Talk:The Occupation of the American Mind
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Did you know nomination edit
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 08:09, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
... that The Occupation of the American Mind shows how Israeli attacks on Palestinians provoked widespread protests around the world, while the United States remained steadfast in its support for Israel?Source: "Occupation of the American Mind". Aljazeera. 9 Mar 2017.- ALT1:... that The Occupation of the American Mind sought to show how Israeli attacks on Palestinians provoked widespread protests around the world, while the United States remained steadfast in its support for Israel? Source: "Occupation of the American Mind". Aljazeera. 9 Mar 2017.
Created by Ghazaalch (talk). Self-nominated at 12:39, 7 November 2021 (UTC).
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QPQ not required. Everything else is fine (including copyright; can't seem to get rid of that question mark). While I have some other copy-editing concerns with the article–none of which preclude this article from DYK–the phrasing of your hook is somewhat vague and questionable from an NPOV perspective. Might I suggest only adjusting it to read "... that The Occupation of the American Mind sought to show how Israeli attacks on Palestinians provoked widespread protests around the world, while the United States remained steadfast in its support for Israel?" Pbritti (talk) 22:47, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
Thank you Pbritti. I altered the hook to what you suggested.Ghazaalch (talk) 07:54, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
Excellent, looks great. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:10, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
