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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man via FACBot (talk) 00:30, 16 April 2018 (UTC) [1].

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List of awards and nominations received by Regine Velasquez

List of awards and nominations received by Regine Velasquez (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 18:21, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list after successfully promoting the singer's list of recorded songs to FL status. The article was previously merged to the main subject's page as it had little to no sources. However, following an edit request granted by one of the admins involved during the AfD, I began work on improving the article and sourcing out reliable citations. It has undergone a GOCE copy-edit to improve its lead section. Constructive criticism, in any form and from anyone, will be appreciated. Cheers! Pseud 14 (talk) 18:21, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

Comments from BeatlesLedTV

Resolved comments from BeatlesLedTV (talk) 14:36, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

;Comments from BeatlesLedTV Image needs alt text Added All years in the tables can be centered (in my opinion) Agree! Done. Make sure all songs are in quotes in the tables (see MOS:QUOTEMARKS#Names and titles) Done Looks good. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 22:13, 18 March 2018 (UTC) BeatlesLedTV, thanks very much for your comments. I have addressed those things as mentioned above. Look forward to any additional comments as you find fit. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 05:52, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

• Support – Make sure the Perfect 10 Award nominee isn't centered for consistency. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 14:36, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks for your support BeatlesLedTV, I have fixed that too. Much appreciated. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 16:20, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Support from FrB.TG

Resolved comments from FrB.TG (talk)

* "Regine Velasquez is a Filipino singer and actor" - actress pls. Done "Velasquez signed a record deal with VIVA Records in 1987 and released her eponymous debut album" - did she do both of these things in 1987? If so, I would place "in 1987" at the beginning of the sentence so that it applies to both. Done "The album produced three singles; "Kung Maibabalik Ko Lang", "Urong Sulong" and "Isang Lahi"." Not sure you need this unless any of these singles won an award. Agree. Removed these. "Her succeeding albums Nineteen 90 (1990) and Tagala Talaga (1991) established her as a leading Filipino pop artist" - source please. You're right, it does sound ambiguous. I removed that line and continued with the awards she has won for the albums "won her the awards as the Most Popular Female Entertainer at Box Office Entertainment Award ceremonies in 1991 and 1992" "In the same year, she recorded Muli, a duet with Gary Valenciano for his ninth studio album Hataw Na. The former won an Awit award for Best Performance by a Female Recording Artist, while the latter received a Best Performance by a Duet at the seventh Awit Awards." I'd like suggest a better alternative (or at least I think so). "She won Awit Awards for Best Performance by a Female Recording Artist for the single and Best Performance by a Duet for recording a duet with Gary Valenciano for his ninth studio album Hataw Na". Done. Just tweaked it a bit to read as "She won Awit Awards for Best Performance by a Female Recording Artist for the single and Best Performance by a Duet for "Muli" with Gary Valenciano, a single from his ninth studio album Hataw Na" "She starred in the motion picture Kailangan Ko'y Ikaw (2000) and released the soundtrack's lead single, which won the.." - a single that has won that many awards should be definitely be named. Agree, The movie and the single are titled the same, so I stated as "eponymous lead single" to avoid being redundant. "She appeared in romantic comedy films" - maybe "the romantic comedies" instead of "romantic comedy films". Also, the mention of these films after music is a little abrupt. Maybe add a "then" before appeared? Done. Not sure what is the purpose of the footnote in this list. "Awards in certain categories do not have prior nominations and only winners are announced by the jury. For simplification and to avoid errors, each award in this list has been presumed to have had a prior nomination." Is there any such award she has won (without garnering a prior nomination)? In fact there is. The Anak TV Award and Box Office Entertainment awards do not have nominations. Awards are announced beforehand and given during the ceremony. Why are the publishers/newspapers/magazines etc not linked in citations? FrB.TG (talk) 16:02, 20 March 2018 (UTC) Done for Publishers/newspaper/magazines with Wiki links. FrB.TG, thank you for your comments. I have addressed the above. Look forward to any additional comments you may have. Much appreciate your time. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

That's great. This is an excellent list, and I have supported above. FrB.TG (talk) 18:02, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

FrB.TG Thank you for your edits too and much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 05:13, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Comments from Ceranthor

Resolved comments from ceranthor

*"Her succeeding albums Nineteen 90 (1990) and Tagala Talaga (1991) won her the awards as the Most Popular Female Entertainer at Box Office Entertainment Award ceremonies in 1991 and 1992." - not as, but "for" the Most Popular... Done "She also won as the Most Popular Female Entertainer at 30th Box Office Entertainment Awards, making Velasquez the first female artist in that award show's history to receive the honor for the tenth consecutive year." - the repetition of female is odd here Done. Removed the latter mention of 'female'

Otherwise, the list seems comprehensive and well-organized. Support ceranthor 02:23, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you Ceranthor for your time in reviewing and providing your comments. Much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 04:24, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Comments from Cartoon network freak

Resolved comments from Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:05, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

*who has received many awards and nominations for her work in music, film and television → more encyclopedic: who has received several awards and nominations for her contribution to the music, film and television industry. Done. (music, film and television are already implied as industries/fields, so I excluded the mention) at Box Office Entertainment Award ceremonies → at the Box Office Entertainment Award ceremonies Done. thanks for this! included the single "Sana Maulit Muli". She won Awit Awards for Best Performance by a Female Recording Artist for the single and Best Performance by a Duet for "Muli" with Gary Valenciano on his ninth studio album Hataw Na. → included the single "Sana Maulit Muli", which won her an Awit Award for Best Performance by a Female Recording Artist. On the same occasion, she received an award in the Best Performance by a Duet category for "Muli" with Gary Valenciano on his ninth studio album Hataw Na. The above suggestion sounds a bit clunky to me. I may stick with this original writing suggested by FrB.TG. In support of the album, she headlined → you can leave "of the album" out, as it isn't needed and repeats "album" again the repetition would not be odd here, especially that they are not in the same sentence. I need to retain it otherwise it would be, in support of what? She also won as the Most Popular Female → The singer was also named the Most Popular Female Done the first artist in that award show's → the first artist in the award show's Done She starred in the motion picture → She also starred in the motion picture (for better flow) Done and her second Awit Award for Best Performance → as well as her second Awit Award for Best Performance Done Her eleventh studio → The singer's eleventh studio album (alternation) Done Of All The Things → Of All the Things Done Awit Awards' Dangal ng Musikang Pilipino → a translation in paranthesis would be nice Awards in foreign language doesn't really warrant a translation, unless a sourced translation from the award giving body is available. In this case there is none. The infobox should only contain information on the wins and noms for award ceremonies that have an article on Wikipedia. I believe that defeats the purpose of the infobox. As this is about the awards and NOT the award ceremonies, since not all awards/ceremonies have Wikipedia entries. See references to other FLs on musician awards Lady Gaga, Bruno Mars, Adele. I think everything else is fine as far as I checked it. Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:48, 30 March 2018 (UTC) @Pseud 14: Sorry for being so late, but I didn't have any time earlier for this... Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:49, 30 March 2018 (UTC) Cartoon network freak No worries, truly appreciate your time and feedback. I have provided my comments as per the above. Cheers!--Pseud 14 (talk) 08:36, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

With my comments being adressed, I can proudly support this now! Very thorough work with this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:05, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you Cartoon network freak Much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 09:09, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

• Oppose with regret - the inclusion of awards which are non-notable needs to be fixed before further review. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:06, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks The Rambling Man, well-noted. Fixed the list as per the above comments. Reduced list and retained notable/major award-giving organizations/ceremonies. Awaiting for your review. Let me know if you have other concerns that need to be addressed. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 09:30, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

• I'm still seeing award-giving organisations that Wikipedia does not find notable, e.g. Catholic Mass Media Awards, Katha Music Awards and Monster Radio Awards. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:15, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

• The Rambling Man, Removed and updated. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 13:02, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

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