Talk:Prisoners of the Sun

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Ssven2 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Prisoners of the Sun/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply


I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

  • Can you wikilink the 2001 musical like you did for the video game?

Background edit

  • "Some Belgians were upset that Hergé was willing to work for a newspaper controlled by the then occupying Nazi administration, although he was heavily enticed by the size of Le Soir's readership, which reached 600,000." - What does "he was heavily enticed" mean in this case?
    • It refers to the fact that he was enticed to work for the newspaper by the prospect of his comic strip getting a far wider readership than it had ever had before. We can reword it if you think it should be clarified ? Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:33, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Influences edit

  • Farr mentions Columbus using the prediction of a solar eclipse. Can you add that info?  

References edit

  • Footnotes #7 and #29 - Assouline and Peeters pages are missing.
    • I see what's happened; the page numbers were in there but weren't formatted properly, thus not appearing in the article itself. I've corrected that problem. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:  

Once again, great job, Midnightblueowl.  Ssven2 Speak 2 me 06:48, 12 March 2015 (UTC)Reply