Talk:South Launceston Cricket Club

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Dalek Supreme X in topic Sections

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This article badly needs to be broken into sections and sub-sections. It is currently pretty much unreadable. Also there are far too many single line paragraphs. TinTin (talk) 02:41, 2 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

I just did a major rewrite, removing large amounts of promotional material that made the article look like a sales/recruiting brochure. It was full of unsourced opinion like "The club has worked tirelessly for over 100 years to develop a family club where everyone feels welcome and are a part of its success. We look forward to seeing you at South in the near future." It still needs a lot of work by someone who is familiar with the club. --Dalek Supreme X (talk) 18:38, 21 August 2015 (UTC)Reply