Talk:Fereidoon Tavallali

Latest comment: 10 years ago by BiryaniRanchero in topic New possible source

Dates

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This was a real person; see below address for proof. The dates seem wrong probably because the author is using a different calendar, might be Zoroastrian. But obviously, the article's grammar is terrible.

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Hamamelis (talk) 07:24, 30 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. I gathered that he was a real person, but the idea that the calendar might be different completely escaped my mind.
And yes, this article is sorely in need of a good clean-up. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 07:35, 30 May 2010 (UTC)Reply
I think it might be Islamic calendar dates (current year is 1413). But WP:MOSNUM says:

So this article needs to give his dates in Gregorian form, to avoid the confusion which has clearly been caused by the use of the Islamic calendar. PamD (talk) 07:42, 30 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

Found a source for his 20th-century dates! PamD (talk) 07:54, 30 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

I believe the other dates were from the Islamic calendar. I corrected one and removed the other. Torchiest talk/contribs 19:14, 3 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Neutrality/NPOV

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The article states:


— Preceding unsigned comment added by StuartLivings (talkcontribs) 06:53, 5 June 2013‎

Concur, wp: peacock applies. But you could always edit it yourself! See WP:SOFIXIT ;-) 220 of Borg 04:43, 5 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

New possible source

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I found a website which has a biography of Tavallali here. It gives a different year for his birth (1917) and isn't quite 'encyclopedic.' However, it is the most informative English-language source I've found. Should I go ahead and expand the article with information from here? Further input would be appreciated. Thanks, BiryaniRanchero (talk) 01:17, 3 April 2014 (UTC)Reply