Talk:Astrith Baltsan

Latest comment: 1 month ago by AvivBn263 in topic November 2021

November 2021 edit

Regarding the tone template, the following are to be noted:

  • The career and awards list is essentially a list in prose form, better expression needed. Also, one needs to actually describe her career and not just make a list of awards.
  • The tone is more of a one usually employed on a personal website or other such things, is not quite promotional, but quasi-promotional-like. Needs to improve, a lot. Made some edits in this regard. MxWondrous (talk) 13:06, 3 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hey. I stumbled upon this article. I saw the templates and naturally wanted to improve this article so they can be gone--but after reading the article, I'm sturggling to understand the problem with it.
Although the career segment is quite boastful, it's factually correct and in my opinion fitting.
Can you explain more specifically what needs to be changed? I'm quite keen to improve this article and would like some explanation on what work needs to be done.
Thanks. AvivBn263 (talk) 17:08, 8 April 2024 (UTC)Reply