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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article.Tintor2 (talk) 15:20, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
@TeenAngels1234: Since this is quite a small article I think every issue will be comment in one visit:
- Is there an image we can use for the infobox? Maybe Asuka's new suit which is mentioned in production?
- The lead mentions the airdate of the episode twice.
- There is mention of fanservice in the article but could that be elaborated? The word tends to be exploited so it can mean several stuff.
- In the plot section Nerv is not explained.
- Is the Boa beer mention necessary?
- I would like to keep this, since it's a reference to a movie, like mentioned after.
Everything seems fine. Well done.Tintor2 (talk) 16:05, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
- @Tintor2: Thank you. Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:26, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
Good work with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 18:49, 30 September 2022 (UTC)