Talk:Al-Nasir Ahmad, Sultan of Egypt
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 23, 2016. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Mamluk sultan an-Nasir Ahmad ruled from the desert fortress of al-Karak instead of the Mamluk capital in Cairo? | ||||||||||
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Reviewer: Zanhe (talk · contribs) 18:00, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- The prose is clear and concise, and well written. I've fixed a few very minor grammatical issues. Earwig reports no copyright violations. However, there are contradictory statements in the "Reign" section: "a delegation of Egypt-based emirs ... arrived in al-Karak to inform an-Nasir Ahmad of Qawsun's execution", but later, Ahmad "ordered Qawsun and Altunbugha ... to be executed." -Zanhe (talk) 19:57, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
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- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citations to reliable sources, where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
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@Zanhe: Thanks for the review and the improvements. I addressed your point above and corrected the contradictory statement about Qawsun. Let me know if there's any other issues. Cheers --Al Ameer (talk) 03:56, 3 March 2016 (UTC)