Talk:Marvin Harrison Jr.

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Lead

• The lead should be expanded to include his high school career.
  • I expanded it but it was reverted due to perceived bloat, I'm going to leave it as is, rather than start an edit conflict.
    • And I reverted the change. MOS:LEAD is pretty clear that the the lead should summarize the entire article. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:52, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

  @Gonzo fan2007 Is there anything else that needs be fixed? Newtothisedit (talk) 17:49, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

  • Newtothisedit, nope, I'll pass it shortly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:56, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

• Coming out of high school Harrison was a four star prospect ranked the nations 14th best receiver recruit., add "as" after "ranked"
  • Done
• as well as the schools atmosphere, "schools" should be "school's"
  • Done

College career

• In the Buckeyes season opener against Notre Dame, "Buckeyes" should be "Buckeyes'"
  • Done
• In his first game as the teams #1 receiver Harrison caught, add comma after "receiver"
  • Done
• The following week he had his second consecutive 100-yard game with 102 yards on 6 catches and two touchdowns in a blowout win over Toledo., should reference 29 be attributed to this sentence?
  • Done

Images

• Both images look good, freely licensed.

References

• Be consistent with the website field. Either choose the .com or the name (i.e. Yahoo vs Yahoo.com)
  • Changed to publication title for all sources except for sources from Cleveland.com. Cleveland.com is the name of the publication, hence why it was not changed.
• Be consistent with the date fields (2023-01-16 vs January 16, 2023)
  • Done
• Be consistent with linking sources (Ref 5 has The Patriot-News linked, while other papers aren't linked).
  • Done
• Refs 17, 18 and 19 need access-date
• Done
• Spot checks look good.

Overall looks really good. Gonna put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

@Gonzo fan2007 I believe that I have addressed everything. Newtothisedit (talk) 16:27, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Lightburst (talk) 17:29, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

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Harrison in 2022

• ... that one NFL scout compared watching Marvin Harrison Jr. (pictured) to "window shopping at a Lamborghini dealership for the model that doesn't come out until next year"? Source: https://www.dispatch.com/story/sports/college/football/2023/03/23/marvin-harrison-jr-nfl-draft-ohio-state-football-pro-day-2023-cj-stroud-jaxon-smith-njigba/70042053007/ ""Like window shopping at a Lamborghini dealership for the model that doesn’t come out until next year," an NFL scout said to ESPN NFL draft analyst Jordan Reid about Harrison."
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Travis Bell

Improved to Good Article status by Newtothisedit (talk). Self-nominated at 15:17, 17 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Marvin Harrison Jr.; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:57, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Newly-promoted GA that appears to meet all the criteria. The nominator just has to finish reviewing the qpq for this to pass. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:06, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

• QPQ has been completed. Approved. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Not playing in bowl game

He better enter the draft because if I was Ryan Day I would bench him in 2024 for being a idiot! 184.56.50.211 (talk) 21:35, 1 January 2024 (UTC)