Talk:Pig Bride

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Allen4names in topic External links modified

Discussion

edit

the article needs a lot of work. Who ever cares about the article should discuss any trivial information that might fall into this. A few things i would like to look over, the grammar in this article is very bad, you don't write the volume description over 200 words, and the article needs a plot. ALso remove any characters that are not main characters. We should at least add the manhwa cover along with who published it and who created it.Bread Ninja (talk) 16:06, 24 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. I created the article but I have stopped reading Pig Bride. Therefore, I'm not in a position to write plot summaries etc. but I would be more than happy to tidy up the article. Perhaps a more dedicated reader could fill in the plot details. I would be happy to sort out a series summary, character summary etc. if that was the case. What about you, Bread Ninja? Are you interested in contributing or just dropping by? Ray and jub (talk) 16:16, 24 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

I am definitely contributing, though my edits are often re-edited, but at least it's still the same thing i have said. I'm basically doing the same thing you are, fixing mostly the character section but once i find all the volume listing i will add the ref and citations along with the list of the manhwua volumes so it could be slightly more professionalBread Ninja (talk) 16:28, 24 August 2009 (UTC)Reply


Cover Image

edit

I already added what's needed for the cover, So someone should find a cover image and pace it in .Bread Ninja (talk) 16:36, 25 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Reviews

edit

--KrebMarkt 09:14, 18 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

edit
GA toolbox
Reviewing
This review is transcluded from Talk:Pig Bride/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll give this a review. Wizardman 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Just a note: Talk:Pig Bride/GA1 exists, but I got to the fixes too late for re-review. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:23, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Duly noted on the above, looks like everything was addressed there. Here are the issues I found:

  • ""Pig Bride" - a young blonde girl who hides her supposedly disfigured face under a pig's—face mask." the dashes there don't seem right. I'd remove the second one and replace the first with a comma.
  • "and the entire series was reviewed in negatively by" rm in
  • Si-Joon and Si Joon are used interchangably; keep it consistent (I'm fairly certain that with the hyphen is correct). Check the other names as well, since I see others that vary.
  • "before arriving the chosen mask," arriving at the

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:26, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Wizardman Yes, there were a few other issues with the hyphens which I fixed. Should be resolved now. Consistency in naming usage is always good! ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:48, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply
Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:33, 20 February 2015 (UTC)Reply
edit

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Pig Bride. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

 Y An editor has reviewed this edit and fixed any errors that were found.

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—cyberbot IITalk to my owner:Online 11:47, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  DoneAllen4names (contributions) 16:38, 3 April 2016 (UTC)Reply