Talk:Jim Dillard (gridiron football)
Latest comment: 6 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic GA Review
Jim Dillard (gridiron football) was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (December 22, 2023, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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A fact from Jim Dillard (gridiron football) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 August 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:19, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that Jim Dillard (pictured) declined an offer to play in the National Football League? Source: "Dillard skipped the NFL to play eight years of Canadian football, a decision he doesn't regret." (NewsOK)
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:54, 25 July 2022 (UTC).
- Thoroughly expanded, well referenced, neutral, with no close paraphrasing. Hook is interesting and cited. Image is of good quality and appears to have an appropriate license. QPQ is done. 97198 (talk) 11:10, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:16, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- Added jersey numbers and drafts to infobox
- Changed the NFL teams in the infobox to offseason/practice only
- Added Players of Canadian football from Oklahoma and American football defensive backs cats
- The infobox says he was a West all star in 1962 but he is not listed at 1962 CFL season and the StatsCrew ref says it was 1963. Also, this should be noted in the body of the article.
- "Described as one of Oklahoma State's "all-time greats", source just says in the rushing category. So maybe change it to ""all-time great" runners.
- "selected both in the NFL Draft (by the Baltimore Colts, 51st overall) and AFL Draft" add 1962 to both of those. I was going to suggest adding 1962 to the beginning of the sentence instead but the draft actually took place in Dec 1961.
- "He was named an all-star selection in his first season with Ottawa" Change it to East all star or something like that
- "his way to a third all-star selection" Suggest just changing it to say second East all star selection or something like that
- Do you know when he signed with the Colts?
- I suggest expanding his career stats totals somewhat. He did have 19 receiving TDs also.
- What is the Tulsa Knights?
- What's the Oil Bowl Hall of Fame?
- Add his All Star selections to the lead.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:19, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:14, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
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