Talk:Naniwa Maru

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Boneyard90 in topic WP:Japan Commentary

WP:Japan Commentary

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I assessed the article, and while I find the possibility of a fully working replica of a period ship quite interesting, I have a few questions. These are some points of improvement for consideration for B-class:

  • Coverage: Who designed the ship? Who constructed it? Why was this project undertaken?
  • Grammar & Style:
    • Why "postfix"? Why not "suffix"?
    • The "Bunka epoch": I believe most English translations use the words "era" or "period". Why use "epoch"?
    • "emeritus professor": I thought the term was used in reverse, as in "Professor emeritus".

Good luck! Boneyard90 (talk) 04:41, 27 January 2011 (UTC)Reply