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Copyvio edit
This article is mostly copyvio as it consists almost entirely of the publisher's blurb as it currently stands. I recommend the plot summary be rewritten before the copyvio posse take notice. 23skidoo 19:07, 19 August 2006 (UTC)
Added some notes. Pejorative.majeure 06:51, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
Plot hole addition/removal edit
When I added the information on the book, I made note of a plot hole. What happened to these? Pejorative.majeure 05:19, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
-- Never mind, saw the new revision history. Still maintain it is a plot hole, as those descended from other individuals who had Impressed either dragons or fire-lizards did not have their dying dragons time-travel; IIRC Red Hanrahan's daughter impressed a dragonet - Would Ramoth travel back to visit her if Lessa died, as Lessa is descended from Red's daughter? It's a poorly written plot device given the history of the series. Pejorative.majeure 05:28, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
Fair use rationale for Image:McCaffrey dragonsblood.jpg edit
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- 2011 Note. Two days later, the contributor of the image slightly revised its file: Image revision, 7 June 2007.
- --not my department, --P64 (talk) 14:42, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
mother/grandmother edit
The article gives Kitty Ping both as mother and grandmother of Wind Blossom. Which is correct? --88.130.181.136 (talk) 11:21, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- Letter from Jackie (2010-02-01). Todd McCaffrey explains that granddaughter is a mistake in the US edition of Dragonsdawn; daughter is correct in the UK edition. --P64 (talk) 20:17, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
- Following another good-faith revision, I have added a formal Note that essentially puts this into the article. I made up the citation and afterward noticed that it's different from what I made up last year.
- ... Todd McCaffrey: Author, Pilot, Geek. Pern Home. ...
- ... Todd McCaffrey blog. ...