Talk:Tropical Storm Dalila (2007)

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Saw your post on Hurricanehink's talk page. First, no need for subheaders in the SH. Also, remove the duplicate impact section. Any more impact? Surely 60 mph caused some damage. References need formatting, and the prose is in need of a copyedit. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 20:40, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Tempted to give it Stub; Start for now. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 21:00, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

More info. This article should be around or close to 20 kb when it it all done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:14, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC) I will review more fully tomorrow, but for starters, here has more information. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• "On the mainland of Mexico, the outerbands" wikilink to rainband. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Please use TWO's in the MH.

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

• What was Dallia's forecast peak? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Done--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• When the the NHC re-assess the intensity of the storm to say 45 knots? the MH is a bit short for a very recent storm that was not /that/ short-lived. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• What are you asking me to do here?--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• How close did it comer to Socorro Island. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Oops, I said it in the lede but not the MH.--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, causing weakening and disorganization of the cloud pattern.[5] " to "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, resulting in weakening as the cloud pattern became less organized.[5] " YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Why was Dallia declared a remnant low? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• Change the "Impact" header to "Impact and aftermath". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports of deaths or damage.[1] " to "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports any deaths or damage.[1] "

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• "As the storm weakened, it produced rough seas and heavy rains over parts of Baja California Sur.[7] " mention this towards the end of the impact YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

• Any red/green/blue alerts for MX (the above link in the start of the review should have that)? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• There were some blue alerts, according to one of the newspaper articles.--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

• Where in particular (what cites were there impact). YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Nope, I couldn't find that out--12george1 (talk) 03:39, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

• Any damage total? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Nope--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Link to newspapers in refs if applicable. 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Ill find you more impact links later. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

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