Talk:Friedrich Freiherr von Hotze

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic First sentence
Good articleFriedrich Freiherr von Hotze has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
December 15, 2009Good article nomineeListed
January 9, 2010WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 23, 2009.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that after fighting in six wars throughout Europe and Russia, General Hotze (pictured) was killed within 32 km (20 miles) of his birthplace on 25 September 1799 at the Second Battle of Zurich?
Current status: Good article

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The first sentence should immediately establish notability, but it doesn't. How about mentioning that he was a Swiss military man upfront? Hekerui (talk) 16:19, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks. Fixed. Auntieruth55 (talk) 18:18, 15 December 2009 (UTC)Reply