Talk:Morane-Borel military monoplane

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Waylon1104 in topic three people weighing at least 300 kilograms

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

I will take a look at this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

It took longer than expected to come back to this one, but now here. There's not much to this article though:

Lead

Design

  • The military monoplane was derived from the company's: suggest "The military monoplane was derived from Morane-Borel's..."
  • There is a disambig tag on undercarriage
  • Maybe break into two paragraphs at the point Lateral control...

History

  • French Army decided to sponsor a competitive event to be held at Reims in October. Add the link to the competition.
    • Linked in the lede.
  • The company leadership... suggest writing the name of the company here as well.

Specifications

  • Nothing is listed under the "Performance" heading?
    • No performance data has survived.

Other stuff

  • Image tag OK
  • Best I can figure from Google translate, the Hartmann ref supports what is cited to it. AGF on the others
  • Disambig tag on undercarriage as noted above

That's it for me, placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:24, 6 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Sorry to take so long to respond. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:29, 10 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
OK, passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:46, 17 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 21:42, 2 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

 
An oblique view of the Morane-Borel military monoplane.

Improved to Good Article status by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 01:02, 22 November 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   Either hook is interesting and are well within prescribed limits. Article is long enough and has 'GA' status and is eligible for a DYK presentation. Sources check. Image is in the public domain. Earwig detects no copy-vio issues. Article is Good-to-Go, -- Gwillhickers (talk) 18:41, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

three people weighing at least 300 kilograms edit

Is it possible? How could they find so many Overweight people? Waylon1104 (talk) 10:55, 3 May 2023 (UTC)Reply