Talk:Tropical Storm Dalila (2007)/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC) I will review more fully tomorrow, but for starters, here has more information. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- "On the mainland of Mexico, the outerbands" wikilink to rainband. YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- Please use TWO's in the MH.
- When the the NHC re-assess the intensity of the storm to say 45 knots? the MH is a bit short for a very recent storm that was not /that/ short-lived. YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, causing weakening and disorganization of the cloud pattern.[5] " to "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, resulting in weakening as the cloud pattern became less organized.[5] " YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- Change the "Impact" header to "Impact and aftermath". YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports of deaths or damage.[1] " to "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports any deaths or damage.[1] "
- "As the storm weakened, it produced rough seas and heavy rains over parts of Baja California Sur.[7] " mention this towards the end of the impact YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- Any red/green/blue alerts for MX (the above link in the start of the review should have that)? YE Pacific Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
- Link to newspapers in refs if applicable. 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)