Talk:Erwin Arnada

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Erwin Arnada/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 22:29, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

• Thanks for offering to review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:44, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Initial thoughts

• Not a quick-fail
• "Arnada applied to be a photographer for the daily newspaper Kompas." is not in the citation given.

• Coulda sworn I had added it. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

• for filmography.

• Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

• The way you have set up the references is somewhat bizarre. Why?

--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:24, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

• Not bizarre, standard for articles I've written (short footnote style); it makes the article text a heck of a lot easier to read in edit mode. Compare FAs Andjar Asmara, Gagak Item, Sair Tjerita Siti Akbari, Chrisye, etc. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

Right ok. I have re-read it and I think it meets all the criteria. Although having images is not part of the GA criteria, I would recommend adding them if they are freely available, although my somewhat cursory search failed to turn up any.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality: Yes. -

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources: Yes, with short style listing multiple online sources -

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: Since there are no images, this does not apply.

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: doesn't seem to be possible so technically

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 12:17, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

Erwin Arnada

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Result: If it cannot be updated, that is not the article's fault. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:34, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Article is missing post-2013 information. Z1720 (talk) 18:38, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

@Z1720: I will comment here that the article mentions that as of 2013, he seems quite content to slide into obscurity, which may explain lack of following information. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:47, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

• Thanks for that note. I determined that the article needed to be updated when I saw statements like, "A movie based on his life is planned..." and "As of 2013 Arnada has been involved with nine feature films..." I am not sure how to research and update these statements. Z1720 (talk) 20:08, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.