Talk:Boys Will Be Boys (Dua Lipa song)

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Review: July 19, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 2 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

"to unlike" → "too unlike"
"in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
"schoolgame" should be written as two words.
Add a comma after the first use of "Additionally".
Remove the comma after "in the chorus".
"kids choir" → "kids' choir" or "childrens' choir" (both times)
Add a comma after "the first verse".
"have have" - typo?
Remove the hyphen between "amp-up".
"mix crafted remix" - reword
as "lushly orchestrated ballad" → as a "lushly orchestrated ballad"
"songs is" → "song is"
Sort categories in alphabetical order.
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:23, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: thanks for the review! I have put in place all your comments. I hope everything looks okay now. Let me know if anything else needs to be addressed. LOVI 33 19:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

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