Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Trisha filmography/archive1

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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:32, 11 July 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Trisha filmography edit

Featured list candidates/Trisha filmography/archive1

Nominator(s): Kailash29792 (talk) 04:56, 27 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it has been significantly reworked from its original state, and now I am convinced it is perfectly FL-worthy. Kailash29792 (talk) 04:56, 27 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47

Please expand the alt text for the image. “age:34” is not exactly helpful for illustrating the image.
I clarify (music video "Meri Chunar Udd Udd Jaye") to (music video for "Meri Chunar Udd Udd Jaye") to make it clear that the music video is for a song and the music video is not named that.

Done: I wrote, the music video of Falguni Pathak's song "Meri Chunar Udd Udd Jaye". --Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I believe that you could combine the last two sentence of the lead’s first paragraph in a more succinct way rather than having two relatively short sentences that disrupt the paragraph’s flow.

Done: I wrote, The following year, she appeared in Manasellam as a terminally ill woman, which was a commercial failure. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

When was Saamy released? Please add a year. Same goes for Lesa Lesa.

Both were released in 2003. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the clarification. Aoba47 (talk) 15:10, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Something about this phrase (landed Trisha new offers) sounds too colloquial and informal to me. I would revise it with stronger language.

Done. As asked. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 07:32, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

When was Aaytha Ezhuthu released? Please add a year? Same goes for Nuvvostanante Nenoddantana.

Done: AE was in 2004, and NN was in 2005. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You use the verb “appeared” a lot. I would recommend you use variation, specifically in the third paragraph.

Done. As asked. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 07:32, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The lead does not include any information on her 2016 films. Please expand to add this.

@Kailash29792: I leave this to you. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 07:32, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done: Please review. --Kailash29792 (talk) 08:42, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Names of websites (ie. movies.fullhyderabad.com should not be in italics in references.)

Done: de-italicised. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have received this note in previous FACs and FLCs and even GANs, but make sure that all of the works and publishers are consistently cited in all of the references, and not just for the first use. Also, there are works/publishers in the references that are never linked (i.e. The Times of India) that should be linked to the appropriate page.

Done: Wikilinked every work and publisher in references. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:56, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Wonderful work with this list. I will support this once my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 00:54, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good to me. I will support this. Aoba47 (talk) 15:11, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Skr15081997

Link Syrian Christian

Done --Kailash29792 (talk) 09:43, 7 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

For Abhiyum Naanum and Krishna Filmfare info use respectively.

Done --Kailash29792 (talk) 09:43, 7 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work on this filmography. --Skr15081997 (talk) 04:08, 5 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments Skr15081997. Any further comments? --Kailash29792 (talk) 09:43, 7 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm glad to Support this nomination. Good job on this list. --Skr15081997 (talk) 11:40, 7 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:05, 5 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Linked items in the table should be linked every time as it's a sortable table so there's no telling which will come first after a re-sort.
No need for music videos table to be sortable.
"Daily News & Analysis" should be "Daily News and Analysis".

The Rambling Man (talk) 06:22, 1 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done All addressed. Kailash29792 (talk) 06:55, 1 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, any further comment? --Kailash29792 (talk) 17:44, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

~~Comments~~ Support –

"she appeared in Manasellam as a terminally ill woman, which was a commercial failure." Since the film was a commercial failure, not the woman, a better sentence order would be "she appeared as a terminally ill woman in Manasellam, which was a commercial failure."

Done as asked. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 08:16, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

~~Why is Kabaddi being capitalized in the third paragraph?~~ Giants2008 (Talk) 20:11, 14 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Giants2008: Kabaddi is the name of a sport, hence a proper noun. Shouldn't a proper noun be capitalised? — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 08:16, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Well no, we don't capitalise Baseball or Association Football or similar do we? Our own article on [[kabaddi] doesn't capitalise it in general usage. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:29, 24 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm in agreement with TRM: I wouldn't think that a sport's name would be a proper name. A league or event name, yes, but not a sport itself. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:03, 24 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Giants2008 and The Rambling Man: Well, if that's the case, then done as asked. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 10:39, 27 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --Pres N 14:58, 10 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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