Branchio-oto-renal syndrome

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hi, I know you want to improve the article but please read [1] articles used as references should not be too old, you can also use position statements from WHO, NIH, NHS and medical textbooks--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 02:43, 15 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your email and suggestion. I agree about your comments with regard to older references but some cases it may not be true - or does not apply in some cases. For example, here while updating this syndrome, my main focus was to provide overall information about this syndrome to include followings (actually this applies to all other syndromes) 1. Basic definition ( which will never change) and clinical and genetic variation (this will change and new mutations will be discovered and the readers would like to know about old mutations - some recent articles don't describe those old mutations published 8 or 10 years ago - that's why those results are needed) 2. the historical progression about discovery of this gene (that's why I provided positional cloning method information and references - these are the approaches used to find the genes - which I think is a great source of information to world wide readers -after hundred years they will say wow they used these methods to find the genes - also great learning opportunity - I just provided few words and references - which you deleted) 3. Current results - I added some new references that includes 2021 reference to keep the information current - i would still like to include some which you deleted - let me know
Thanks for helping to improve Wikipedia’s articles LK1965 (talk) 03:57, 15 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
(this isn't an email/its a post)ok here are
  • books [2]
  • here are some great sources from NIH [3] and [4]
  • pubmed (specifically science direct) [5]
  • other (this is a rare source-NORD that is very good for certain types of disorders) [6]
should you need further help, just ask (BTW as soon as you qualify Wikipedia library has many more great sources),--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 13:39, 15 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Hi, I am aware of all those sources - I worked for NIH - I had different concern about my edit - perhaps you did not get chance to read my earlier post - please read my above post - comment #2. You deleted two important information first, about the progression of research information that lead to discovery of BOR gene - a very important source of information for many students and researchers, and has historical importance , second, I provided reference for new localization of BOR gene on chromosome 11 - those are all valid references retrieved from the sources Wikipedia supports - again thanks for your hard work to make Wikipedia a great place. LK1965 (talk) 18:46, 16 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine)... should you after a thorough search not find a more recent article, then go ahead and use those references (though not all references were 'historical')--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 21:58, 16 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Great - thanks - appreciate your comments as always - I will research more on those lines - if I find credible to add then I will update those perhaps in a week or so - all the best LK1965 (talk) 22:09, 16 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
    • In terms of your request for 2021 article Mehdizadeh, Tanya; Majumdar, Himani D.; Ahsan, Sarah; Tavares, Andre L. P.; Moody, Sally A. (30 June 2021). "Mutations in SIX1 Associated with Branchio-oto-Renal Syndrome (BOR) Differentially Affect Otic Expression of Putative Target Genes". Journal of Developmental Biology. 9 (3): 25. doi:10.3390/jdb9030025. ISSN 2221-3759. Retrieved 15 November 2022.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link)...in medical lit (and lab) this is a primary article, something that was done in a lab, per MEDRS we use reviews Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine). The reason is b/c reviews cover a greater area of knowledge from several primary sources (again read MEDRS)--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 13:50, 15 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
      Thanks - I don't have any concern about this reference - I updated this which provided most updated information thanks LK1965 (talk) 18:38, 16 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Shrawan Kumar (geneticist) moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, Shrawan Kumar (geneticist), is not suitable as written to remain published. Most of the material in the article is not citation supported, which is essential for biographies of living people. I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. User:Ceyockey (talk to me) 23:21, 18 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your comments. I agree with your quick review. When I posted this biography, I did make a note that for many old references, I could not find the link. However, most of the person's important discovery references are cited. The other references are not very relevant to his discovery; they only describe the history of his work. The work on the discovery of genes is very important; therefore, I will keep those in the references and move the other references under "selected publications," as in Elena E. Tucker's biography (please review that). When I was reviewing several biographies, many of them lacked important references or notability, etc., but still, unfortunately, all those pages are live in Wikipedia. The current biography, I believe, is the significant and inspirational one as it describes his discovery of two important genes; the information about those diseases is available on Wikipedia and is linked in the biography to provide readers with comprehensive details. Coming back to your concern about "some references," I agree and plan to move those references into the selected publication section just to reflect the volume of work. If you agree, moving those references to a different section should not take long—just cut and paste—and I would appreciate your assistance and edits. I also greatly appreciate your contribution to Wikipedia. Thanks LK1965 (talk) 01:23, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Just noticed - several edits - looks better - review whenever you get chance and once done please move it to the article space - working on another biography Jeff Ellis in Wikipedia which is unfortunately incomplete but live - I added some new references and text - working on to complete that - thanks LK1965 (talk) 18:01, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
I saw your edits and thank you very much; I have seen many biographies with references that are not linked but are manually entered, such as the one in the current biography; if you want to keep it that way, that's fine; otherwise, I will appreciate whatever you suggest. LK1965 (talk) 01:38, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

P.S. I'll take a closer look at it in its new location and provide some commentary on the talk page there. P.P.S. The text here is a modification of the boilerplate provided by the 'MoveToDraft' tool.

Speedy deletion nomination of Boys Town National Research Hospital

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice to inform you that a tag has been placed on Boys Town National Research Hospital requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is an article with no content whatsoever, or whose contents consist only of external links, a "See also" section, book references, category tags, template tags, interwiki links, images, a rephrasing of the title, a question that should have been asked at the help or reference desks, or an attempt to contact the subject of the article. Please see Wikipedia:Stub for our minimum information standards for short articles. Also please note that articles must be on notable subjects and should provide references to reliable sources that verify their content.

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I think that page was created in error; perhaps I wanted to link and clicked the wrong button. Thanks and I appreciate your contribution. LK1965 (talk) 20:11, 5 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shrawan Kumar (geneticist) (January 5)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChunky was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Adding names with no evidence of notability

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  Hello. Your recent edit appears to have added the name of a non-notable entity to a list that normally includes only notable entries. In general, a person, organization or product added to a list should have a pre-existing article before being added to most lists. If you wish to create such an article, please first confirm that the subject qualifies for a separate, stand-alone article according to Wikipedia's notability guideline. Thank you. OhNoitsJamie Talk 18:37, 29 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shrawan Kumar (geneticist) (July 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Shrawan Kumar (geneticist) (November 2)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ahecht was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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