Talk:Pig Bride
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editthe article needs a lot of work. Who ever cares about the article should discuss any trivial information that might fall into this. A few things i would like to look over, the grammar in this article is very bad, you don't write the volume description over 200 words, and the article needs a plot. ALso remove any characters that are not main characters. We should at least add the manhwa cover along with who published it and who created it.Bread Ninja (talk) 16:06, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
- Agreed. I created the article but I have stopped reading Pig Bride. Therefore, I'm not in a position to write plot summaries etc. but I would be more than happy to tidy up the article. Perhaps a more dedicated reader could fill in the plot details. I would be happy to sort out a series summary, character summary etc. if that was the case. What about you, Bread Ninja? Are you interested in contributing or just dropping by? Ray and jub (talk) 16:16, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
I am definitely contributing, though my edits are often re-edited, but at least it's still the same thing i have said. I'm basically doing the same thing you are, fixing mostly the character section but once i find all the volume listing i will add the ref and citations along with the list of the manhwua volumes so it could be slightly more professionalBread Ninja (talk) 16:28, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Cover Image
editI already added what's needed for the cover, So someone should find a cover image and pace it in .Bread Ninja (talk) 16:36, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
Reviews
edit- The 2009 Manga Hall of Shame Inductees (sic) and see Yen press reaction. cheers.
- MangaLife: vol. 3
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll give this a review. Wizardman 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Just a note: Talk:Pig Bride/GA1 exists, but I got to the fixes too late for re-review. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:23, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
Duly noted on the above, looks like everything was addressed there. Here are the issues I found:
- ""Pig Bride" - a young blonde girl who hides her supposedly disfigured face under a pig's—face mask." the dashes there don't seem right. I'd remove the second one and replace the first with a comma.
- "and the entire series was reviewed in negatively by" rm in
- Si-Joon and Si Joon are used interchangably; keep it consistent (I'm fairly certain that with the hyphen is correct). Check the other names as well, since I see others that vary.
- "before arriving the chosen mask," arriving at the
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:26, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman Yes, there were a few other issues with the hyphens which I fixed. Should be resolved now. Consistency in naming usage is always good! ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:48, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:33, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman Yes, there were a few other issues with the hyphens which I fixed. Should be resolved now. Consistency in naming usage is always good! ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:48, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
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