Talk:Plato's Stepchildren

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Richard75 in topic poor episode

Highlight Reel edit

After a little google research, every use I can find of "Plato's Stepchildren" as a title for a highlight reel is authored by someone with the same name as the user who wrote that part of the article. Someone who thinks he's clever is trying to get his oh-so-clever wit into the lexicon. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.180.46.178 (talk) 13:30, 4 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

BBC edit

I #think# when the BBC showed the original series a while ago this was one of the three episodes they decided not to broadcast.

It wasn't shown in the original screenings back in the late 1960s/early 1970s or in the repeat runs. The 1992-1994 repeats of the entire TOS included all three previously unshown episodes. Timrollpickering 11:30, 28 January 2006 (UTC)Reply

Were the 1992-1994 repeats on the BBC or were they shown on Sky? 86.40.208.160 (talk) 19:25, 27 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

The Kiss edit

So did Shatner and Nichols actually kiss, even though it was not seen on screen? NorthernThunder 09:24, 3 May 2006 (UTC)Reply

Of course, in all that talk about inter-racial - is hispanic a race ? And does half-French count as non-white ? -- Beardo 08:06, 30 July 2007 (UTC)Reply

Some of the counterexamples given here sound a bit disingenuous. When people talk about this being groundbreaking as TV's first interracial kiss, they're referring to a mouth-to-mouth kiss, not a quick peck on the cheek or forehead. WaxTadpole (talk) 17:36, 22 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

I suppose the point is that it wasn't as groundbreaking as people think, given the multiple other instances of interracial kisses that have been uncovered.Newzild (talk) 20:22, 7 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Who wrote Maiden Wine? edit

Does Spok's Maiden Wine song come from some Star Trek writer's head, or is it cribbed from some old book? Google only seems to turn up this episode, but I wouldn't necessarily expect it to turn up a line from an old medieval ballad or whatnot. -- Epastore 15:25, 24 June 2006 (UTC)Reply

I read somewhere that Leonard Nimoy wrote the poem himself, and that it appears in one of his books of poetry. Can't find the details on it, though. — Loadmaster (talk) 22:45, 19 November 2011 (UTC)Reply
Nimoy sings it on his 1969 studio album The Touch of Leonard Nimoy (to a slightly different tune), which implies that he did indeed pen the words. — Loadmaster (talk) 00:36, 20 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Spock/Uhura Trivia Point edit

I made a slight correction to the blurb about Spock being scripted to kiss Uhura. Shatner discussed that in "Star Trek Memories," and I'm 99% certain that he and/or Nichelle said it was supposed to be Kirk/Uhura in the original script, that the Spock/Uhura change was suggested (or may have even been temporarily implemented) during all the fights over that scene, and that Shatner finally put his foot down and said, "No, I'm doing it." Unfortunately I don't have a copy of "Star Trek Memories" handy any more - I loaned it to someone I haven't seen in about five years - but if anyone else still has a copy I know it's all in there somewhere, so that we can get that point properly cited (and be 100% certain it's correct). --Zequist 15:13, 7 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

The problem was Spock's popularity. You can find a cross reference in Nimoy's I am Spock. These days they're all friends, but back then they were working for a living and competing for airtime and money. Shatner was hired to play the lead and he served his ego (and pocketbook) at the expense of the others. It was dog-eat-dog. Initially, Spock kissing Uhura was considered "Safer" than Kirk kissing her. Spock was not only green-ish, but alien, and impotent. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.113.49.126 (talk) 17:18, 18 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Dubious edit

I placed a "dubious" tag on the claim in the article that the episode is loosely based on the story Telek because the reference given is the The Encyclopedia of Speculative Fiction article on the episode, which, like Wikipedia, is an online publication that anyone can edit. I cannot find any reliable source in a Google search. It all appears to be opinion. If it is true, great, but let's see a reliable source. The writer of the episode deserves that. Thanks. 5Q5 (talk) 18:14, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

The link given was to a fan site/wiki, which just doesn't cut it as a proper cite. I scrubbed it and a agree with the above. Alastairward (talk) 20:32, 22 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Aristophanes edit

The spoken-word bit that Alexander speaks ("brekekekex, ko-ax, ko-ax") is a direct reference to "The Frogs," a play by Aristophanes. In the play, those syllables are repeated from time to time by The Frog Chorus. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.86.34.1 (talk) 16:35, 1 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

"not really the first" edit

The section on the kiss begins with what is conspicuously someone's research project on interracial kissing. And without commenting on the quality of said research, the fact that the research had to be done at all suggests that many or even all of these prior incidents didn't "count". I question, for instance, whether presenting France Nuyen as an alien or Barbara Luna as a woman of no particular race was seen by anyone at the time as significantly "interracial". I also question whether Emergency – Ward 10 was ever seen in the USA before the days of videotape sales. The evidence presented suggests that the claim of priority is true within the confines of a kiss between black and white adults as a deliberate part of a US program. Mangoe (talk) 16:14, 9 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

The fact that research had to be done at all doesn't mean that those incidents don't count, it just means that the whole thing isn't very important, but the nature of Star Trek fandom means that anything which makes Star Trek fans think Star Trek is important in the real world is going to get blown out of proportion. When one incident involves Star Trek and another, similar, incident doesn't, the one which involves Star Trek is always going to be mentioned a lot more simply because anything whatsoever related to Star Trek is going to get mentioned a lot more. It's how the Internet works.
Also. remember the whole verifiability-not-truth kerfluffle. Wikipedia shouldn't be showing false or misleading information just because a source says so. Claiming that that's the first interracial kiss is going to mislead our readers.
Furthermore, although you suggest that "the claim of priority is true within the confines of a kiss between black and white adults as a deliberate part of a US program", that is a highly qualified statement which is certainly not the way it's described in the article. And even your version of the statement doesn't include all the qualifiers that the claim is subject to--you'd have to say something like "within the confines of a kiss on the mouth between black and white human adult characters as a deliberate part of a US fictional program". Ken Arromdee (talk) 04:05, 18 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
I appreciate your objections, and I would agree there is room for improvement. My issue is with the research. Someone came along, apparently on their own, and hunted up various earlier examples which, to my mind, are not really equivalent cases. If we could find someone outside the Trek world to address this point, I would be much happier. So let's see: OK, there are many, many, many citations out there for "first interracial kiss". I don't think that this is something that only registered in fandom. Here's a bit more subtle view, though:

The first black-white kiss on American network television is often credited to the Star Trek episode "Plato's Stepchildren" aired on November 22, 1968. The kiss occurred between Captain Kirk (William Shatner) and Lieutenant Uhura (Michelle Nichols), an African American. It was the first kiss that was not sterotyped, in that Lieutenant Uhura was not a maid, housekeeper, or some other variant of the mammy caricature. [....] Star Trek did in fact feature other interracial kisses: in the episode "Space Seed" (1967) a white woman fals in love with and kisses a Hispanic. On December 20, 1968, shortly after the Shatner–Nichols kiss, in the episode "Elaan of Troyius" Shatner kissed half French, half Vietnamese Nguyen Van-Nga. The fact that neither of these episodes received any particular comment would suggest that resistance was greatest to interracial kissing when it involved blacks and whites. (Citron, Lana (2011). A Compendium of Kisses: Facts, Quotes and Curiosities. Harlequin. p. 189.)

Obviously this isn't the best authority around, and one can find citations for the Sammy Davis Jr./Nancy Sinatra kiss and for the British case. But everyone seems to think that this is the one that mattered; I was unable to find anyone dismissive of that point. If we talk about the earlier cases, we need to avoid quibbling them to death, as was the case before. Mangoe (talk) 04:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
It really isn't true that everyone thinks it's the one that mattered. You have Star Trek fans (and people who repeat what they say third- and fourth- hand without researching, which the book you quote is) claiming it matters. You also have a lot of people who think it doesn't matter. But people who think something doesn't matter aren't going to bother talking about it (unless there was a market for Star Trek fan debunking, which there's not, or unless it becomes a political hot potato like creationism). After all, it's not important--people don't talk much about unimportant things!
The fact remains that saying that it's the first interracial kiss on US TV gives readers a false impression. We're not supposed to do that. If you don't want to mislead people, you need to either put all the qualifiers in (and there are so many qualifiers that putting them all in would look comical) or quote the other examples. Ken Arromdee (talk) 14:55, 18 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
Well, my problem with the previous version was that it too looked like a kind of fannish obsession, only of a different kind of fan. My personal reading of the evidence is that the various precedents that were listed before I excised them mostly represented situations which were either not truly comparable (all the non-blacks and the kiss on the cheek) or weren't seen in the US (the British case); the Sammy Davis Jr. incident is the only one that seems to have come close. Do we have documentation of a reaction to that? My sense is that Roddenberry and the actors thought they were doing something daring, and that the Paramount execs thought he was doing something risky (though of course that's filtered through the production crew), but that in the end there wasn't that much reaction, either because it wasn't seen by many or because people shrugged it off. I would tend to bet on the latter because if the former were the case, we would know of a later kiss which did draw a big reaction.
If you can point me to a reason to believe that people think that it was not the one that mattered, I'd love to see it, and I would especially like to see references for another one that did matter more. Right now I'm thinking that the best compromise version perhaps would be to say "widely (but inaccurately) reported as the first interracial kiss" in the text and put the list of precedents in a footnote. The old version came across to me as a fannishness battle between TV nerds and SF nerds, and it disrupted the flow of the text too much. Mangoe (talk) 18:04, 20 May 2013 (UTC)Reply
The "goal" (claim) keeps changing as Star Trek keeps losing. The claim went from: (1) the first interracial kiss on TV; to (2) the first interracial kiss on American TV; then (3) the first white and black kiss on American TV; and now (4) the first interracial kiss on TV that "mattered" to "people."
  1. failed: that UK program beat Star Trek.
  2. failed: I just added info re. The Wild, Wild West having a white-Asian kiss (intentional & voluntary, not involuntary & coerced like here) over 2 years earlier. (But I guess to some (racists?), Asians don't "matter" (i.e., count).)
  3. it sounds like the Davis-Sinatra kiss beat it. (I'm not familiar with this, so will not say.)
  4. the latest standard: who decides what "matters"? How do you measure if something "matters" and to what extent? Who are these "people" who decide how much it "mattered"? Take a survey nowadays? Of whom? Can't go back in time and take a survey (of the entire US population?). Go by what people w/a bias or vested interest in the conclusion say (of those who are still alive) or said?
Seems like Trekkies, having invented this goal -- "Star Trek had the first interracial kiss on TV!" -- keep moving the goal (redefining it), in order to say Star Trek still wins. Trekkies should just admit they were wrong and be done w/it. Phantom in ca (talk) 04:44, 26 October 2013 (UTC)Reply
Guys, is it really that important? Here in Germany we stopped bitching about race in 1945. Ok, so a generation later it was still a big deal in the US, but that was half a century ago. Do we still need this in article about an episode of an old TV show? 17:54, 14 April 2023 (UTC) 2001:9E8:4616:B600:81A6:AD7E:63BE:5790 (talk) 17:54, 14 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

File:Plato's Stepchildren kiss.jpg listed for deletion edit

A file that this article uses, File:Plato's Stepchildren kiss.jpg, has been listed at Wikipedia:Files for deletion. Please see the discussion to see why it has been listed (you may have to search for the title of the image to find its entry). Feel free to add your opinion on the matter below the nomination. Thank you. postdlf (talk) 13:43, 31 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

misleading quote from a critic edit

The following, although sourced, is blatantly wrong. Kirk is forced by the telekinesis to kiss Uhura, it is not a decision of his to save the ship.

As one TV critic put it, "The underlying message was, 'If I have to kiss you to save my ship and crew, by God, I'll do it.'"[3

I'll remove it.--345Kai (talk) 19:56, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

poor episode edit

No one has mentioned that "Plato's Stepchildren" is a poor episode. It's contrived to Make Several Important Points, and is so heavy-handed that it's embarrassing. WilliamSommerwerck (talk) 18:14, 6 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Well, calling it a poor episode is a matter of opinion, which is not proper for a Wikipedia article. Now, I agree with you -- I also think it is a poor episode, a VERY poor episode, the poorest of all original Trek episodes, but, you see, that is my opinion, not a fact. You can certainly link to a critical article, or such citation, where someone has called it a poor episode and state "Joe Bigshot, reviewing the episode for the Blah Blah Journal, called it a poor episode." See what I mean? Sir Rhosis (talk) 04:33, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

William Shatner, in one of his books about his Star Trek years, also thought that this was a poor episode... (If I can find the book and reference, I will place it up.) Though "Plato's Stepchildren" was visually imaginative - thanks to the Art Director Walter M. Jefferies - it was also cruel and unsavory at certain points, even outlandish or absurd. I say this as a fan of Star Trek, and of the third season in particular. I believe that note should be placed up concerning this (so I agree with the first comment made here): but not necessarily that this was a poor or offensive episode, rather that it is controversial. We should not let the "first kiss" overwhelm all notes and debate. (John G. Lewis (talk) 19:05, 15 April 2018 (UTC))Reply

I've added the Shatner quote. Richard75 (talk) 18:48, 27 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

Trivia edit

I cut the following sentence that seems to me like unimportant trivia. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:53, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

Professional dancer Armando Gonzales doubled as Spock to perform the [[flamenco]] near Captain Kirk's head in the first act.<ref>{{cite book|last1=Okuda|first1=Michael|last2=Okuda|first2=Denise|title=The Star Trek Encyclopedia: A Reference Guide to the Future|location=New York|publisher=Pocket Books|date=1999|isbn=0671034758|page=379}}</ref>

Kiss not "passionate" edit

Beyond the issue of IF the kiss is any kind of first, there is an obvious attempt in the article to dismiss other TV kisses with "many of these incidents were not portrayed as the passionate kiss between Kirk and Uhura was". This is an outright mischaracterization of the action in question. In the episode the characters are being FORCED to press their lips together AGAINST THEIR WILL, which makes it an act of battery, not passion. As such it barely qualifies as a kiss at all. This hand waving is a bald attempt by fans to treat the show something groundbreaking at the expense of factuality.

Frankly I believe the article address both the claim and that it is disputed should read something like, "The forced kiss between Kirk and Uhura is widely cited as the first interracial kiss on television, but this claim is disputed and debated." Trying to prove otherwise is beyond the scope of the article.MrNeutronSF (talk) 10:06, 20 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'm sorry, but I almost find your argument to be akin to "well, yes, it was the first death shown on TV, but it was a murder so it was forced and doesn't count". The fact is there were other white-to-black kisses prior to this one, a notable one being Nancy Sinatra being kissed on the cheek by Sammy Davis, jr. The use of the word "passionate" is a descriptor of the kind of kiss that was shown in the episode, not a word portraying the meaning behind the kiss. If you can formulate a better description that meets your criteria and still manages to single out this kiss as being unique, then I encourage a bold edit! StarHOG (Talk) 19:32, 20 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
But, "passionate" is used to describe the "meaning behind" a kiss. If one wanted to describe the type of kiss in this scene, one would use something like "mouth-to-mouth kiss" or "an open-mouth kiss". A "passionate kiss" means one that is motivated by intense emotions (ie.: by passion), and does not even mean that the kiss itself is mouth-to-mouth (for example, a kiss on a hand or neck can equally be a passionate kiss if it is motivated by intense emotion). Since neither Kirk nor Uhura are performing the kiss by their own volition, it is by definition without passion, thus it can not be a "passionate kiss." — al-Shimoni (talk) 12:31, 9 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
I hear you, but we are describing the kiss so that it is not confused with the kiss on the cheek style kiss that Sammy Davis, jr gave to Nancy Sinatra. Again, you went in to the reason behind the kiss argument, which is moot, we need to describe what kind of kiss we saw - the first of its kind between a pink and a brown on TV. So, I'm by no means an authority on what to call this kiss, or how to distinguish it, but it must be done someway or another. Passionate does give the connotation of a "lover's" kiss or something. I'm certainly open to suggestions! StarHOG (Talk) 20:26, 10 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
I would think "an open-mouth kiss" or "a mouth-to-mouth kiss" or "a French kiss" could be acceptable (though, I think the latter of the three often implies the use of the tongue which I do not think we have clear evidence for here). — al-Shimoni (talk) 21:05, 10 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
No we don't, in fact, there are rumors that many shots were taken of this scene, one in which their lips didn't make physical contact. I've watched the scene many times, and it almost looks like they don't touch, but I've never found a reference to which take they took. So what now? StarHOG (Talk) 21:34, 11 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Not sure what the relevance of what happened in real life is. Such a stance would throw any article about a scene involving special effects, CGI, simulated sex, camera tricks, etc., into chaos as now we would have to tiptoe around what happened in reality rather than what was portrayed on the finished product. That would also completely eliminate "passionate kiss" from even being considered unless you want to assert William Shatner's and Nichelle Nichols's kiss (or non-kiss) was motivated by their own emotions for each other in real life (in other words, you're disqualifying your own preferred candidate). Taking that course is just a rabbit hole I don't think anyone on Wikipedia would accept. — al-Shimoni (talk) 02:18, 20 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Why not just accurately describe it for what it is? i.e. "are forced to perform a mouth to mouth kiss," which disambiguates it from a peck on the cheek and doesn't mischaracterize it by assigning unnecessary adjectives to it?MrNeutronSF (talk) 04:32, 31 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
I'd like to reopen this discussion. "Passionate" is just not the right word to describe the kiss. It implies desire, where this was explicitly nonconsensual. It's problematic and opinion at best. Perhaps "sexualized" would take care of StarHOG's concern of differentiating it from a cheek kiss and the lack of confirmation of their lips touching.
It seems as though most folks in this discussion are in favor of removing "passionate" at least. How can we reach consensus? MestizaMetaphor (talk) 16:19, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply
I agree with the removal of the word "passionate". In its place, I think "open-mouth" could be a useful replacement for designating the important of the kiss in its historical context while removing any speculation of the intent behind it.
Whether or not to include a specific caveat later in the article is an issue I haven't made up my mind on. I'd love to hear some other thoughts and opinions. What would be the benefit of explicitly stating that the kiss was, in the episode's plot, "forced" or "demanded"? What would be the benefit of omitting that?
So currently, I support an intermediate edit which removes "passionate" and replaces it with "open-mouth" or some other derivative as suggested by al-Shimoni. RFZYNSPY (talk) 20:20, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply
I think an easy way to reach consensus is to propose an alternate wording. No matter how much you think "passionate" doesn't fit, it does work to describe the sort of kiss that is occurring. How would you prefer to describe it? Remember, this kiss MUST be distinguishable from the simple kiss on the cheek that Sammy Davis, jr. gave to Nancy Sinatra years before on TV. I poersonally oppose "open mouth" because there is no evidence on screen that it was an open-mouth kiss. StarHOG (Talk) 20:36, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

How about “mouth-to-mouth kiss”? RFZYNSPY (talk) 20:52, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

It was groundbreaking for the US television market. Additionally, the mass media and television history community routinely states that this was the first interracial kiss on US television. I have no problem with changing the wording or description of this kiss, as we have discussed above. But the NOTEABLE nature of this kiss has to be acknowledged, not white-washed by throwing other interracial kisses into the mix. It seems some people are obsessed with downplaying or trying to "disprove" the claim that has been assigned to this television event. I, for one, would like to see some consensus on how to present all of this in the article on this talk page. StarHOG (Talk) 13:47, 8 August 2021 (UTC)Reply