Talk:Allan (magazine)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Aoidh in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Aoidh (talk) 16:34, 23 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Created by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:59, 10 January 2023 (UTC).Reply

  • Reviewing this — DaxServer (t · m · c) 09:13, 11 January 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Thanks Morgan695 for the translation! A few improvements:
    Add a USD conversion for 490 yen (or is it Yen with a capital Y?)
    Done.
    bimonthly - is that twice a month or every two months?
    Clarified in article body.
    gravures - link it to relevant page if possible
    The closest is Gravure idols, which I don't think is strictly relevant here. I think the link to Pin-up covers it.
    Bokura ha Seinen Tanteidan - ha or wa? In Contributors section
    Revised.
    Are there JP articles for Yayoi Takeda, Hikomi Kugake and Miki Ishida?
    There are not.
  • DaxServer (t · m · c) 10:11, 11 January 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Here is an alternate hook with link to pin-up model if it's not overlinking:
    ALT0a ... that the first issue of Allan, one of the earliest Japanese magazines focused on male-male romance for a female audience, featured a pin-up poster of David Bowie?
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.
Overall:   With WP:AGF foreign language offline sources — DaxServer (t · m · c) 19:14, 11 January 2023 (UTC)Reply