Talk:Bayard–Condict Building

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Grungaloo in topic GA Review

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Which Bayard and which Condict is the building named after?

By the way, whom is Bayard Street named after? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.112.183.231 (talk) 16:07, 3 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Nicholas Bayard, the nephew of Peter Stuyvesant, and the 16th mayor of New York City is the namesake of the street. Beyond My Ken (talk) 03:59, 27 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 14:06, 14 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

 
Bayard–Condict Building

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 14:04, 26 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Bayard–Condict Building; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

QPQ:   - pending
Overall:   @Epicgenius: Good to go after QPQ done. I will note that Earwig's flags a high percentage, but it is just long building names and properly attributed quotes, so all is well. Assuming good faith on the offline hooks, I would reccomdend using either ALT0 or ALT4 as I find those the most interesting. Schminnte (talk contribs) 21:33, 27 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Schminnte: Thanks for the review, and sorry for keeping you waiting so long. I have now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 01:01, 4 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
  good to go. Schminnte (talk contribs) 06:48, 4 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Bayard–Condict Building/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Grungaloo (talk · contribs) 23:18, 2 March 2024 (UTC)Reply


Hello again Epicgenius, I'm picking this review up too. I'll ping you once my review is completed. grungaloo (talk) 23:18, 2 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    No layout issues, a few minor comments. prose is good, issues addressed
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (inline citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    Has ref section. One copyvio flag came up in Earwig but it was flagging direct quotations. Ref spotcheck is good, no OR.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Good coverage and good details
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Meets NPOV
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    No stability issues
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Images are appropriately licensed, show nice details of the building.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Comments edit

Refs 9,11,12,20,28,56,60 all good.

  • At the time of the Bayard–Condict Building's construction, Smith worked with John H. Edelmann, who knew Sullivan well. - Did Edelmann have any impact on this building aside from knowing Sullivan? If not, I would remove this line.
    • Nope. I think Edelmann may have been Smith and Sullivan's mutual acquaintance, but I don't know if he actually introduced them. Epicgenius (talk) 17:13, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Sullivan had initially objected to the presence of the angels - Based on what you say later, it sounds like this didn't actually happen. I'll leave it up to you, but maybe say something like "Sullivan had allegedly initially objected...". Not required for GA.
  • "designed to be used for offices or light manufactures as to the upper storeys, and for shops in the ground and first floors" - Is "manufactures" what the quote says or a typo (manufacturers?
    • That is what the quote said. In modern English it should actually be "manufacturers", though. Epicgenius (talk) 17:13, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • The interior columns were also thickened, measuring between 24 inches (610 mm) across at the ground story to 13 inches (330 mm) thick on the top two stories - Use "thick" or "across" for both measurements rather than switching.

Hey Epicgenius, all done. This is a really well written article, only a few minor comments. grungaloo (talk) 03:50, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review Grungaloo. I've fixed all of the above-mentioned issues. Epicgenius (talk) 17:13, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
Looks great, congrats on another GA! grungaloo (talk) 17:54, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
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