-position-at-mtl-blog - https://www. ipetitions.com/petition/get-irina-tee-out-of-mtl-blog

But you are right it was not to ask for her demission, but to suspend her from her writing position at MTL Blog. I will change the wording. Hope you like it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lethweimaster (talk • contribs) 14:10, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

The Editor's Barnstar

i wrote this message to tell my situation. Actually, Editing wikipedia page was our school's project. So my team(Sansae32, Magen20001) and other team(Joshua0604, 저항, Tomrocket0718) chose this topic. Our team's presentation was at Tuesday, and other team's presentation was today. So, when my team finished editing(https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_Mathematical_Olympiad&oldid=782860649), and after presentation, i thought other team can't get good score(because I edited almost all the page). So I thought it will be better to erase my article(https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_Mathematical_Olympiad&oldid=782959302). Now, both of team's presentation is done, and I wanna add my article again. But it is not a good thing to ignore other's edit, and so i'm having a trouble. Can you please help me? I know it is my fault(that we erased information just because of score), but i think adding my article will be helpful for wikipedia to make a lot, meaningful information. Thank you for reading my long, bad-english-used message. Sansae32 (talk) 10:01, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

Mary Rhodes: GHRA Webpage

Hi there!

I noticed that you flagged my drafts for speedy deletion. It states: "the page seems unambiguous advertising." It's my first time creating a draft with Wikipedia and the second time I tried to fix the issues it didn't clearly work out. Since you are an expert in the field, I was wondering if you can give me any advise on how to fix these issues.

Federico Diaz artist

Hi there,

I am an art student and a fan of Federico Diaz (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Federico_D%C3%ADaz) and noticed you wrote that there are two issues with the page. Could you please tell me how I can fix this? Some practical examples of what wording that promotes the subject is.

Thank you

Jan Vetchy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.49.118.162 (talk) 18:18, 6 June 2017 (UTC)

flash crash 2010

You undid the reference to a published novel and the edit was not shameless self-promotion. I was simply adding to other citations of other published works. Please undo Christopherliberty (talk) 19:16, 6 June 2017 (UTC)Christopher

Jermaine Rivers Wiki Page

Melcous,

There is no conflict of interest here, aside from the fact that I've followed him on Social media for years and I am a HUGE fan of his work! That said, I'm trying to create a page to highlight what I've discovered about him on the web. Unfortunately I'm having a lot of problems with this system, its guidelines are not very clear and the tools are not user friendly. Please be advised that over the next few days you will see a concerted effort from others to help get this done right. I welcome any technical advice that you may have to offer, please be more specific and include links that will help me correct whatever areas that you identified and needs action.

Evan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Evan Boone (talk • contribs) 14:17, 11 June 2017 (UTC)

Jermaine Rivers Wikipedia Page

I have made corrections to some of the areas that you identified in this article. Be advised that me and my colleagues are in the process of gathering solid references to the biographical information on the subject. Please review and remove the maintenance tags for the following section that has been properly referenced/ cited:

Life and career His more recent film credits include the suspense thriller Hangman (2017) where he was cast as a Swat team leader opposite Al Pacino and Karl Urban.[4][not in citation given]

--Evan Boone (talk) 02:20, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Jermaine Rivers Wiki Page

Hello Melcous,

Thanks for the feedback. I will take care in making sure that my edits (citations, sources and references) are more carefully drafted and follow Wiki's guideline. I apologize if my use of the word "colleagues" mislead you to believe that I am getting paid for this task. Although I am seeking the aid of friends who share an interest in this subject and contribute information for the creation of this article; I am not employed by the subject or anyone he is connected to. As I stated before "I'm a fan of Jermaine's work" and I've taken it upon myself to create this article. This is my first attempt at writing an article of this type. I plan to do more in the near future so it serves as good practice. Thanks again for your feedback!

Side note: I have provided a citation for the following area you identified below. Can you please review and remove the maintenance tag.

His performance in the "Don't Fall Victim" commercial spot, produced by Tytan Creates (a Tybee Island Ga based film production company) contributed to an Emmy nomination and win in its category, #44 (Best Commercial) at the 2015 Southeast Emmy's. [citation needed]

--Evan Boone (talk) 17:56, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: SB648

Hello Melcous. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of SB648, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Content has been added, barely. Thank you. ~ GB fan 10:59, 15 June 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: 2016-17 West of England & South Wales Hockey League South East Division 3

Hello Melcous. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of 2016-17 West of England & South Wales Hockey League South East Division 3, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: season page for a potentially notable league, see West Hockey Association (field hockey). Thank you. SoWhy 12:22, 21 June 2017 (UTC)

peter de ross

stop deleting my work lady — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arunyoshi (talk • contribs) 10:59, 25 June 2017 (UTC)

NPP

Get up to speed with your page patrolling! Read WP:NPR then the tutorial at WP:NPP, then apply for New Page Reviewer at WP:PERM. If you have any questions don't hesitate to ask me on my talk page. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:28, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

Nicole Junkermann's profile

Dear Melcous

I work in the office of Nicole Junkermann and want to update her entry to reflect her current business activities.

I have read your message regarding the removing any information that could be viewed as subjective and will make the necessary changes in the timeframe that you have set out.

I look forward to hearing from you once I've implemented the changes to get a better understanding of whether they fit within Wikipedia's guidelines.

Best regards

Luciano — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lscaruso1976 (talk • contribs) 16:13, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

R. Tom Sawyer

Stripping important refs because they were formatted as inlined ELs, rather than as <ref>...</ref>s was a far from constructive action. Especially as you made no effort to discuss the problem, let alone fix it in a useful manner. Andy Dingley (talk) 10:15, 29 June 2017 (UTC)

Sure, that's a fair point. But the edit also contained the re-insertion of a bunch of improper formatting that I had previously gone through and tediously stripped out, so in this case it was less work for me to ask the other editor to reinsert the reference correctly than for me to do that again. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 22:54, 29 June 2017 (UTC)

Nicole Junkermann's profile

Thank you so much Melcous. Apologies in advance if you have seen this already, but I don't know how to reply to your comments, as you can see I'm a complete novice when it comes to Wikipedia edits, so thanks for your patience.

I have a couple of suggested edits that I wanted to run past you.

2nd paragraph "Junkermann began her business career as a co-founder of football gaming..."

3rd paragraph I'd like the following sentence to be removed please. I now understand it may be construed as asserting without providing factual information. "Since 2011, Junkermann has returned to digital innovation, focusing on opportunities in areas like robotics, genomics, virtual reality, artificial intelligence and premium content."

In terms of her marriage to Ferdinando Brachetti Peretti, there are no articles about it to create a citation. How can it be referenced? I have the marriage certificate, but I wouldn't want to publish it. Any thoughts?

Many thanks for your support and understanding. Lscaruso1976 (talk) 11:38, 30 June 2017 (UTC) Luciano Caruso

Katharina Treutler

Well done for helping a new editor out. Good on you :-) AntiVan (talk) 08:40, 1 July 2017 (UTC)

Conflict of interest

Hello Melcous, thank you very much for your message, I received it and just wanted to let you know that I do not have any connection to the company in the article TL Ventures Inc., I actually came across the article while researching about Venture Investment companies in the USA and then TL Ventures and decided to fix it as it had missing information and several other issues. I appreciate your concern as I'm aware that the idea is for Wikipedia's content to be neutral and having a connection to the company will become a conflict of interest, but I have no connection whatsoever with the company or anyone related to it, as a matter of fact I tried to fix the article's content so that it could be as neutral as possible, as you can see I made several mayor and minor edits as I looked up more information related to it. I already read the conflict of interest policies and none of it applies to me, as I have no external or internal connection to the company. I'll take a look at the article once again to make sure it is as neutral as possible.

LuisAntonioER (talk) 07:44, 8 July 2017 (UTC)

Hello Melcous, Thank you for your message. I am not receiving pay for updating the Quality of Pitch page, but I do have a connection to it and I appreciate you trying to keep Wikipedia as unbiased as possible. I've tried to keep a neutral POV and work on style edits more than adding new content, but I would appreciate any contributions you could offer towards keeping it as unbiased as possible. Thanks for putting your time and effort into looking into pages like this. Dinithi2 (talk) 04:36, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

New Page Reviewer Newsletter

Hello Melcous, thank you for your efforts reviewing new pages!

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yevgeny_Ivanov_(spy)#Cultural_references

I am not sure who you are and why you removed my insertion. Could you kindly explain that? I am new at this, maybe very obviously, but I can't see much difference between what I inserted and what for example the Cultural References section has in it about Peter Sellers other than that my insertion actually includes some interesting new assertions about Ivanov whereas the Sellers article doesn't add any information to give one a better understanding of Ivanov. If you think my insertion was overloaded with references then why not edit it as you think fit and let me see a copy?

My original insertion read as follows:

In Beyond Enkription, a Cold War novel largely based on facts, Yevgeny or Eugene Ivanov was allegedly involved in the murder of Stephen Ward, Christine Keeler’s supposed KGB handler in the Profumo scandal. Beyond Enkription was the first novel in The Burlington Files series written by Bill Fairclough and published by Dolman Scott.

Alternatively you could take out the second sentence or reword the first sentence, say as follows: Yevgeny or Eugene Ivanov was allegedly involved in the murder of Stephen Ward, Christine Keeler’s supposed KGB handler in the Profumo scandal according to Bill Fairclough's autobiographical journal, Beyond Enkription, the first release in The Burlington Files series. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.185.140.214 (talk) 07:57, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I'll Correct it.

Thank you for your feedback. That was done by mistake.sorry. I'll resolve it. Srinidhivadirajbm (talk) 14:20, 19 July 2017 (UTC)

Why did you delete Luis4012 page without any warning????

--Luis4012 (talk) 14:07, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

You deleted my page Luis4012 without giving me the opportunity to correct any discrepancies. I was in the midst of adding more citations and removing some text. You did not even give me time to come into work this morning to fix it. What gives? What policy am I violating? I was clearly adding sources, photos, ect. Why did you delete? Now I have to start all over again with know what the hell I did wrong.

Transcendental object at the end of time

I'm wondering why this has been removed, given that Mckenna is one of the most important philosophers of the 20th century and that this was his main idea? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Odinthewise (talk • contribs) 14:10, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated

Hi, I'm GSS-1987. I wanted to let you know that I saw the page you reviewed, Pooja Sihag, and have un-reviewed it again. If you have any questions, please ask them on my talk page. Thank you.

GSS (talk|c|em) 14:32, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

CSD tag removal

I assume this was accidental? Even so, try not to make a habit of it. Take care! — fortunavelut luna 15:17, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Hi Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi, no it wasn't accidental - I removed the spam and the speedy deletion notice and added the warning about their user name. This has seemed to me to be pretty usual practice by a number of editors when there is spam on a user talk page (rather than a user page), given that talk pages shouldn't be deleted and need to be the place where messages are left. Can you explain if there is a reason why it shouldn't be done that way? Cheers, Melcous (talk) 15:23, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Well; here's nine reasons; [1], [2], [3], [4], [5], [6], [7], [8], [9], [10], [11]:) Talk pages with no previous history, with no messages-as in this case- are not neccesary to keep, going by WP:UP#DELETE, "However, unambiguous... promotional text... can be speedy deleted." In any case, if you do think so- what happened here?! — fortunavelut luna 15:31, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Incidentally, a ping only works when i's in conjnction wth a signature- sothis, added after, didn't work. Not a deal breaker though, just FYI. — fortunavelut luna 15:33, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

My User Page

Hi Melcous,

Thank you for pointing out about my user page. I am new to editing here (as you probably can tell!!!) and I have amended accordingly.

All the best

Steven. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Steven Woods (talk • contribs) 22:13, 30 July 2017 (UTC)

Rothbury

Within the Rothbury entry, the link to the Lordenshaws page on gefrin.com (http://gefrin.com/lordenshaws/lordenshaws.html) is not a commercial link and adds to the richness of the Rothbury page by giving a popular and comprehensive overview of this prehistoric site. There is no Wikipedia page for the Lordenshaws hillfort (though I await survey information before starting work on just such an entry) so this information is entirely relevant.

"Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia, as you did to Rothbury" does not apply here...

Gefrin (talk) 00:46, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

A whole section on the Lordenshaws hillfort is under construction but will be a year at least away. The link is to my own website I do confess, though the information there is greater than commonly available and there is no commercial factor. The site is not for profit. Remove my link if you think it adds to the integrity of what we all strive to achieve here and I will understand. However, the link provides more information without gain than anything on Wikipedia right now... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gefrin (talk • contribs) 01:10, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Bon dia Mr./Mrs. Melcous,

I received the following message from you:

Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia, as you did to Festivals in Aruba. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 00:22, 2 August 2017 (UTC

I added the following:

Aruba Sinatra Dinner Show The Show takes place every Thursday from 7:30 till 9:30 pm and the Show Ticket is only $15.00 per person (food and drinks not included). Experience beautiful composed, orchestrated and arranged music with wonderful romantic lyrics sung by Fred de Jong. Order local food and delicious drinks while watching our Aruba Sinatra Dinner Show.

Can you please explain me what is wrong about it compared with the rest of the text and links on this page?

Thanks,

Fred — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fred de Jong (talk • contribs) 14:03, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Please explain

Bon dia Mr./Mrs. Melcous,

I have received the following message from you:

Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia, as you did to Festivals in Aruba. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 00:22, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

I have added the follwoing:

Aruba Sinatra Dinner Show The [http//:www.fredddejong.com Show] takes place every Thursday from 7:30 till 9:30 pm and the Show Ticket is only $15.00 per person (food and drinks not included). Experience beautiful composed, orchestrated and arranged music with wonderful romantic lyrics sung by Fred de Jong. Order local food and delicious drinks while watching our [http//:www.fredddejong.com Aruba Sinatra Dinner Show].

Can you please explain what is wrong about these text and links, compared with the rest of this page?

Thanks, Fred de Jong (talk) 14:28, 2 August 2017 (UTC) Fred

Bon dia

Bon dia Mr./Mrs. Melcous,

Thank you for your explanation.

How can I find those editors. And what do I do if they don't react?

Could you add this listing for me or do I need to ask a friend?

Regards, Fred Fred de Jong (talk) 13:53, 3 August 2017 (UTC)

Removing Content...

Hi Melcious,

Following you email : Please do not remove content or templates from pages on Wikipedia without giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary.

The link I revoke was a dead link (404...) what's the point to keep these kind of links in wikipedia ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pernoellekmd (talk • contribs) 13:37, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

دندل

Hi, you tagged the article دندل with G12, but you didn't specify where it was copied from, so could you add this in please? Thank you  Seagull123  Φ  14:04, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

Seagull123 Thanks for the message - yes sorry, normally I would include the place copied from, but because it was in Arabic and I was using google translate, I was able to work out that it was copied because the google translation was also available on the web elsewhere, but wasn't able to easily figure out where the Arabic was copied from, if that makes sense. But it seems the deleting editor was able to work it out for me! Cheers, Melcous (talk) 00:22, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

Oh OK, I just couldn't find anywhere it was copied from either!  Seagull123  Φ  15:14, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Original Barnstar
	Thanks for the feedback Boreholedrillingsa (talk) 06:00, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

patrick kelly edit

Greeting Melcous, i am very new to Wiki I also work in a Higher Education environment. I am truly a hands on learner. I love Wiki!!! I appreciate you looking over my edit/addition on Patrick Kelly the designer. I followed your suggestions and omitted my name. Patrick Kelly was from the state of Mississippi and Mississippi never provided him with a celebration or an proper exhibition. Students and I at the school put on the exhibition. I worked with Philadelphia Museum of Art and the owners of his estate to bring a permanent collection to his alma mater, Jackson State University. I could use some Wiki help and a friend. I omitted my name in the edit, but if you research the exhibition itself you can see some recent articles mention Jackson State University exhibition we had for Patrick Kelly. One source was Vicksburg Post, another was Jackson State University News. Again, I thank you for your edit and suggestions and welcome any help. Again, I am very new to Wiki. and I am learning. I welcome any help.

Sincerely, ShonShonmccarthy (talk) 01:20, 9 August 2017 (UTC)comment added by Shonmccarthy (talk • contribs) 01:16, 9 August 2017 (UTC) Shonmccarthy (talk) 01:17, 9 August 2017 (UTC) shon

Hi Melcous,

I see you rolled back my change on the Psalms article. I don't regularly edit Wikipedia and so I'm not sure how or where to properly go about making the case for a change and having it approved -- to that end, I don' even know who determines which users get "rollback privileges", and how those are granted. So if you don't mind, I'll posit my concerns here about the Psalms rollback, and perhaps I can learn something from your response. This is also a difficulty I've had with other Wikipedia articles regarding sourcing, and it is this: why is a single source sufficient to allow a Wikipedia article to use definitive language regarding an assertion, when outside Wikipedia the related issue may not be settled at all? In this case there is nothing like consensus in the legitimate historical community (which is so vast as to be almost impossible to get a consensus from, in some cases) that David did not author any psalms (nor even that he did or did not exist), but because one source was provided which states something definitively, it is treated as definitive by Wikipedia.

But isn't that simply Wikipedia passing the buck, so to speak? What makes one source, in the eyes of Wikipedia, more valid than another? If I find another reputable Jewish Scriptural study guide like the one sourced which says David probably *did* exist, would I then be able to replace the one assertion with the other? I would hope not, because that assertion would be equally non-established -- a single source, especially without providing access to that source's sources, doesn't establish anything. Thus, why is it not appropriate to change the language to something less definitive, such as "though some sources indicate", at least until multiple sources can be brought to bear? I understand the appeal of certainty, but surely it's better to use cautious language until something like certainty can actually be reached, regardless of what a single source happens to say.

Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by AONE. (talk • contribs) 01:26, 12 August 2017 (UTC)

Dan Wagner

Melcous,

You removed the intro statement from Daniel Maurice Wagner (born 28 July 1963) is a British Internet entrepreneur who has been called 'the founder of British eCommerce'.....' by removing "...who has been called 'the founder of British eCommerce'..." on the basis that the Chinese sources were not reputable enough (albeit that Taiwan News is a major Chinese Newspaper). Nevertheless, I said I would be bringing in more references as I am not in favour of trimming valid facts from wikipedia though I support writing the articles in neutral way and not advertising any specific party. I gave some references before and there are more references I found from the library and I am sending scanned copies of the same for your review. That settles my support of including the claim that he was in fact the founder (or pioneer) of British e-commerce. The article from Marketing in 1988 states 'MAID has built a unique technology platform that allows articles to be purchased using computers. Mr Wagner has pioneered the technology to take payment in this way....' (obviously in 1988 ecommerce wasn't even a term that had been invented but the quote is clear) and the second article is from the UK national newspaper the Guardian dated May 1995 which says ...(he) sees where the information highway is headed before anyone else has dreamed up the phrase' and '...ten years later, widely regarded as having invented electronic commerce, he launches his pioneering company.....'. I have done enough for my burden of proof as far as WP:V goes by giving reliable sources. Now if any one wants to read more on the topic, it is up to them to go to a library - but from my end, for some verification of the facts, I am giving the historical references for your reading as a courtesy and not just their citation details. You can see the scanned copies on the following links: Marketing Mag - May 1988 https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8CxFjCGp3NEWlE2eGphSEtaajA and The Guardian Newspaper - May 1995 https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8CxFjCGp3NEWlU0ZVlfTGMwd0U

Can you please revert your edit on this basis?

95.210.221.6 (talk) 17:19, 12 August 2017 (UTC)

Discussed on the talk page and awaiting your attention/input Melcous. Re library, if found a useful cache of articles on an old version of the subjects website, https://web.archive.org/web/20161013044331/http://brightstation.com/press-media/.

Hello! There is a DR/N request you may have interest in.

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The link I put in does not link to my own personal website, why would it? That would be misleading, the link I added sends people to the YouTube channel of Slugterra. I don't remember whether it is official or not. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MK8 Master (talk • contribs) 01:00, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

The link you added is to the youtube page of an individual who has the same user name as your wikipedia editor name. So it is definitely not an official channel and should not be linked to, and it seems likely that it is a channel you are personally associated with, which means wikipedia's conflict of interest policies mean even if it could have been added it should not have been done so by you. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 03:25, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Hunter Plake

Hello Melcous. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Hunter Plake, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: claims charting, which would be sufficient for notability per WP:MUSICBIO #2. Thank you. SoWhy 10:45, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

No worries SoWhy, appreciate the note and yes that makes sense, sorry I missed it. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 03:08, 23 August 2017 (UTC)

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Pininfarina Designers

Hello,

I added back the Pininfarina designers who were removed.
In light of Pininfarina's history of not publicizing their employees, any designer who worked for Pininfarina is significant.
I feel this article is for reference of informational facts, not opinions. I did add vehicles the designers worked on for additional information.

Thank you,

Slufty (talk) 11:13, 30 August 2017 (UTC)

Hi Melcous,

I was traveling so I did not see your message about sandbox page deletion. I had put my own bio as a placeholder and was going to adjust it to wiki standards. I thought I had time to do that when I came back from my trip. Anyhow, is is possible to have it restored so I can adjust it to Wiki standards, or do I have to create it from scratch again?

Thank you.

Kind regards,

Claudiu

(moldovanfactor)

Deletion of content within an article as non-notable?

Hi – I have a COI on this, so I'm engaging you on your talk page.

I noticed you removed the list of fellows from Shuttleworth Foundation as non-notable.

As I read the notability guidelines, notability guidelines apply to articles – not the content of articles. And while they may apply to lists, this is only when the page is literally a list, not a list within a non-list page. See: Wikipedia:Notability#Notability_guidelines_do_not_apply_to_content_within_an_article

Am I misreading this? If you think the list deletion was in error, perhaps you could restore it? Or maybe explain my misunderstanding here?

Kind thanks for your many contributions to Wikipedia!

Madeleine ✉ ✍ 19:33, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for responding within Talk:Shuttleworth Foundation! I've responded to your response there. Just leaving this note here as a heads up. :)

Madeleine ✉ ✍ 13:21, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Andrea Cunningham

Aside from the book mention, what specifically are you pointing out that prompted you to add the peacock tag? All the statements that appear promotional are actually in the articles cited. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hhwong (talk • contribs) 22:37, 13 September 2017 (UTC)

Wirt County High School

Thank you for the advice on the page. I am a history teacher at Wirt County High School and I'm having one of my history classes create a page for our high school by doing research and interviewing people to create a history for our school. I read your advice. Where would I disclose my relationship to the page? I am not trying to be biased, but present a clear picture of our school. Also I see where the site recommends we verify more information.

Is there a way to see what specifically needs more verification?  Thanks for your help and any advice you will be giving in advance.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by IsaacGoff (talk • contribs) 13:13, 14 September 2017 (UTC) 

OnDeck Capital Page

Hello Melcous, thank you for reviewing the OnDeck Capital page. As you suggested, I added a COI to my user page and to the OnDeck Capital talk page. I hope that satisfies the COI requirement. Per the advertisement/promotional issue you raised, what left on the page is deemed promotional? The awards, partnerships, and the BOD that was rolled back are all factual and have citations. I would appreciate any more clarification. JP4115 (talk) 14:06, 18 September 2017 (UTC)JP4115.

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InvoiceBerry edits

I have tried to adjust the text to make it sound less like an advert as it is not my aim to create an advert. I have also added a source from Inc. magazine as further resource. Could you point me in the direction what exactly is wrong with the page in your opinion? It seems that there are plenty of SaaS tools listed on Wikipedia.

citations for Joe Scanlan

Thanks for your message. My mistake. The change that you felt needed citation is actually contained in the (former) first citation. I have flipped the first and second citations to put them in proper chronological order, which makes better sense. Hope you agree. Donellew (talk) 13:47, 30 September 2017 (UTC)

Dewayne jackson, jasmon youngblood, ali mezher and nadim souaid photos

Hello you removed photos i posted for those pages, but i posted the sources of those photos and those pictures are free to use because they are posted by fiba and lebanese basketball league so please dont delete these photos again because they dont violate copyrights policies Unknownsbc (talk) 12:04, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Those photos are free to use by public, the author who posted those photos, posted them for free and are used worldwide by everyone, and if i must do something please tell how i must do it. Unknownsbc (talk) 12:19, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Very well, i will no longer contribute in wikipedia, i created pages that were not in the wikipedia before, and i was trying to make these pages better but it seems you are making it very hard for someone to do a good work, and my work is honest so please respect people before telling them how to work... you are free to do what you want, i am no longer interested in working or editing on wikipedia... Unknownsbc (talk) 13:52, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Hello again, i have a photo of dewayne jackson taken from the official group of sagesse club on facebook and i have permission to use this photo because i am a part of this group, can i post it? Or is there also a violation of copyrights? Unknownsbc (talk) 15:06, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

Career vs Academic Career

Hi Melcous, I can understand why you undid this change but many artists fundamentally operate as having two careers: an academic one that serves their teaching interests and an artistic one that serves their creative aspirations. This bio isn't fleshed out enough yet to acknowledge the artistic side, but for most artist / educators the two are quite distinct. It is not "puffery" to say so, it is professional reality. In that sense, studio art professors are quite different from academic professors for whom writing and research go hand in hand with teaching. There I would agree with you that saying "Academic Career" is redundant. My only point is that distinguishing "Academic Career" from "Artistic Career" -- or whatever the nomenclature might be -- is an important one for teaching artists. Thanks. Happy to discuss. Donellew (talk) 14:06, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

issues

What are the problems with the mccourt page? They aren't clear or listed. There are plenty of sources, it is written neutrally and objectively based on a person of interest. I can see one phrase on the page that may need editing but it is a quote from an news article from an independent person. After researching countless other pages of people of interest, they are written no differently to this and I can share examples if required. It would be most helpful to understand specific areas that aren't suitable for Wikipedia so that I may edit this one to conform. For example, citing examples of people he worked with on a programme was deemed promotional where in matter of fact, it's factual information about a show he produced? Any help on the phraseology would be most appreciated.

Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by WhiteoaksTL (talk • contribs) 13:54, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

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Jonathan Noyce

Why do you think that i have an external relationship with the people, places, or things i write here in Wikipedia? There aren't any links from the article to my website, why do you think this? I don't make advertisements. Mr. Noyce is no part of my family, friends, school, company, club, or organization, as well as any competing companies' projects or products.

I never made such an experience here at Wikipedia like this yet: First you destroyed and removed important parts of the article, then you do completely false complaints and accuses. I don't want to make this experience again. We are all working here for free for the benefit of Wikipedia and freedom of information. So i want to be treated with respect. 'Jonathan Noyce' is not the first text here i worked on, and it's an old one. Nobody did complain before.

Please continue the discussion in the article where i started it and explain why you removed more references than you added and brought this article getting an error message. Leo067 (talk) 10:52, 7 October 2017 (UTC)

Help edit page

Hello Melcous, you added some tags to the article Ubi Franklin. Please can you help edit the page to make it suitable and standard enough?. Thank you Kelvinsage1 (talk) 21:01, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Hwebul

I suspect you are familiar with {{multiple}} to combine hat-tags... Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 09:20, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

@Jim1138: Hey Jim yes I am, but I generally use twinkle and unfortunately it seems a bit inconsistent in merging the tags into the multiple heading when there is already one tag on a page. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 11:53, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

Kunrei shiki

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Orquesta de Instrumentos Reciclados de Cateura

Buenos días, yo soy miembro de la orquesta de Instrumentos reciclados de Cateura, estamos sufriendo un ataque de difamación en Paraguay, pagado por el maestro Luis Szaran para demeritar nuestra organización y a nuestro director, editaron toda la información de Wikipedia, con ayuda del periodista Carlos Giménez, del diario La Nación, quien por cierto escribe los artículos para dañar la imagen de nuestro querido director, en sus redes sociales no tiene repercusión alguna, por eso migra a esta página, a nivel mundial para desacreditar nuestro trabajo. Le rogamos que evite y restaure las futuras ediciones, que no sea realizada por mí o por la orquesta en sí. Gracias Elba Nanon (talk) 13:14, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

SF Moran edits

Hi, I am the author (also grandson) of the original SF Moran web page / bio on which this weak wikipedia entry was based some time ago, and that website is now no longer archived, so I rebuilt it plus made a few corrections based on later research of mine. Please leave new link to it as the primary reference for wikip page or tell me how I can ensure that this happens. Thanks so much; sorry for being uninformed about processes. ---David Moran

Melcous, can't figure out how to respond to you, so will try here.

Are you a bot? You did not understand what I wrote above and I will try again to explain. There is no conflict of interest, and I do not get anything from any of this!

The wikipedia page refers to and was sourced from my original webpage, and has been from the getgo. That page of mine is no longer available. Furthermore, it had some errors. So I have updated it and posted it anew. I could not post it to the original link, no longer being a comcast subscriber. Is this clear? The wikipedia SFMoran entry must refer to the new page, as it is alive and well, and accurate, and not a dead link. Please permit the new linking to it to stand or tell me how to do it. Thank you. I do not need any pointers to CoI guidelines, believe me. There is no CoI here. Do you understand?

+++

Let me say it again. Almost all of the online sources that I could refer to *stem from my original web page*. It is the authority. Apart from the Budiansky article, which is cited, but of course not the life bio. The original wikipedia article points to my old webpage. That page is now dead and no longer archived. So ... I cleaned it up, updated it, and reposted it. I did as wordpress because of cost. Tell me, since you know all, how would you have the wikipedia article point properly toward the authoritative source of the new page? Imagine how I regret wasting time on this important issue and person by trying to do the right thing and permitting wikip readers to get to something not a dead link.

See if you can figure out a way to help out here rather than by fingerwagging at me about CoI and being a relative, for God's sake.

The single great weakness of wikipedia, as everyone knows, is this circularity and worse this mistaken overpolicing.

Davidrmoran (talk) 21:43, 14 October 2017 (UTC)David R Moran (drmoran@aol.com)

Reply

Thank you, Melcous, for the information, and we will change it right away.

Cheers Sierra Watch (talk) 20:59, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

Recycled orchestra of Cateura https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Recycled_Orchestra_of_Cateura

Hi Melcous, how are you? My name is Elba, and I have been a member of the orchestra since 8 years ago, we are suffering an attack by the press in our country, paid for by our competition, since we are the first orchestra in the world to use recycled instruments and they they want to get us that job. we started in 2006, and the alleged denunciations that were made in 2016 against the orchestra are lies, on September 9, a journalist edited all our information and linked his page, so diverted many funds from international donations. Please, if you can restore the page as it was in early September. and to avoid re-editing. since if it is fixed, that information is false, the links are written by the same journalist, and it is not constructive. Best regards from Cateura - Paraguay Posts: sorry for my bad English, I'm using a translator — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elba Nanon (talk • contribs) 14:19, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Recycled orchestra of Cateura

Hi Melcous, how are you? My name is Elba, and I have been a member of the orchestra since 8 years ago, we are suffering an attack by the press in our country, paid for by our competition, since we are the first orchestra in the world to use recycled instruments and they they want to get us that job. we started in 2006, and the alleged denunciations that were made in 2016 against the orchestra are lies, on September 9, a journalist edited all our information and linked his page, so diverted many funds from international donations. Please, if you can restore the page as it was in early September. and to avoid re-editing. since if it is fixed, that information is false, the links are written by the same journalist, and it is not constructive. Best regards from Cateura - Paraguay Posts: sorry for my bad English, I'm using a translator

this is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Recycled_Orchestra_of_Cateura Elba Nanon (talk) 14:22, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Telenor Bank

Hello, hope you are well. Received the following message for the article 'Telenor Microfinance Bank'.

you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation Response - have done so at the time of sign-up

• instead, you are encouraged to propose changes on the Talk pages of affected article(s) (see the {{request edit}} template);

Response - no page currently exists on this organization, as the first and largest microfinance bank in a country of 195 Million people and a part of the Telenor Worldwide Group - it was felt that this would be notable enough for mention and people information

• exercise great caution so that you do not violate Wikipedia's content policies

Response - Have tried to do so by not promoting or pushing the brand and rather stated just facts

If any particular aspect of the article needs to be reworked - please share so that the needful can be done.

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Removal of link on Carnsore Point

Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia, as you did to Carnsore Point. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 04:08, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

I feel the link should be added to the page. Although the title of the page refers to a geographic place, most of the article refers to the two anti-nuclear festivals held there.

As a writer and historian, I would suggest that the festivals are a significant aspect of recent Irish social history. I attended the first festival and feel that my eye-witness account is a primary source reference. I have no interest in attracting visitors to my site. The purpose of the link is to provide a social history dimension to the discourse. Thank you. --FergusCassidy (talk) 21:40, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Unlisted Owner cited source removed for soapboxing?

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 03:51, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Was not trying to soap box. The page Unlisted Owner was requested to be linked to other pages Unlisted Owner was shown at the American Film Market so being added to the AFM Wikipedia page is not trying to soap box. Their are many sources to back up the face the film was their. So I do not understand why this was deleted if it is fact. Also if chart performance on Amazon is not okay for a Wikipedia with a cited source then why are billboard charts allowed? I do not understand your logic for taking away cited sources? please explain, The source about being on the amazon top 10 chart is from a radio news source and a NBC News TV Source. So I'm trying to understand how talking about how a movie is being received on amazon with cited sources is consider "Soap Boxing"

http://www.mywabashvalley.com/news/local-filmmaker-scares-up-new-film-online/841022088

http://www.wsvx.com/2017/10/16/unlisted-owner-tops-amazons-list-of-hot-new-horror-releases-at-9-co-stars-haidee-corona-of-shelbyville/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Styx1411 (talk • contribs) 23:01, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Juan Manfredi's response to your message

Melcous,

I did edit the page on Juan J. Manfredi (mathematician) who was created by someone else (possibly from the University of Pittsburgh). I was trying to make sure the information was accurate. But I understand the COI policies, which I would not want to transgress. Thus, I would like to request that the page be deleted all together from Wikipedia. Please accept my apologies for not reading the COI policies in advance.

Thank you very much.

Juan J. Manfredi. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juanmanfredi (talk • contribs) 13:31, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

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requested changes

Dear Melcous: I'm sorry my first attempt to address your concerns on Wes Burgess entry was unsuccessful. I put thought into it, but I will try again to satisfy your concerns that there were insufficient citations, the citations were too personal, and that the entry read too much like a resume. The Wes Burgess' work is diverse, and the intent of the biography is to draw together concepts for a varied readership to understand the big picture and (to a lesser extent) the author and researcher that produced them. Thank you for your help. Bodhidaruma (talk) 21:39, 21 October 2017 (UTC)Bodhidaruma

Georg Aumann

Dear Melcous, How will I know which articles to create now that the links have been removed from the Georg Aumann infobox. scope_creep (talk) 14:31, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

I have moved them to the talk page, where they can sit, until I create them. scope_creep (talk) 16:22, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for the message and you answered your own question while I was asleep, but yep sounds like a great idea. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 20:24, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Recycled Orchestra of Cateura

Hello Melcous, much pleasure and thank you very much for the indication.

The “Recycled Orchestra of Cateura” itself considers 2012 as the year of its beginning as an independent group, for its first international concert in Rio de Janeiro (Brazil), on June 13, 2012, in the event Rio+20 summit (where the boys of the music school "Sounds of Cateura" are directed by Luis Szarán, since 2002 creator of the program "Sounds of the Earth"), as well as by the launch of the official teaser of the production of "Landfill Harmonic" in November 2012.

In addition, members of the orchestra declared in the two important newspapers of Paraguay (the main original sources are in spanish), in July 2012, that they became independent of "Sounds of the Earth": “Abc Color” , «The teacher commented that initially they counted on the support of the project 'Sounds of the Earth', of the master Luis Szarán»; and “Ultima Hora” , «The orchestra belonged until 2011 to Sounds of the Earth, a social program promoted by Luis Szarán».

Also in October 2012, the orchestra ratified the independence of "Sounds of the Earth" in that year: “Abc color” and “Ultima Hora”.

In the orchestra's own fanpage he mentioned the disengagement of "Sounds of the Earth", after the retirement of its director of the original program.

In 2006, "Sounds of the Earth" and the program Procicla founded the music school "Sounds of Cateura", with children from 8 to 12 years old, and there was still no orchestra (since 2008 with members of other communities and not of Cateura), nor the recycled instruments (since 2007).

If you count the year 2006 as the beginning of the orchestra, you should describe the process with "Sounds of the Earth" until 2011, which is also cited in the first short documentary "Landfill Harmonic", filmed in 2010, and mentioned by the producers themselves

In mid-2016, three original members of the social project Cateura denounced director Favio Chávez to the Public Ministry, for alleged doubts about the transparency of his administration of donations. The complaint is still in force and has the backing of three national senators. The director himself clarified that the funds go to his personal bank account.

--Espleen1898 (talk) 14:45, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Point taken. Disruptive editing doesn't apply though.Tamlacht (talk) 19:58, 25 October 2017 (UTC)

Barnaby Joyce

Hi Melcous,

I see you have reversed my changes, but I can't understand why. They are correct. The High Court decision (http://www.austlii.edu.au/cgi-bin/viewdoc/au/cases/cth/HCA//2017/45.html) means that Mr Joyce was never validly elected to the Australian Parliament. As a consequence he never held any office, including the office of Deputy Prime Minister. These are legal facts.

Best,

Legalist40

Speedy deletion nomination of User:Eright/sandbox

Hello Melcous, I see you deleted the content in my sandbox. What was the reason for this? i thought a sandbox is there for users to create articles and get them correctly formatted before they are moved to a live Wiki page. If this is the case then why was it deleted? How can I improve the article and test it out if it gets deleted? Thank you! Eright (talk) 16:05, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

John Friedman Alice Kimm Architects

I am trying to edit the John Friedman Alice Kimm wikipedia page. Can you explain your comments? Regarding a list of projects, see here for precedents that were approved. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kevin_Daly_Architects https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorcan_O%27Herlihy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marmol_Radziner

Also, I added links to other pages so it should not be an orphan anymore. If Wikipedia should not be used as a reference, how do you fix the orphan comment?

Thank you for your notes, will go through each one and fix.

Srigolot01 (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2017 (UTC)