Talk:Ahmad Shah Durrani

Latest comment: 6 months ago by Noorullah21 in topic Chosen successor
Former good article nomineeAhmad Shah Durrani was a History good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Section "Central Asia" edit

This long section has little connection with Ahmad Durrani and the relevance of him for the region the section deals with, is unclear.--Severino (talk) 19:26, 27 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

I completely concur. - LouisAragon (talk) 04:27, 26 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

I agree and except the two last sentences, the whole section should be deleted. It is longwinded and includes random information that has nothing to do with Durrani. It also includes some 19th century style racialist thinking of mad dog, to which many Afghans are unfortunately very much attracted. There is no reason this needs to be here. 88.153.22.211 (talk) 12:26, 2 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

thirding this, completely irrelevant ramblings, pretty much all of it is by Milktaco, which appears to be a hacked account, how is this still up after 5 years ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.143.179.180 (talk) 18:37, 23 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Durrani poetry edit

The chosen poetry is faked. It's not the original poem. Its a fabricated post-WWII piece. I would advise to take it down or to replace that section with another poem. In general that section is irrelevant for the article. 46.114.3.91 (talk) 14:20, 1 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

New section edit

Added Battle of attock Battle of lahore Battle of peshwar with citations From their respective main articles Please take a review And suggest some changes if needed Thank you. Bhima Palavīṉamāṉa (talk) 15:30, 21 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Bhima Palavīṉamāṉa, don't copy paste from other articles. If you are going toadd that info rewrite it from reliable sources, not just copy pasting. Kailanmapper (talk) 17:20, 26 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Place of birth edit

According to Nejatie's The Pearl of Pearls: The Abdālī-Durrānī Confederacy and Its Transformation under Aḥmad Shāh, Durr-i Durrān,[1] "The fact that numerous sources composed in the ruler’s lifetime consistently connect him in his youth to Herat justifies the stance of Ghubār and others that Aḥmad Shāh was, in fact, born in the Herat region, around the time his father passed away and when the Abdālī leadership still exercised authority over the province." Some of the sources cited about Multan seems colonialist, not scholarly. Also, the Encyclopaedia of Islam cited is a tertiary source so it may not be really helpful in such a dispute, as Wikipedia favors scholarly WP:SECONDARY sources. My solution to this dispute would be to mention Herat, the most likely place of birth, in the infobox, but also mention Multan in the body of the article. The opinion of other editors is welcome here. Thanks, Khestwol (talk) 07:38, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Removing 6 academic sources because they are "colonialist" (whatever that is supposed to mean) or apparently "tertiary" in favour of a PHD thesis is not constructive. In fact, per WP:UNDUE the Multan suggestion should be given more weight. Please read WP:POV. EDIT: For those who are interested in fixing the WP:UNDUE issue of this article, I found even more sources that state he was born in Multan, that's 9 sources now; [2] [3] [4] --HistoryofIran (talk) 11:33, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
The removal of high quality sources like Encyclopedia of Islam in order to replace them by a PhD sounds like tendentious editing ...---Wikaviani (talk) (contribs) 23:09, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
I do understand the viewpoint of both sides, however I believe that Abdali may have been born in Herat, my reasoning for this being would be the main point; the Sadozai Sultanate of Herat, where the Sadozai dynasty, under where Ahmad Shah's dynasty ALSO came from, and the region where his father was also likely leading, I believe that Abdali was likely born in Herat because of this, as the Sadozai Sultanate of Herat was a independent nation during the turbulent period that was of Safavid Persia during this period of time, fighting over the concurrent Hotak rebellion, which would attempt to also usurp main Persia. Noorullah21 (talk) 00:27, 2 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
What we believe is irrelevant, this is what 9 scholarly sources state, including EI3. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:41, 2 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
Yes, even the main source I use, also believes that Ahmad Shah was in fact, born in Multan. Noorullah21 (talk) 00:00, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
For those still interested in rewriting this article per WP:UNDUE and WP:POV, this is the previous revision [5] before Khestwol removed the vast majority of the citations support a Multan origin, instead of organizing them into one single citation (like the Macedon bit in the lede of Alexander the Great). --HistoryofIran (talk) 12:21, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
As we can see in the earlier version, the refs were poorly formatted, with repetitions, and tagged as "excessive citations" since August 2021. It needed trimming down. Khestwol (talk) 12:33, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
No problem, I'll later format them like the afromentioned article. --HistoryofIran (talk) 12:38, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
Yes that would be great, thanks HistoryofIran. I think the Early life section can be expanded with more details about his father, mother, and family, from reliable refs. Khestwol (talk) 12:57, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Possible revamp of page edit

@HistoryofIran Hey, I am asking users who are occasionally active on these pages, but I am just notifying you guys, that I will likely be working on a revamp on Ahmad Shah's page soon, just like how I did to Timur Shah Durrani, however I might do Zaman Shah Durrani, Mahmud Shah Durrani, and Shah Shuja Durrani, and Dost Mohammad Khan first. As I already revamped the pages, but newer sources I obtained have shed light to expand a lot. Noorullah21 (talk) 00:36, 2 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

I was planning on expanding this soon myself, but it seems you may have beat me to it. Please be aware of WP:RS and WP:SPS, I can see some of the sources you have used are not reliable, such as James M. Perry, who is not really a historian. --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:43, 2 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your notice, however, if you actually plan to expand it yourself, go ahead, I am completely fine with it, I am, well, as you can see currently focused on many other pages as stated above before I can move onto this page, so by all means, if you wish to do it yourself, go ahead. @HistoryofIran Noorullah21 (talk) 01:25, 2 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
@HistoryofIran I began working on revamping the page on my main page in a sub page, you can check it out yourself if you want to see progress so far. Noorullah21 (talk) 04:27, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
in "sandbox 2" Noorullah21 (talk) 04:27, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • In addition to suggestion by HistoryofIran on keeping WP:RS into consideration, the citation by Afghan Court Chronicle, Faiz Mohammed Kateb Hazara is highly unreliable, not just due to its age but also in particular due to agenda behind the commissioning of the book by Emir Habibullah Khan which the Emir had full control over the finished product such as editing, censorship such as removing unpleasant views, and to review the work in progress. I would suggest using secondary source. MehmoodS (talk) 14:16, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
    @MehmoodS The source I am using, was the copy that was untouched by the emir, and was translated into English. It is relatively unbiased but just brings a lot of religious points when talking into the book about its history. Their was multiple copies of Siraj-Al-Tarawik, and the version this appears by is relatively good, just a lot of religious standpoints brought into it, like for example calling a person by their islamic titles ie "hajji" Noorullah21 (talk) 17:14, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
    Age-wise is debatable, which is why whenever I usually look through, I use a secondary source to back the point up if it seems like it may have been a old source, however, the book actually stands against the test of time pretty well, for example, it refers to the Ghurid Empire as a Persian dynasty, rather then an AFGHAN one, which was commonly believed back then. It seems to follow what modern sources detest about the time, and the 2012 translation also usually tries to put footnotes in different parts of the book where information could have been changed over time, so I think the source is still fine to use, but would be better if backed by a secondary source in some areas. Which is why I am probably going to use Drahm's source to back it up in certain areas. Noorullah21 (talk) 17:17, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
    The revised version on which Amir Habibullah wanted appears to be the "Serāj al-tawārī (Lamp of Histories)". Noorullah21 (talk) 17:19, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
    Yes certainly you can use book by Jonathan Lee/Drahm as secondary source. But when it comes to book by Fayz, the study of this book particularly, states that it was overlooked by Emir and went through censorship by Emir himself and also it wasn't written by Fayz independently but rather commissioned by Emir to fulfill agenda. Book is also biased when it comes to opponents where words such as infidels, Kafirs are used. Also, the age is issue especially when secondary sources are required and do exist if searched. Even though it was translated in 2012, it still is at most a primary source. I did get opinion on it on WP:RSN about two months ago where other editors considered it unreliable as well but then I got busy with other articles and this got backlogged. There are secondary sources by academicians which you can use. MehmoodS (talk) 17:41, 4 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wife edit

Ahmad Shah had a wife named Mimtta, she was the mother of Timur Shah. Kindly add this. Aurangzayb (talk) 10:31, 30 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Source? --HistoryofIran (talk) 10:32, 30 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hello i am a specialist researcher I have PhD in history and I came to multan and I see lots of profe that amhed Saha was born in multani pls contact me edit

Contact in Ocford university 82.5.103.31 (talk) 17:44, 25 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi Professor edit

Yes he was born in Multan. One big family 2604:3D08:987E:0:6D12:F0FC:A929:1BEB (talk) 11:49, 20 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Familly tree is wrong edit

A few personalities from Pakistan have been added that stress that they are descendants of Ahamd Shah Abdali just because they share the same last name as him. That's not how it works, Durrani is a large tribe which are often divided by sub-tribes. These people are not a descendant of him, they just belonged to the same tribe as Abdali. This should be removed or revised. Akmal94 (talk) 23:42, 22 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Chosen successor edit

@Noorullah21: Re: [6] The cited source (Hanifi, Deciphering the History of Modern Afghanistan) refers to Sulaiman as Ahmad Shah's chosen successor. - LouisAragon (talk) 16:25, 17 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

@LouisAragon This seems to contradict other sources I've seen. For example: "History of civilizations of Central Asia vol.5" (page 292) It states that Timur Shah was his declared heir.
"He was probably suffering from a facial cancer. In the
last few months of his life, he proclaimed Timur Shah as his designated heir. Ahmad Shah died on 23 October 1772."
Jonathan Lee's "Afghanistan: A History from 1260 to the Present" (page 143):
"A few months before he died, Ahmad Shah had summoned his son, Timur Mirza, from Herat and publicly declared him as the heir apparent ..."[7] Noorullah (talk) 01:36, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Noorullah21: Yeah I had seen those excerpts before. Looking at the available evidence it seems as if Ahmad Shah could have initially had Sulaiman as his heir? Thoughts? - LouisAragon (talk) 16:53, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@LouisAragon I'm thinking Ahmad Shah had no declared heir until he believed he was dying, which is why as described in Lee's source, shortly before he died, he declared Timur as heir.
Oddly we see this a lot in the Durrani Empire's history actually with Timur Shah as well. Timur Shah had no declared heir until he was on his death bed (also sparking another civil war in turn, this time being much longer for over 70 years). Noorullah (talk) 17:20, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Noorullah21: Thank you; I see. According to a cursory glance through Google Books, it seems that the majority of texts only discuss Timur Shah in connection with heirship of any kind. That statement about Sulaiman from Hanifi should probably be left out for the time being. Perhaps later sources will clarify it. - LouisAragon (talk) 22:22, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
@LouisAragon Sounds good, thanks for contacting me and allowing me to clarify the edits. Noorullah (talk) 23:54, 18 October 2023 (UTC)Reply