clarification for the 1970–2000 section edit

The second paragraph of the section mentions how: "Dr. John E. Fryer, a gay psychiatrist in disguise as "Dr. Henry Anonymous", testified as to how homosexuality being listed as a mental disease in the APA's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders" However, I feel the "how" of the sentence is not addressed as the sentence goes on about a series of books rather than mentioning the implied effect that being labeled as a mental disease did to the homosexual community: "in the APA's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders(D"John E. Fryer, MD, and the Dr. H. Anonymous Episode"] in Drescher, Jack and Merlino, Joseph P. (eds.) (2012) American Psychiatry and Homosexuality: An Oral History Routledge. pp.15-28 ISBN 9781136859939; originally published in the Journal of Gay & Lesbian Psychotherapy 6(4):73-84</ref>." 76.105.133.10 (talk) 04:21, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

I don't understand your concern. To me, the paragraph is very straightforward and complete. What is it, precisely, that you feel is missing from the paragraph? Beyond My Ken (talk) 02:26, 3 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
I concur with Beyond My Ken. I read the paragraph carefully. It is an important part of the article, and it reads clearly to me.--FeralOink (talk) 04:06, 3 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

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