AfC notification: Draft:Hemdee Kiwanuka has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hemdee Kiwanuka. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 00:53, 1 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hemdee Kiwanuka (December 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Legacypac was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Legacypac (talk) 00:56, 1 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
 
Hello, Leah Kiwanuka! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Legacypac (talk) 00:56, 1 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Help me!

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Please help me with... My first creation was declined due to luck of supporting references, I added more references to support my article, can you please take a look and help me get better. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Hemdee_Kiwanuka


Leah Kiwanuka (talk) 18:50, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

I think you may be able to show Kiwanuka is notable according to one of the criteria at WP:NARTIST. What concerns me about the article are signs of copying too closely from your sources. For example, when you wrote "Hemdee began his career has hip hop artist", that incorporated a spelling error from the source, which says "Hemdee began his career has a Hip Hop artist". You do appear to have an inline citation for each of your sections, as is required for a BLP. I'm going to have to leave it to a reviewer to more closely examine your references. — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 19:26, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply


@Jmcgnh:

Thank you so much for taking time and looking over my creation... As you suggested, I went ahead and rewarded and re-corrected the spelling in the career section. I am currently looking for maybe 1 more reference to support that statement. I am new here and willing to learn. I want to work on more Ugandan unknown to the world talent.

Leah Kiwanuka (talk) 20:33, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:Hemdee Kiwanuka has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hemdee Kiwanuka. Thanks! — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 05:20, 5 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hemdee Kiwanuka (December 29)

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Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by K.e.coffman was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Does not meet WP:CREATIVE; significant RS coverage not found.
K.e.coffman (talk) 08:17, 29 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Managing a conflict of interest

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  Hello, Leah Kiwanuka. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about in the page Draft:Hemdee Kiwanuka, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

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Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. K.e.coffman (talk) 08:17, 29 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Some of the material you included in the above article was copied from another website, and thus was a violation of Wikipedia's copyright policy. Please don't add copyright material to Wikipedia. — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 14:08, 22 March 2019 (UTC)Reply