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The single was made available on February 23, 1998 as a CD single in the Netherlands -> The single was released as a CD single
in the Netherlands on February 23, 1998.
with its lyrically describing -> with its lyrics portraying
Unlink CD single
Background and release
Unlink CD single
Try to combine the first two sentences, beginning something like this: "A CD single featuring the album version of..."
The CD's cover art is the same used for Tragic Kingdom's fifth single, "Happy Now?" -> The artwork of the release shares the same as used for the fifth single for Tragic Kingdom, "Happy Now?".
Composition and music video
production done -> production process being handled
record"; he discussed -> record". He went on discussing that
A studio video -> An accompanying music video
Try to reword next sentence
Change name of topic in "Composition and promotion"
Reception
Critical -> Critical response
upon release -> upon its release
Commercial -> Commercial performance
You may leave the charting part, as it's too short
@Cartoon network freak: Again, thanks for the review. I completed my changes. I would like to collaborate with with on "Heaven", but it seems as if we're having some difficulties with some other users. Anyway, thanks for the review. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 00:23, 14 June 2016 (UTC).Reply
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On hold for seven days. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:31, 13 June 2016 (UTC)