Talk:New York and Long Island Coignet Stone Company Building/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Move "Use mdy dates" below the hatnote.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• "has a lot area of" - reword
• Add a comma after "building's completion".
• "In spite of" → "Despite" (less wordy)
• Add a serial comma after "coal yard".
• "made an agreement" → "agreed" (less wordy)
• "Plans for the Whole Foods" - is "the" necessary?
• Wikilink The New York Times.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 9 July 2021 (UTC)