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Week6/SheilaSh11

Latest comment: 1 year ago5 comments2 people in discussion

This week I assigned mobil game Clash of Clans, added backgroud citation for this article, here is the diff; the second article I assigned is Guangzhou, cite on the Canton Trade part, here is the diff. SheilaSh11 (talk) 17:56, 26 November 2022 (UTC)

@SheilaSh11 Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the first article you edited and then ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 00:47, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
@SheilaSh11 Your second edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 00:49, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
I have added a credible source to this article, here is the diff. SheilaSh11 (talk) 15:55, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
I have adited this article, here is the diff. SheilaSh11 (talk) 15:46, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Rheaxx666

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited two articles this week. The first one is Chocolate. Here is the diff. I added evidence for the beneficial effects of chocolate on endothelial function, platelet function. The second one is Pu'er tea. Here is the diff. I added evidence about the soil conditions most suitable for growing Pu'er tea.Rheaxx666 (talk) 18:24, 26 November 2022 (UTC)

@Rheaxx666 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:50, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Kaisery

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

The first article is Black Friday. Here is the diff. I added an update for 2022. The second article is LGBT rights in Qatar. Here is the diff. I added the conflict between Qatar and London caused by LGBT+ during the World Cup. Kaisery (talk) 03:31, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kaisery Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:54, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Lbw119

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

i edited two articles about railways in china. The first article is China Railway High-speed and here is the diff.The second artile is High-speed rail in China and here is the diff. This two articles are similar, however they both lack of some information that needs to be added. So I found different sources to fill in those missing informations. Lbw119 (talk) 03:33, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Lbw119 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:56, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/ Sssara7

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the article on Pollution. The diff for my edit is here [1]. I added more information about the human generation. I learned more about the environmental impact and pollution. And looking forward to learn more area of environmental. I edited the article on Human impact on the environment. The diff for my edit is here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Human_impact_on_the_environment&type=revision&diff=1124069807&oldid=1122620336. I learned more about environmental degradation and Human impact on the environment. Sssara7 (talk) 04:56, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Sssara7 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:57, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / Sssara7

Latest comment: 1 year ago4 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the article on Plastic bag. The diff for my edit is here. I added more information about the plastic bags and the environment. I learned more about the environmental and pollution. And looking forward to learn more area of environmental. I edited the article on Environmental degradation. The diff for my edit is https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Environmental_degradation&type=revision&diff=1124071825&oldid=1115184201. I learned more about the Climate change and precipitation. Sssara7 (talk) 04:40, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

@Sssara7 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Dear professor, sorry for that incomplete. I already added another article on week5. Thank you! Sssara7 (talk) 05:31, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
@Sssara7 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:58, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/YangyangF

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the article about K-pop. Here is the diff. I added kpop and the influence of Korean culture on Malaysians. Also I edited the article about Alipay,I added the new Alipay feature that provides a beauty filter when swiping the face to pay. Here is the diff.YangyangF (talk) 05:32, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@YangyangF Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:00, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Bh2471

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the differences of opinion between the government and residents in shelter's wiki so that people can know more about it. Here is the diff.

Meanwhile, I also edited the homeless in New York. Here is the diff. Bh2471 (talk) 05:36, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Bh2471 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:02, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Luciuszlt

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edit Battle royale game, here is the diff. I also edit Skin gambling, here is the diff. I think through out these weeks' practice. My speed of reading article and extract information is highly improved. Luciuszlt (talk) 23:54, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Luciuszlt Nice edits that raise challenging situations with this growing sport. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:04, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

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Wikidata weekly summary #548

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Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week.
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      • Save the date! The next WikidataCon will take place on October 28-29, 2023, and will be organized by Wikimedia Taiwan and Wikimedia Germany. The hybrid event will be streamed from Taipei and accessible for everyone online. More information and updates on d:Wikidata:WikidataCon_2023
      • Next LD4 Wikidata Affinity Group call November 29, 2022: We will be discussing openly managed data gathering and management with Holly Little (Smithsonian), Sabine von Mering (Museum für Naturkunde), Erica Krimmel (Florida State University), and Debra Paul (University of Illinois)! Agenda
      • A Hands-On Introduction to Wikidata: Thursday December 1, 2022 at 17:00 UTC. By the end of this session, you will be able to edit Wikidata records about the cultural venues that matter most to you.
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Growth team newsletter #23

 

Welcome to the twenty-third newsletter from the Growth team!

Highlights

 
Screenshot of the positive reinforcement module improvements.

Positive reinforcement: an improved impact module to test

The goal of the Growth team is to encourage newcomers to try editing for the first time, and encourage them to keep editing. We want to increase newcomers' motivation by showing them how impactful their edits are.

Newcomers have access to an impact module; you can find yours at Special:Impact. The revised impact module provides new editors with more context about their impact. It will display the number of edits, the number of thanks received, the last time they edited, the number of consecutive days they edited, and the number of views for the articles they edited.

This module will soon be available at our pilot wikis starting December 1. You can already test this new module at Beta Wikipedia. For safety reasons, do not use your regular account and password at Beta wiki. Create a new, specific account for this wiki, with a different password.

Structured tasks: improvements based on patroller feedback

After the deployment of Structured tasks, we received feedback from various communities regarding how patrollers of recent changes were feeling overwhelmed by an increase in edits to check, and how some edits were poor quality or of poor relevance.

We made several improvements based on the feedback we received. Several points of improvement have already been addressed:

  • Patroller fatigue:
    • By default, newcomers can complete up to 25 "add a link" tasks and 25 "add an image" tasks per day. If patrollers are overburdened, each community can use Special:EditGrowthConfig to lower that limit.
  • Quality of edits: what constitutes a "quality edit" is not a well defined concept. We initiated a discussion and summarized our findings. We also worked on the following improvements:
    • Add a Link
      • Underlinked articles are now prioritized, so it's less likely that newcomers are adding links to articles that are already have a lot of links.
      • The confidence score was increased, so suggestions are more likely to be accurate.
      • The default number of suggested links per article has been lowered to 3. This can be changed at Special:EditGrowthConfig. Communities can also exclude articles containing certain templates or categories from being suggested.
    • Add an Image
      • Lists will no longer receive "add an image" suggestions.
      • Disambiguation pages will no longer receive "add an image" suggestions.
      • We have many further improvements we plan to make to "add an image" in early 2023. [2]

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Recent changes

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Week 5/Yanlzhu

Latest comment: 1 year ago8 comments2 people in discussion

This week I edited the article Keihan 700 series and Rodrigo Crasso. The diff for my change are here and here. I added more information about the Keihan 700 series(Japanese Keihan Electric Railway). Most of the 7000 series seat moquettes are green or blue! And for part of Rodrigo Crasso, I add his personal information on it. He is 1.73meters tall.For this week,I know how to easily find the article to edit.Yanlzhu (talk) 20:25, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

@Yanlzhu Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:16, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Sorry! I miss that. For now, I complete all the part from week 5! Thanks! Yanlzhu (talk) 20:29, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
@Yanlzhu One of your edits was removed as it does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 01:50, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Hi! Professor! I changed my article to Baker Lake Airport.The diff for my change is here.I added more information about Baker Lake Airport.It has a runway size of 4195 x 100 feet!Please check.Thanks!Yanlzhu (talk) 18:51, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@Yanlzhu Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 13:54, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Completed assign. Please check. Thanks!Yanlzhu (talk) 01:21, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
@Yanlzhu Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:32, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/Kaisery

Latest comment: 1 year ago6 comments2 people in discussion

This week, I edited 2 articles. The first one is G20. Here is the diff. I added the G20 Summit in 2022, learning about the latest news about this summit. The second one is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Honor_of_Kings?veaction=edit. Here is the diff. This is the game that I played. And I found that although there are 2 articles, Honor of Kings and KPL in wiki. But KPL is the professional league of Honor of Kings, they don't have any connections in wiki now. Therefore, I added the information.Kaisery (talk) 05:11, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kaisery Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- ~~~~ FULBERT (talk) 17:45, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
I had assigned these articles before.@FULBERT Thank you, professor. Kaisery (talk) 21:30, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kaisery Your second source was to another wiki, which is not reliable. That edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference, as discussed in the assignment and class. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 01:24, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Huawei, adding the FCC ban on Huawei this week. Here is the diff. Kaisery (talk) 02:00, 29 November 2022 (UTC) @FULBERT
@Kaisery Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/Olivia0831

Latest comment: 1 year ago4 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the article about battery charger. Here is the diff. I add more information about the power bank, right now it becomes more popular. The second article is Jade. I add more detail about Jade Nephrite, here is the diff. Olivia0831 (talk) 05:22, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Olivia0831 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:59, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
I have assigned myself to the articles in the Wiki Edu. Olivia0831 (talk) 18:09, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
@Olivia0831 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/StellaJiang333

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited Adolph de Meyer and Fashion design. Here are the diff1 and diff2. I'm glad that I learned more about fashion. StellaJiang333 (talk) 05:51, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

@StellaJiang333 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:39, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 7/ Ruizhouruizhou

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited 2 articles this week. The first one is Internet of things. Here is the diff. I learned that decentralized finance could not only be used for financial currency speculation but also help upgrade traditional industries. The second one is 5G. Here is the diff. I know that the technology of 5g and the Internet of Things has yet to mature. In addition, the Operator cannot guarantee equipment safety at this stage.Ruizhouruizhou (talk) 13:21, 29 November 2022 (UTC)

@Ruizhouruizhou Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:42, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/XingboGao

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I edited Tesla Energy and Volcano. Here are diffs: diff1 and diff2. Doing this assignment not only let me how to edit Wikipedia but also teach me a lot of extra knowledge. I enjoyed doing it. XingboGao (talk) 23:55, 29 November 2022 (UTC)

@XingboGao Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 7 / Jaynean

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

For this week7 the two articles, I added citations about Online shopping and Digital marketing. Here are the diff and diff. In the process of editing this week, I find it much easier to summarize the gaps between articles. Jaynean (talk) 01:34, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

@Jaynean Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:45, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

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Week 5/ Janyu150

Latest comment: 1 year ago6 comments2 people in discussion

For week 5, I edited Adult education and Higher Education in the United States. Here is the diff for Adult education and here is the diff for Higher Education in the United States.

In the Adult education article, I added the fact that adult learner motivation also affects retention since the article only stated that it affected enrollment. I also cleaned up the second paragraph in the second paragraph of the Challenges and motivating factors section so that the paragraph was less verbose and more clear.

In the Higher Education in the United States article, I added another contributing factor to declining enrollment which I found to be declining state budgets in higher education institutions.

In this process, I didn't know state budgets also affected declining enrollment and I also learned how to provide clarity in my article writing since I tend to be verbose.--Janyu150 (talk) 04:59, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

@Janyu150 Your first edit was reverted, and I agree with the comment. Can you please clarify what point you were trying to make and explain it further in the article, or work on a different one and ping me here again when done and I will review? FULBERT (talk) 01:39, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT
I still see my edits in the article and it looks like their comments were reverted or removed because I don't see their comments so I'm not sure what was said or they took back what they said. I was trying to say that when adult learners are motivated with pursuing their education, it not only affects enrollment in higher education programs but it also affects retention. I felt it was important to include the word retention and discuss retention because a higher education institution's livelihood not only relies on enrollment but also retention. This is the sentence where I included retention "Meanwhile, research illustrates that understanding the motivations and barriers of adult learners can increase their enrollment and retention." ~~ Janyu150 (talk) 05:05, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
@Janyu150 Two of the words you used remain in the second article, so please add more and a citation or assign and edit another article for this week. You can have an extension on this if needed. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 00:43, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Thank you professor! I am done with my edits. This time I edited the Adult Education in a different section. Here is the diff I added two sentences about other institutional barriers that adult students face and a citation to support my sentences. Janyu150 (talk) 04:21, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
@Janyu150 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:38, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/XingboGao

Latest comment: 1 year ago11 comments2 people in discussion

I edited two articles, Digital transformation and Digitization. Here are their diff and diff2. This time, I added ciataion more skillfully and learned about digitization through this assignment. XingboGao (talk) 09:28, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

@XingboGao You have not completed the previous weeks' assignments as requested. Please do those before I review this one. Ping me here when complete and I will review.  FULBERT (talk) 01:57, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I think I have completed all the assignments. If I have missed anything, please remind me. Thank you. XingboGao (talk) 00:13, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
@XingboGao As you are several weeks behind and have various edits across several archive pages, please create a new section here and link to the weeks you want me to check, and I will review all at once. FULBERT (talk) 01:36, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT
I put all assignments here.
Week 1: Hi, this is Xingbo Gao. Actually, I don't use Wikipedia very often because almost all the professors don't allow me to use it. However, I am willing to learn relevant knowledge. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
Week 2:The article I edited is Lottery. Here is the diff. A sentence in the article needed citation, so I added it. Regarding the lottery rule, there is no evidence to prove it in the article. This assignment made me understand how to modify a Wikipedia article. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
Week 3: This week I edited an article named Government revenue. Here is the diff. I read this article carefully, which mainly introduces the revenue of the government. One paragraph show the government's tax revenue. However, I found that lottery tax revenue was not among them. So I added it in the paragraph. I make the government's taxes more comprehensive in this article. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
Week 4:I edited Chinese tea this week and I added some information about tea therapy. Here is the diff. After this editing, I know that in order to change the article, you have to have proof. I can't edit Wikipedia until I find strong evidence in the database. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
Week 5: I edited two articles, Digital transformation and Digitization. Here are their diff and diff2. This time, I added ciataion more skillfully and learned about digitization through this assignment. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
I'm sorry that you have to review my assignments. Thank you, professor. XingboGao (talk) 04:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
@XingboGao Nice edits. Current with Weeks 1, 2, 3, 4, & 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:41, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Rt2510

Latest comment: 1 year ago4 comments2 people in discussion

The first article is PayPal. Here is diff. I added a sentence to make the introduction more detailed.

The second article is Venmo. Here is diff. I added a sentence to make the introduction more detailed.

I discover the origins of the electrical payment system.

Rt2510 (talk) 02:12, 27 November 2022 (UTC)

@Rt2510 I agree with the second editor's revert of your edit, as it seemed a marketing opinion and thus not credible information. Please either add something of more substance to the second article or assign and edit an additional article. You can take until the end of the week for this edit if needed. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 00:52, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
This is my new article, Twitch (service). here is diff. I add more specific game genre example for this article. @FULBERT Rt2510 (talk) 00:51, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
@Rt2510 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 15:44, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/BL33701

Latest comment: 1 year ago4 comments2 people in discussion

I edited the Non-fungible token this week. Here is the diff. Added speculation to NFT and added citations. Learned about the risks of NFT money laundering. The second article is Cash. Here is the diff. Added a citation for digital currency. And learn about the history of coins.BL33701 (talk) 16:12, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

@BL33701 Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
I made a new modification in Cash. This is diff. Please let me know if there are any more problems, thank you very much!BL33701 (talk) 04:26, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
@BL33701 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 15:45, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 7/JayHTCVPN

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Hi, this week I edited two articles. The first is Culinary arts, and here is the diff. The second is Obesity in Indonesia, and here is the diff. What I would like to share is that when I researched related sources for Wikipedia articles, I added my thinking journey to the research. I can learn new knowledge through the whole process, such as trends and news around the world. There is one more week to edit. Cheer up! JayHTCVPN (talk) 07:59, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

@JayHTCVPN Your second edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:49, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 7 / Riven3388

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

The ariticle I add the citations are about the Aging of China and Family planning policies of China. I add the part of detail about the reason leads to the population problems in China. Here are the Diff and Diff.Throughout the citation again, I think I am getting better in adding a citation to the article. I hope the work could provide more information and better understanding to the reader. Riven3388 (talk) 13:19, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

@Riven3388 Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 15:53, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 7/WZ2372

Latest comment: 1 year ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Hi, this week I edited Gender equality and Aurora this week, and here are the diff1 and diff2. I added more detailed information and citations to these two articles. I am more familiar with editing Wikipedia and hope my work is helpful.WZ2372 (talk) 15:20, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

@WZ2372 Nice edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 15:55, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
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