Talk:Russian monitor Lava

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Russian monitor Lava/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 18:50, 15 September 2014 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    Right now, it reads as though the 5-inch armored ring was installed on Latnik, not Lava
    One dupe link
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Lava was present during a visit of an American squadron in 1867: see here and here
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    It'd be nice to get a line drawing but Brassey's and Jane's don't normally include them for smaller ships, so oh well.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Thanks for finding the bit about the American visit and catching the small errors. All done now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:15, 16 September 2014 (UTC)Reply

Great work as usual, passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 20:12, 16 September 2014 (UTC)Reply