Talk:New York and Long Island Coignet Stone Company Building

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review
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The result was: promoted by Kingsif (talk) 18:49, 10 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Coignet Stone Company Building 2021
Coignet Stone Company Building 2021
  • ... that Third Street is one of nine bridges crossing the Gowanus canal, a superfund site ...? Source: "The 4th Street basin gave waterway access to the complex. The 100' wide basin, between 4th and 5th Streets, extended from the Gowanus canal to Third Avenue. It provided the Coignet Stoneworks with 1,400 feet of wharf frontage"
    • ALT1:... that calls for environmental cleanup resulted in the 2009 designation of the Gowanus Canal as a Superfund Site in New York City?...? Source: "canal was declared an Industrial bio-hazard "
    • ALT0A: ... that Whole Foods Market was fined 0.000002 percent of its 2012 revenue for failing to restore the Coignet Building (pictured) near its new store?
    • ALT1A: ... that the New York and Long Island Coignet Stone Company went out of business less than a decade after completing its headquarters building (pictured)?
    • ALT2A: ... that by the 2000s, the Coignet Building (pictured) was the oldest known example of ferro-concrete building construction still standing in New York City?

Created/expanded by CaptJayRuffins (talk) and Epicgenius (talk). Nominated by CaptJayRuffins (talk) at 12:02, 26 April 2021 (UTC).Reply

  • Note for reviewer: While the original hooks were inadequate by DYK standards, I have helped expand this and have come up with some new hooks. Epicgenius (talk) 19:08, 26 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • This article is new enough and long enough. The image is suitably licensed, the hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral, and I detected no copyright issues. I like ALT2A best. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:46, 3 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

What's the status on this? Found in approved queue for 4/26CaptJayRuffins (talk) 13:58, 10 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:New York and Long Island Coignet Stone Company Building/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Comments edit

  • Move "Use mdy dates" below the hatnote.
  • Add alt text to every image being used.
  • "has a lot area of" - reword
  • Add a comma after "building's completion".
  • "In spite of" → "Despite" (less wordy)
  • Add a serial comma after "coal yard".
  • "made an agreement" → "agreed" (less wordy)
  • "Plans for the Whole Foods" - is "the" necessary?
  • Wikilink The New York Times.

Progress edit

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 9 July 2021 (UTC)Reply