A fact from Ashley Freiberg appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 19 June 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Three things that jump out at me before conducting a proper review:
The article seems to finish in 2018; is there any information on what she has done since?
No information about any racing activities past that year is available since she has not competed in any notable series. MWright96(talk) 10:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Any chance of any pictures? Even if it is just of cars in one of the series she competed in, for some visual context?
Ref #15, what makes "Speedsport Magazine" a reliable source?
The source you refer to is in a partnership with Auto motor und sport, one of Germany's leading motoring magazines. MWright96(talk) 09:16, 18 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Ref #22, #27, #35 and #38, "SportsCar365" is the website, "John Dagys Media" is the publisher.
Added; Google Translate's version was quite humorous ;-) MWright96(talk) 09:16, 18 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
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Could you move the Personal life section to the top, given it mostly includes information that chronologically goes there? When I read that her father took her to Ventura, California, I wanted to know how close to home that was, but I had to go all the way to the bottom to find out where she was from.
"..after playing basketball, skateboarding, soccer and studying karate.." I'm not keen on the construction here, because "playing skateboarding" seems odd to me. How about "..after skateboarding, playing basketball and soccer, and studying karate.."?
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Overall: GA - appropriately sourced, with a neutral tone of voice, no copyvio issues. Nominated in time, QPQ done, interesting hook. Good to go. I prefer the original hook to ALT1 but both are fine. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:17, 19 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Returned from prep per discussion at WP:DYK#Prep 1: Race winner. Can you try something without a "first woman" angle please? Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 11 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Yoninah: I do not believe I can create an appropriate alternative hook for this subject for reasons that it would not interest the general reader. MWright96(talk) 10:49, 13 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
GA - appropriately sourced, with a neutral tone of voice, no copyvio issues. Nominated in time, QPQ done, interesting hook. Good to go. I prefer the original hook to ALT1 but both are fine. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:17, 19 May 2020 (UTC)
Returned from prep per discussion at WP:DYK#Prep 1: Race winner. Can you try something without a "first woman" angle please? Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 11 June 2020 (UTC)
Thanks. Pinging @BennyOnTheLoose: to review ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
As per above. (@Yoninah: If this isn't what you meant, let me know. Thanks.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:11, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
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